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You’re a spazz man, n sometimes I don’t think there’s a type that could be for worseOriginally Posted by Smog
Because if you were anymore spaced out, I’d wonder how the fuck your keyboard works
A nationwide traveler, you must see all kinds of nasty ratchet ho’s while drivin the rigs kid
You’ve actually got selection, but if you narrow it down we know it’s not the size of the bitches
You act like a G on the forums, but I can tell this mothafucka don’t live that ghetto life
I’ll squash the beef then turn u into minced meat, and get our differences settled right
You’re wack son, and you need to retire… A rapper is something we know ur not Smog
If we’re in the same ballpark, I just hit a grand slam while you’re in the parking lot selling hot dogs
You’re shit is such a stretch, it resembles a bungee rope after the second they push me
But it’s ironic you always come up short, like when you attempt to penetrate pussy
I’ll rip u up kid n get u ruptured quick, you sound like u suckin dick when u start to rap
So if they ever show-CASE ya material, he’ll probably puke and die from a heart attack
Last edited by Fresh; August 25th, 2014 at 12:06 PM
Last edited by Fresh; August 25th, 2014 at 01:10 PM
Opposites attract..ur relationship has problems cuz ur too identical,
i mean yall so alike ur both going down...U by punch n ur girl too my genitals,
In triple L shit was foul, we both lost like a missin child,
But I exchanged blows, n u blew so many kisses we were forced to pick a bitch or Gal,
In 1-2 U had a quoted punch then a bogus one, i knew this sucker would fall dead..
cK banged'em up till a gang a blood spilled...n he was covered in ALL red.
I'm on some frozen wrist clothing crisp shit.. My fuckin money's dumb..
If I wore ur gear, it be the first time I rocked fresh threads n looked like a grungy bum..
Ur not a fuckin success u rap like something's stuck in ur chest, n to see it hurts...
So if u ever recieve a pat on the back..it's cuz muafuckas believe that u need ta burp..
U fuck a no ass flat chested ho, plus u rap like a chump..
I mean fresh drops so much booty, u'd think his girl would have the nicest rump..
Ill get link within 24 hours @Fresh. .nice drop yo..
vsYou’re wack son, and you need to retire… A rapper is something we know ur not Smog
If we’re in the same ballpark, I just hit a grand slam while you’re in the parking lot selling hot dogs
You’re shit is such a stretch, it resembles a bungee rope after the second they push me
But it’s ironic you always come up short, like when you attempt to penetrate pussy
Smog has been showing significant progression as of late in 1-2, so I expected a little bit more here. He had a few concepts that I liked, but the way they were a little too wordy seemed to deteriorate the punch all together. Fresh usually comes with witty and funny punches but I wasn't feeling them in this one as I usually do. Fresh had more to quote here but I felt Smog had the better concepts but failed to execute. Overall I think it was really close, but Fresh edged it off.U fuck a no ass flat chested ho, plus u rap like a chump..
I mean fresh drops so much booty, u'd think his girl would have the nicest rump..
vote - Fresh
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Narrow it down, selling hot dogs
Vs
Exchanged blows, nicest rump
Even though I got it even in quotes, I enjoyed Fresh's drop more. Some of smogs shit was alil wordy. Takes away from the punch. Ok read overall.
V/Fresh
Fresh
You’re a spazz man, n sometimes I don’t think there’s a type that could be for worse
Because if you were anymore spaced out, I’d wonder how the fuck your keyboard works
light personal....
A nationwide traveler, you must see all kinds of nasty ratchet ho’s while drivin the rigs kid
You’ve actually got selection, but if you narrow it down we know it’s not the size of the bitches
Ha Ha ok
You act like a G on the forums, but I can tell this mothafucka don’t live that ghetto life
I’ll squash the beef then turn u into minced meat, and get our differences settled right
nah not feeling this
You’re wack son, and you need to retire… A rapper is something we know ur not Smog
If we’re in the same ballpark, I just hit a grand slam while you’re in the parking lot selling hot dogs
alright
You’re shit is such a stretch, it resembles a bungee rope after the second they push me
But it’s ironic you always come up short, like when you attempt to penetrate pussy
alright
I’ll rip u up kid n get u ruptured quick, you sound like u suckin dick when u start to rap
So if they ever show-CASE ya material, he’ll probably puke and die from a heart attack
Huh? dont get it
Smog
Opposites attract..ur relationship has problems cuz ur too identical,
i mean yall so alike ur both going down...U by punch n ur girl too my genitals,
nah homey
In triple L shit was foul, we both lost like a missin child,
But I exchanged blows, n u blew so many kisses we were forced to pick a bitch or Gal,
light personal
In 1-2 U had a quoted punch then a bogus one, i knew this sucker would fall dead..
