8 bars
Due 48
Rest is house
Killing spree
Joe boston
8 bars
Due 48
Rest is house
yo check good luck man
@Killing Spree
He's the women in the relationship bitches agree he couldn't be any gayer
Reason they ain't treating Spree well cuz he's more washed up then that basketball player
Watch as ur get skies grayer cuz everytime I drop it's torrential downpours
U need to elevate or they'll find ur body in one trapped on the ground floor
Right hands leaving ur body sore reality is u want no part of me
Right hands clear the smoke out ur ass like banning tabacco products from CVS Pharmacy
Remarkably my fashion is outshining urs have ur chick stripping out her blouse
Only time a bitch associated with killing their getting revenge on their spouse
I'll turn ur house into a broken home ur not used to living dysfunctional ways
Once that door opens I'm rushing in like Seattles defense all over Greenbay
It's not hearsay that ur game is weak everyone knows I'm bagging bitches across the globe
You continue to keep shopping Spree cuz really all bitches want from u is a new wardrobe
Your the type of fag who runs to flashing strobes even the jakes think ur lame
No one gives a fuck about the K R S in ur initials cuz you'll never live up to that rap icons name
There's no time for games here everyone know in this text shit I'm the god
So thinking u can beat me u done smoked urself retarted like Snoop dressing as Todd
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Last edited by Lamb Chawhp; September 5th, 2014 at 06:45 PM
@Killing Spree u still dropping????
Fuck. Ya I'll have my verse either tonight or tomorrow
My bad @Joe Boston
See...
joe u muffin soft n I got the munchies to win so I'll hit this cripple
Fuckin retard'll put laxatives in his weed snacks jus for shits & giggles
You comical, drown u in punches cos none of ya words be feared today
Battle be resulting with a dead joe'in river... Minus thirty years of age
Im'a hit jaws n crack teeth, you should hang wit dentist's
the tag tourney you proved to lack any bite & we ain't blaming Lenox
I fuck hoes n groupies, U know I'm workin ya bitch
Plus all ya write so ass that @kid sick would use ya verse for a sig
We know ya girl a mutant creature & don't stand a chance wen I lash out
I beat that pussy so bad, the thing grew teeth & arms to Scream & tap out!
Disobedient fuck! I crack a bone on u when ever you drop wack
So I'll pull ya spine out ya mouth just to make sure you never talk back!
Shots'll leave you twisted, joe u know you can't stand wit spree
I can't seem to bottle Jb bars, and I'm Known to drink whiskey
In my champ match? They say my "teeth had rhymes stolen"
In your champ match? P left you with nine broken!
@Fresh open this for votes
vote up please
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I expects more from both but was heavily disappointed. Joe lacked direction and dropped lines that had no meaning and used horrible wording that completely hindered the flow. Spree's opener gets this for me simply on the humor. Spree was also lacking in terms of direction and dropped a lot of unnecessary bars. The name drops also became annoying as they were completely irrelevant in my opinion.joe u muffin soft n I got the munchies to win so I'll hit this cripple
Fuckin retard'll put laxatives in his weed snacks jus for shits & giggles
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Lol uppin
He's the women in the relationship bitches agree he couldn't be any gayer
Reason they ain't treating Spree well cuz he's more washed up then that basketball player
Lazy flip on an old concept. Not feeling it
Watch as ur get skies grayer cuz everytime I drop it's torrential downpours
U need to elevate or they'll find ur body in one trapped on the ground floor
Cmon joe elevator has been done to death and I've even seen you use it lol.. The ray rices bitch / elvator punch u did was much better. Not to mention the set up didn't really tie in with the punch and this was a lazy execution.
Right hands leaving ur body sore reality is u want no part of me
Right hands clear the smoke out ur ass like banning tabacco products from CVS Pharmacy
Right hands gettin redundant, this was not a punch imo.
