Moonlight Lullabies

[Nicasso]

Moonlight Lullabies
By, Niccolo
Repost from original site
Niccolo Archives

Chambered love had me bound
Drenched in romantic streamlets gold, security hugs found
Framed trellis of red encrusted with origami jealousy
Folded poetry forms a poetical dove, searching down eloquent corridors for unity
Razor blade kisses evoking an illustrious industry
Injustice gathered with iniquity shallow infamy
Attire of oriental silk robes flourished with an elevating flow
It falls towards marbled floors; gallantry begins its liaison show
Virginity, designing folds, pleasure scavenged
Secret halls of evolution, classified rape, roughly touched, a letter written to revenge
Stuck in a ravish vortex, scandalous mind burning with flaming scars
A false thank you to suicide that intervenes its dastardly plan, the time should have been ours
Guilt has you in its prison, locked you up and placed upon you a crown of thorns,
kindly thank your corroded decisions
And here I have to move on, despite the twisted dignity of inline betrayal
Hearts laced in denial are a more realistic portrayal
Moonlight lullabies drifts from between my scarred lips
Volcanic emissions of insecurity flow into the devil’s cup and spill from the tip
Blood trickles from the eyes to an asylum depth towards the heart's stairway
Mind swimming in harbored torture, yet, I deserve all of this, now back to reality

I am unsure the reason for my birth,
The reason to walk this earth

Yet supplied with beauties and glories
With heavenly clouds by day and at night crickets singing their stories
Every single negative riddle confuses my very conscious
Yet I want to live, I want to grow and bloom, for every human being life is precious
Emotions are tapped with evil recognition inclined inside a climax of mysteries, a murderous tradition
Lamented chapters, pages of affliction
The sky weeps in this place, here only exists sacred souls of romance and nighttime terror
But hope is near yet again, dash away the pebbles of sorrow, make no error
Clamp onto the comforting arm of harmony
Be enthused as you're washed up in a sunset of inky hues while holding tranquility
Shine bright, my own starlight survivor I am and will always be
You too are strong, sing with me our lullaby in the moonlight and be free
Let's stand together in each of life's battles
Row the darkness away with our pens the paddles
Strength lies within
Depression's crystal rosettes are a wilted sin

[Nicasso]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...87-Sing-to-you
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ed-Slug-Poetry

[Copycat]

This was a truly stunning writing great job you and @Johnny Soul just made my night with two unbelievable poems wowww thank you guys....The overall tone you gave us in this descriptive piece was top notch. The imagey was alone was on another level. Then the message that maybe over looked here added to the body of work. The word usage and vocab here was strong, what I also found enjoyable was that at times this even had a rhyme scheme that didn't take away from your work but added to it.

[Soule]

I like it. The wording was pretty smooth and the fiction choices were a breath of fresh air. I feel like your topicals and poetry aren't much different as far as structure and style goes. Which can hurt you in the leagues. I'd recommend writing in stanzas of 3, 4 or 5 lines. And changing up your wording a little in poetry. Make it more 'poetic' I guess. Otherwise it's a dope read. Keep it up.

[Emily]

I'll get to this soon

[Emily]

Niccolo, I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the way you worded yourself.
You had a lot of lines that stood out as special and unique, always a buzz to read.
A fresh approach is young and vibrant and rejuvenates.

"Framed trellis of red encrusted with origami jealousy
Folded poetry forms a poetical dove, searching down eloquent corridors for unity..."

That has beautiful imagery. 'Origami jealousy, and folded poetry...' Lovely wording.

"Attire of oriental silk robes flourished with an elevating flow
It falls towards marbled floors; gallantry begins its liaison show..." Woohoo, loving it. I'm a sucker for flow.

"Secret halls of evolution, classified rape, roughly touched, a letter written to revenge
Stuck in a ravish vortex, scandalous mind burning with flaming scars..."

The linking of detail gives us so much to go on. Word after word builds a bridge of wonderful description for us to walk across.

"Guilt has you in its prison, locked you up and placed upon you a crown of thorns,
kindly thank your corroded decisions..."--- Nice touch Niccolo. lol, very well put.

"Let's stand together in each of life's battles
Row the darkness away with our pens the paddles.." Even though you have some stunning bars, this IS my favourite, because you write about the writer, and well...you know. I love this sentence.


Niccolo, another heartfelt piece. You pour it out well.
You have atmosphere that backs up your piece and stays on track.
Your words are interesting and freshen a concept that's been played, but this time,
it's played your way.

Loving that style of yours.

Keep it up.

Great read.

[Mantra]

@Niccolo

24 hours to post your links or I close this.

[Nicasso]

@Niccolo

24 hours to post your links or I close this.

Sorry thought I did will now I Have them already

[English]

This was a truly stunning writing great job you and @Johnny Soul just made my night with two unbelievable poems wowww thank you guys....The overall tone you gave us in this descriptive piece was top notch. The imagey was alone was on another level. Then the message that maybe over looked here added to the body of work. The word usage and vocab here was strong, what I also found enjoyable was that at times this even had a rhyme scheme that didn't take away from your work but added to it.

is this 'Pat from NC/RF that rhymes far too much, and are/were you drunk?

i will come back to this, probably, if the mood strikes me.

[Laureate]

@Nicasso
What was this a repost from?

[Nicasso]

@Nicasso
What was this a repost from?

http://rapbattles.com/forum/search.p...e=vBForum_Post

Here some dagel guy accused me of stealing so I had to sign in on the original website (which is why I had to include that durning the investigation) for ILL long stroy short it was handled link above -