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[Boy Bourne]

The power of 3, if only you could see what it's truly worth
They say that 3 is the mystery that unifies the universe

Whether it's the trinity of Christianity, or the Hindu trimorty religion
It's all based off 3. I possess this addiction like hermes trismegistus
Times confusing, a mind like Isaac Newton with more devotion
1st law inertia, 2nd law f=ma 3rd law equal & opposite.. 3 Laws of Motion
The alchemist.. A squared + B squared = C squared, I'm fighting for this
All in 3. I discovered this like Greek mathematician Pythagorus
More knowledge of 3 than the emerald tablets astonishment
Beyond a common sense..3 like the Giza plateau trio of monuments
Seems devoted even folklore mythology is 3 in each component
3 amigos, 3 musketeers, 3 wise men and the 3 pagodas
3 little piggies, singing 3 heartbeats anthem for the 3 stooges
Even the 3 blind mice could see their was 3 godfathers given 3 strikes in ruling
Past, present, future life seems based off of each stage
Remember in Genesis.. waters deprecated from earth after 3 days

This is sacred text. So remain convinced of...

The power of 3, if only you could see what it's truly worth
They say that 3 is the mystery that unifies the universe

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[Boy Bourne]

Gotchu fam

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[OG Maestro]

This was an enjoyable theme, you should really do some extensive research & delve deep as possible on this.
It could capture the attention of many writers on this site, if you bring more to the table for us.
In its current state, it's fine though.

Some constructive criticism, your 6th bar had awesome leverage potential but it was stretched due to the specifying of each law. "f=ma, etc".
When you do pieces similar to this, just hit us with the quick facts, don't go into the details.
& be confident, your audience is smart enough to follow it, trust me. & if they don't, they can find the answer in less than '3' seconds on Google lol

Keep bars like this in mind, in case you ever need a reminder for how to recreate great meter & meaning in your lyrics

Past, present, future life seems based off of each stage
Remember in Genesis.. waters deprecated from earth after 3 days

This was fresh tho son son, thanks for sharing this with us
Drop more often when you get the chance

[Boy Bourne]

Thanks man, much appreciated

[Boy Bourne]

Anymore feed?

[Fatrick Swayze]

hey gamble.

[Boy Bourne]

Sup