Remarkably my fashion is outshining urs have ur chick stripping out her blouse
Only time a bitch associated with killing their getting revenge on their spouse
light jab
I'll turn ur house into a broken home ur not used to living dysfunctional ways
Once that door opens I'm rushing in like Seattles defense all over Greenbay
u saying u can turn his house into a broken home, and that hes not used to living dysfuntional ways kinda disses urself. I sees how u tried to connect the set up with the punch but it really didn't correlate well. Seattle defense / greenbay had pottential but the wording and execution here killed any potential impact.
It's not hearsay that ur game is weak everyone knows I'm bagging bitches across the globe
You continue to keep shopping Spree cuz really all bitches want from u is a new wardrobe
mannn shopping spree had so much potential, but lazy wording hinders its potential again.
Your the type of fag who runs to flashing strobes even the jakes think ur lame
No one gives a fuck about the K R S in ur initials cuz you'll never live up to that rap icons name
KRS is a huge reach my man. If his initials were krs then this would work, but they aren't so it doesn't
There's no time for games here everyone know in this text shit I'm the god
So thinking u can beat me u done smoked urself retarted like Snoop dressing as Todd
you have to tie more angles in.. Like the fact todds a white guy / alter ego / I dunno any angles you can tie in with a conept is gonna help it have morpe impact in the end. This didn't hit for me.
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joe u muffin soft n I got the munchies to win so I'll hit this cripple
Fuckin retard'll put laxatives in his weed snacks jus for shits & giggles
wording kinda sucked but this was a light jab, I liked the concept tho lol
You comical, drown u in punches cos none of ya words be feared today
Battle be resulting with a dead joe'in river... Minus thirty years of age
words be feared today was forced, and u put it there to make the rhyme nice. I think if you focused more on connecting the angles to ur concept and less on multis, you'd be delivering better punches. this was a light jab tho.
Im'a hit jaws n crack teeth, you should hang wit dentist's
the tag tourney you proved to lack any bite & we ain't blaming Lenox
Nahh
I fuck hoes n groupies, U know I'm workin ya bitch
Plus all ya write so ass that @kid sick would use ya verse for a sig
cool conept worded horribly. this coulda been dope but execution hindering impact
We know ya girl a mutant creature & don't stand a chance wen I lash out
I beat that pussy so bad, the thing grew teeth & arms to Scream & tap out!
Not feeling this
Disobedient fuck! I crack a bone on u when ever you drop wack
So I'll pull ya spine out ya mouth just to make sure you never talk back!
nope
Shots'll leave you twisted, joe u know you can't stand wit spree
I can't seem to bottle Jb bars, and I'm Known to drink whiskey
this might have worked if worded right, but maybe not even don't really like the concept and it was worded bad
In my champ match? They say my "teeth had rhymes stolen"
In your champ match? P left you with nine broken!
not good to bring up the fact you got dqed for biting..
Well both you guys have to work on wording. Even if you have to pick apart a bar you wrote and rewrite it 10 times, itll help u in the end believe me. Sometimes one little angle to a concept is all you need to turn a mediocre bar into a haymaker. I've got KS taking this with a slightly better verse tho.
v/Killing Spree
It's not hearsay that ur game is weak everyone knows I'm bagging bitches across the globe
You continue to keep shopping Spree cuz really all bitches want from u is a new wardrobe
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I fuck hoes n groupies, U know I'm workin ya bitch
Plus all ya write so ass that @kid sick would use ya verse for a sig
^ lol I actually thought of the same exact concept the other day so you get a dope pass from me
I actually thought I had another quote from KS but I guess not. Joe could've had the Revenge on spouse bar & some others possibly but his worded was pretty bad throughout. Now Spree, your opener was weak. Joe'in Rivers was forced AF. Tbh the one I quote was the only decent bar you had, everything else was either wack or not worded well enough. That being said, Joe had the better misses so he got this.
v/Joe
Lol thanks for the feed @Letterman appreciate it
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