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    Picture this... (Sept. '14)



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    Re: Picture this... (Sept. '14)

    There once was a man on the moon,
    who's wildest dreams never came true.
    He choked and braced
    as he floats into outer space.
    And Orion's belt became his noose.

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    Re: Picture this... (Sept. '14)

    Full moon again and we’ve been wondering...
    If that man on that land can see us now
    Does he play a part in all our suffering?
    Or does he play violin when we are down?
    He has stars all around to keep him company
    Yet he won’t give us the brightest ones
    Mr Moon can’t you see, you are full tonight?
    Must be love in your heart that fills that hole
    Use your light to erase all this mystery
    And bring back to our heart what you stole
    You are full
    You’re complete
    You are beautiful
    We are half
    We are hurt
    We’re alone
    Mr Moon can’t you see what you’ve done to us?
    It’s not fair that we should feel this way
    You’ll be sad
    You’ll be sorry
    You’ll need sympathy
    When the half that you love goes away


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    Re: Picture this... (Sept. '14)

    in quiet contemplation I drift away
    peering at the bigger picture from afar
    my mind left cloudless
    as I rest among the stars

    in another space and of another time
    I float in controlled splendor
    grasping my soul and pulling it away
    from the inner demons I leave back in my shell

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    Re: Picture this... (Sept. '14)

    This is life's truest form, forming meaning for it all
    It's the answer for the reasons of the building of these walls
    Worth the paint, not the painting, more the climb, not the fall
    Right of reason rusts the right, religion reassures withdrawals

    We are all one but many, but, many naïve
    why would we exist if not meant to believe
    emotionally we perceive what we see
    when we simply refuse to retrieve energy

    Frequency rattles matter, "Sama Veda", illustrator
    past prophetic generator biological creator
    multi universal labour life's a forceful instigator
    radar races running riot feeding fear and fuelling failure

    Is a saviour in our favour for the answer to our dues
    Many million mindless mannequins are missing many clues
    Is it you? Energy is the only thing to lose
    Energy is in the stars and moon and god is merely me and you

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    Re: Picture this... (Sept. '14)

    when wonder waives penance & payment,
    expertise laid to sleep at the frayed extent of its leash-
    perhaps that is beauty.
    the stars field a barrage of questions,
    in line with an interrogation, ready,
    and no words come to mind.
    perhaps that is beauty.
    then, we paused at a hillside to
    watch the city retreat. flecks of dharma,
    torches crashing towards the fortress casted for
    the formal castle-born. ashes court the sea.
    candles on the channel, chasms form a creek,
    the television bleats a passion for cold receptions,
    you hesitate- but i get the impression that
    you would never leave.
    for you, i would never connect the dots
    I only stop by to look through you.





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    Re: Picture this... (Sept. '14)

    _cosmic love

    iridescent dripping essence
    - i can taste the hues,
    space: the view;

    i apologize for looking straight through you.
    sighs and skies, interspersed, shape an ancient tune
    we reprise every time i seem to wait for news.

    rhyme and reason, interchange, can't replace the two,
    nascent dew. tear drops. unearth a picture - painted boon:
    you were a drifter, star-gazer far greater than the sun of your
    parts. laid in clouds, or beyond, while i gazed at shoes.

    i'm grateful, too, if now only for the place we knew
    where we could never evade the truth, despite
    every tête-à-tête representing your face as new.

    space: the view.
    i can trace the few
    little remnants of quintessence.

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    Re: Picture this... (Sept. '14)

    Thanks to everyone who contributed this month. I'm going to have a new picture up some time this afternoon.
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