LLL SEASON 17 PLAYOFFS
Semifinals
16 Lines
Due Thursday
LLL SEASON 17 PLAYOFFS
Semifinals
16 Lines
Due Thursday
The Last Level
The Last Level
Sup
カミノコトバ
Hello.
if @King is cool with it, gal asked for an extension (surprise surprise lol) and Im cool with it (another surprise)
カミノコトバ
I've been swamped at work, otherwise I'm almost always on time. (Damn you Wordz ahGod).
ya np
The Last Level
those predictions'll get ya bodied, id murder em' if we was in the same townOriginally Posted by Galactic in playoff chat
n give gal a layover the roof.. w one swoop he'll be counting stars on his way down.
bitch, my music could resurrect the site, ur CD'll get thrown like frisbee
bro I swear.. if ur in any track.. it'd better be stones going thru ur swollen kidney.
Im worth every bar nigga.. my frees could leave u scarred to minerals
Im a proven war vet who's busted guns.. Gals more like a dollar general.
I had the longest streak in this mess, found this league in distress
while u came w/ a new born identity n starved from a shitty formula to success.
scrawny faggot, ur tough talk is decieving thats why u'll catch this beating
listen, one punch will make gallfly so hard his face'll pollinate for insect breeding.
u've been in my shadow from the begining so we came to see a fan rhyme
people watched ur every footstep.. then saw ur torso explode after I land mine.
Im culturally balanced, while ur face would only lead to a chic macing ya'
fucking geek, it wouldn't take a trip to Cairo to see no bitch would give Galabia.
remember the SAP tourny? demoralized, u started to act girly when it finished
kid got bodied n after I punched out we clearly saw his heart was no longer in it.
from $pit to Feebs, my bars murder a fifth of leagues so lets address the elephant
see, my fresh concepts lay doubt to rest.. ur's try to defibrillate n keep his era relevant.
when NC rolled thru, ur cowardice was seen.. didn't want em' to bust up ur set
one look at Gal n dissapointed Aero.. that we all wished would puncture ur chest.
カミノコトバ
Dog I'm pissed. You proved bein a bitch is one of ya fuckin talents
So one punch'll fuckin spread the word quicker than the ALS ice bucket challenge
El oh el @ this fgt, he prob thinks about Amen when his D’s pushin
Cuz one hint that you’re Bicycle ride til there’s nothing left of the seat cushion
I get model bitches w/ long legs, I’m a pimp cuz I’m hot son
If he ever claims Tall Tale it’s just describing the story after thinkin he got some
Ya name has no clout yet you been around since biblical wars
It’s sad. Only time Wordz leave an impression is after being hit by a Ford
When the votes are in there’s no way you’re advancing, I’ll murder this fake
I mean, this battle is sure to end in a Poll.. but he’ll be the one burned at the stake
Gal is dope. Ya not nice w/ hands so ya wifes never down for sex
It’s ironic.. Allllllll this talk about takin G spot when you haven’t found it yet
I’ll make sure you look good when you die, and I'm choosin a skin suit
I’m dressed to kill, so when it comes to prop or a tire it's just the weapon I’m usin to kill you
I had a night out w/ my girl. A few drinks w/ friends, peakin around
Your idea of a night out is after ya wife gives you the boot & you sleep on the couch
Yea you won a few battles, but you been around FOREVER w/ nothin to show
It's funny how you let ya wins get to ya head, & we all just wish it'd fuckin explode
You don't build concepts, I've seen nothin clever from dude
And I think it's fuckin HILARIOUS how architecture style... & do it better than you
You better get all the wordplay, faggots.
Hidden Content:
Gal a layover, dollar general, galfly, land mine, lay doubt
Vs
ALS, tall tale, G spot, prop or a tire, architecture
Even in quotes. I think some of Gals shit was kinda played n some could of been worded better. I'm taking words for slightly better execution n misses. Good battle folks.
V/Words
Wordz AhGod
those predictions'll get ya bodied, id murder em' if we was in the same town
n give gal a layover the roof.. w one swoop he'll be counting stars on his way down.
nice...took a couple of reads
bitch, my music could resurrect the site, ur CD'll get thrown like frisbee
bro I swear.. if ur in any track.. it'd better be stones going thru ur swollen kidney.
dope punch right here
Im worth every bar nigga.. my frees could leave u scarred to minerals
Im a proven war vet who's busted guns.. Gals more like a dollar general.
nah too basic
I had the longest streak in this mess, found this league in distress
while u came w/ a new born identity n starved from a shitty formula to success.
besides the obvious error in grammar this is pretty clever
scrawny faggot, ur tough talk is decieving thats why u'll catch this beating
listen, one punch will make gallfly so hard his face'll pollinate for insect breeding.
lol good wordplay
u've been in my shadow from the begining so we came to see a fan rhyme
people watched ur every footstep.. then saw ur torso explode after I land mine.
oh get it now pretty good
Im culturally balanced, while ur face would only lead to a chic macing ya'
fucking geek, it wouldn't take a trip to Cairo to see no bitch would give Galabia.
