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Get a pic up
@Lenox
Fresh
Lenox
10 lines
Due in 48 hours
Get a pic up
@Lenox
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Last edited by Fresh; September 9th, 2014 at 04:33 PM
@Lenox get that pic up son
@Lenox lets do this homie
Last edited by Fresh; September 10th, 2014 at 04:14 PM
Ok let me start by saying that I'ma fucking destroy this beginner, fact
I'll have him flatlining, so don't be caught off guard from his 'net' which is in the black
You little emo faggot, I bet you contemplating suicide dude
Cuz' those eyes are concealing thoughts darker than the shadow behind you
Is that a cave you live in? Man your parents sure must be rotten
And make no mistake, cause judgin by this pic you'll never be able to top them
You ain't about that life, you'll never commit a crime this kid is just boring
Cause if he does then this perp'll get layed out like that shirt in the morning
Look at this fruitcake, I just wanna fucking deck him in the face
You're so gay, you'd stand out in a room of faggots... Like that freckle on ya face
@Lenox what u got son
Caught a quick glimpse at the picture, the odds it ain't him is a tough bet,
He's a faggot, that trend spread quicker then emo kids listening to dub step,
You look robotic as fuck, from outer space is where they found ya,
Wouldn't be surprised if adult swim
Sued him for looking like bender from Futurama,
Fresh, you look like a pale fuck, get some food and stop being a faggot fucker,
Duke has the same body complexion of a raped African Mother,
Dude looking like a homo, claims he has lots of confessions,
So I guess the reason why the fuck he has a lip ring is out of the question,
I swear fresh is an actual faggot, "I'm a vet" no, you're plane to the core,
He's so much of a fruit cake he makes Elton John not wanna be gay anymore
VsYou ain't about that life, you'll never commit a crime this kid is just boring
Cause if he does then this perp'll get layed out like that shirt in the morning
Look at this fruitcake, I just wanna fucking deck him in the face
You're so gay, you'd stand out in a room of faggots... Like that freckle on ya face
Lenox is showing significant progression but just isn't there yet. I was feeling his first two bars, although they weren't hard hitting punches. Once I got to the Raped African Mother line I felt he crossed a line that he shouldn't have. His closing bar was by far the funniest of his verse but Fresh still out punched him and was a little bit wittier with the personals and punches.I swear fresh is an actual faggot, "I'm a vet" no, you're plane to the core,
He's so much of a fruit cake he makes Elton John not wanna be gay anymore
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You ain't about that life, you'll never commit a crime this kid is just boring
Cause if he does then this perp'll get layed out like that shirt in the morning
vs
I swear fresh is an actual faggot, "I'm a vet" no, you're plane to the core,
He's so much of a fruit cake he makes Elton John not wanna be gay anymore
Ok battle here, I feel like Fresh wasn't going near 100% tho.. a lot of his bars fell flat but he had this one and the freckle one was a near quote. Lenox is looking better, I liked a couple of his concepts but unfortunately the wording on them still held them back. On the quote the finisher wasn't worded great but for some reason I liked the opener and there was enough sting on the end to make it quoteworthy imo. Keep at it Lenox, you're miles ahead of where you were
V/Fresh
You ain't about that life, you'll never commit a crime this kid is just boring
Cause if he does then this perp'll get layed out like that shirt in the morning
Look at this fruitcake, I just wanna fucking deck him in the face
You're so gay, you'd stand out in a room of faggots... Like that freckle on ya face
vs.
elton john was ok
got fresh taking this battle with harder hits.. lenox is gettin better. just keep working.. fresh had more consistency and fresher punches.
vote - fresh
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fresh-
Ok let me start by saying that I'ma fucking destroy this beginner, fact
I'll have him flatlining, so don't be caught off guard from his 'net' which is in the black
...coo...
You little emo faggot, I bet you contemplating suicide dude
Cuz' those eyes are concealing thoughts darker than the shadow behind you
...nice...
Is that a cave you live in? Man your parents sure must be rotten
And make no mistake, cause judgin by this pic you'll never be able to top them
...good...
You ain't about that life, you'll never commit a crime this kid is just boring
Cause if he does then this perp'll get layed out like that shirt in the morning
...nice nice...
Look at this fruitcake, I just wanna fucking deck him in the face
You're so gay, you'd stand out in a room of faggots... Like that freckle on ya face
... lol love it...
vs.
Lenox-
Caught a quick glimpse at the picture, the odds it ain't him is a tough bet,
He's a faggot, that trend spread quicker then emo kids listening to dub step,
...good setup, bad punch....
You look robotic as fuck, from outer space is where they found ya,
Wouldn't be surprised if adult swim
Sued him for looking like bender from Futurama,
...again setup aight, no punch...
Fresh, you look like a pale fuck, get some food and stop being a faggot fucker,
Duke has the same body complexion of a raped African Mother,
...nah...
Dude looking like a homo, claims he has lots of confessions,
So I guess the reason why the fuck he has a lip ring is out of the question,
...almost but nah...
I swear fresh is an actual faggot, "I'm a vet" no, you're plane to the core,
He's so much of a fruit cake he makes Elton John not wanna be gay anymore
...nah, I see where youre going but bad wording...
v/ fresh....came harder and had better setups and concepts. lenox is improving but the wording was off.
You ain't about that life, you'll never commit a crime this kid is just boring
Cause if he does then this perp'll get layed out like that shirt in the morning
Look at this fruitcake, I just wanna fucking deck him in the face
You're so gay, you'd stand out in a room of faggots... Like that freckle on ya face
Vs
Elton John gay
This was a decent battle. Lenox is deff getting better. Elevation is scary. But his wording was off and had allot of misses. I got more quotes with fresh in this battle though. Stay up
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