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Split Eight
, I'm a little late, but here's the feed.
Poetry works well with your style of writing. Your wording is great. I'm not exaggerating that either, it's great.
flushed an open void. swill, cup
solo read. a bad reminder, rushed
^^This section is particular I really liked, very crisp wording.
The ending gave me dem feels. It's hard to give constructive criticism on something like this though, because honestly I couldn't find anything wrong with it. Whenever I write 'poetry', it's still essentially the same type of post I'd make in the OM, only shorter. This had your distinct style, but this could be published right now. Srs.
Nicely done there, Splitty.