cK banged'em up till a gang a blood spilled...n he was covered in ALL red.
this was slick I like it
I'm on some frozen wrist clothing crisp shit.. My fuckin money's dumb..
If I wore ur gear, it be the first time I rocked fresh threads n looked like a grungy bum..
lol alright
Ur not a fuckin success u rap like something's stuck in ur chest, n to see it hurts...
So if u ever recieve a pat on the back..it's cuz muafuckas believe that u need ta burp..
simple but it works light jab
U fuck a no ass flat chested ho, plus u rap like a chump..
I mean fresh drops so much booty, u'd think his girl would have the nicest rump..
lol idk this is funny
This wasn't a bad battle pretty close tho.. well imo Smog had less misses I guess its all about preference cause this could go either way but my vote goes to Smog
....Boss status....
You’re wack son, and you need to retire… A rapper is something we know ur not Smog
If we’re in the same ballpark, I just hit a grand slam while you’re in the parking lot selling hot dogs
Vs
Opposites attract..ur relationship has problems cuz ur too identical,
i mean yall so alike ur both going down...U by punch n ur girl too my genitals,
I'm on some frozen wrist clothing crisp shit.. My fuckin money's dumb..
If I wore ur gear, it be the first time I rocked fresh threads n looked like a grungy bum..
Ur not a fuckin success u rap like something's stuck in ur chest, n to see it hurts...
So if u ever recieve a pat on the back..it's cuz muafuckas believe that u need ta burp..
I feel like something was missing from a lot of fresh's bars. The come up short is played. I didn't get the showcase like. I get "narrow it down" and the size of the bitches but I don't see how it connects with the part about him driving trucks. I was actually feeling most of Smog's concepts, some just weren't executed well enough. I gotta go with Smog here
v/Smog
You’re a spazz man, n sometimes I don’t think there’s a type that could be for worse
Because if you were anymore spaced out, I’d wonder how the fuck your keyboard works
You’re wack son, and you need to retire… A rapper is something we know ur not Smog
If we’re in the same ballpark, I just hit a grand slam while you’re in the parking lot selling hot dogs
vs
In triple L shit was foul, we both lost like a missin child,
But I exchanged blows, n u blew so many kisses we were forced to pick a bitch or Gal,
In 1-2 U had a quoted punch then a bogus one, i knew this sucker would fall dead..
cK banged'em up till a gang a blood spilled...n he was covered in ALL red.
I'm on some frozen wrist clothing crisp shit.. My fuckin money's dumb..
If I wore ur gear, it be the first time I rocked fresh threads n looked like a grungy bum..
v/smog.
i thought his hits con nected lil better for me.. both had misses but smogs misses were more harsh
Fresh
You’re a spazz man, n sometimes I don’t think there’s a type that could be for worse
Because if you were anymore spaced out, I’d wonder how the fuck your keyboard works
You’re wack son, and you need to retire… A rapper is something we know ur not Smog
If we’re in the same ballpark, I just hit a grand slam while you’re in the parking lot selling hot dogs
these two bars were nice flips u also had a couple that could've been potential but the display of them wasn't worded harsh enough for that sting factor
Smog
Opposites attract..ur relationship has problems cuz ur too identical,
i mean yall so alike ur both going down...U by punch n ur girl too my genitals,
I'm on some frozen wrist clothing crisp shit.. My fuckin money's dumb..
If I wore ur gear, it be the first time I rocked fresh threads n looked like a grungy bum..
Both I felt had the same amount of hits I felt freshes hits had the better humor factor and overall more creativity on the flips
V/Fresh
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