when first read this was like wtf...but after i re read it this was nice name /wordplay
remember the SAP tourny? demoralized, u started to act girly when it finished
kid got bodied n after I punched out we clearly saw his heart was no longer in it.
nah not feeling this
from $pit to Feebs, my bars murder a fifth of leagues so lets address the elephant
see, my fresh concepts lay doubt to rest.. ur's try to defibrillate n keep his era relevant.
damn that's fresh
when NC rolled thru, ur cowardice was seen.. didn't want em' to bust up ur set
one look at Gal n dissapointed Aero.. that we all wished would puncture ur chest.
ok....closer
Galactic
Dog I'm pissed. You proved bein a bitch is one of ya fuckin talents
So one punch'll fuckin spread the word quicker than the ALS ice bucket challenge
damn son fresh
El oh el @ this fgt, he prob thinks about Amen when his D’s pushin
Cuz one hint that you’re Bicycle ride til there’s nothing left of the seat cushion
lol your wording is weird as fuck btw
I get model bitches w/ long legs, I’m a pimp cuz I’m hot son
If he ever claims Tall Tale it’s just describing the story after thinkin he got some
ha ha alright
Ya name has no clout yet you been around since biblical wars
It’s sad. Only time Wordz leave an impression is after being hit by a Ford
na not feeling this
When the votes are in there’s no way you’re advancing, I’ll murder this fake
I mean, this battle is sure to end in a Poll.. but he’ll be the one burned at the stake
I like it seems old tho but I don't care if concepts r played
Gal is dope. Ya not nice w/ hands so ya wifes never down for sex
It’s ironic.. Allllllll this talk about takin G spot when you haven’t found it yet
Rofl!!!
I’ll make sure you look good when you die, and I'm choosin a skin suit
I’m dressed to kill, so when it comes to prop or a tire it's just the weapon I’m usin to kill you
I had a proper attire concept written down. Nowhere near as good as this dope punch
I had a night out w/ my girl. A few drinks w/ friends, peakin around
Your idea of a night out is after ya wife gives you the boot & you sleep on the couch
Nah not feeling this
Yea you won a few battles, but you been around FOREVER w/ nothin to show
It's funny how you let ya wins get to ya head, & we all just wish it'd fuckin explode
no on this fam
You don't build concepts, I've seen nothin clever from dude
And I think it's fuckin HILARIOUS how architecture style... & do it better than you
Lol this wordplay been used but it fits the situation so good closer
Really enjoyed this battle...Dope shit in both verse...Words dope drop shit was super consistent btw,,tell me your secret nigga Gal when I saw your first punch I said damn wordz might lose but as read on you had a few more misses than that hurt you but it was a dope drop nonetheless
vote Wordz
....Boss status....
those predictions'll get ya bodied, id murder em' if we was in the same town
n give gal a layover the roof.. w one swoop he'll be counting stars on his way down.
haha yeea..
bitch, my music could resurrect the site, ur CD'll get thrown like frisbee
bro I swear.. if ur in any track.. it'd better be stones going thru ur swollen kidney.
nice
Im worth every bar nigga.. my frees could leave u scarred to minerals
Im a proven war vet who's busted guns.. Gals more like a dollar general.
cool on a humor tip
I had the longest streak in this mess, found this league in distress
while u came w/ a new born identity n starved from a shitty formula to success.
lol nice again
scrawny faggot, ur tough talk is decieving thats why u'll catch this beating
listen, one punch will make gallfly so hard his face'll pollinate for insect breeding.
Damn the wp mixed wit the pollinate was dope, worded well
u've been in my shadow from the begining so we came to see a fan rhyme
people watched ur every footstep.. then saw ur torso explode after I land mine.
Whew, ur on point right now bruh..
Im culturally balanced, while ur face would only lead to a chic macing ya'
fucking geek, it wouldn't take a trip to Cairo to see no bitch would give Galabia.
Worded was off IMO np/wp worked well tho
remember the SAP tourny? demoralized, u started to act girly when it finished
kid got bodied n after I punched out we clearly saw his heart was no longer in it.
This a lil soft IMO but I dig the personal
from $pit to Feebs, my bars murder a fifth of leagues so lets address the elephant
see, my fresh concepts lay doubt to rest.. ur's try to defibrillate n keep his era relevant.
Dope
when NC rolled thru, ur cowardice was seen.. didn't want em' to bust up ur set
one look at Gal n dissapointed Aero.. that we all wished would puncture ur chest.
Lol, cool wp... Pretty cool end to a solid ass verse bro
Vs...
Dog I'm pissed. You proved bein a bitch is one of ya fuckin talents
So one punch'll fuckin spread the word quicker than the ALS ice bucket challenge
Lol, yup
El oh el @ this fgt, he prob thinks about Amen when his D’s pushin
Cuz one hint that you’re Bicycle ride til there’s nothing left of the seat cushion
Lol, wp pretty cool
I get model bitches w/ long legs, I’m a pimp cuz I’m hot son
If he ever claims Tall Tale it’s just describing the story after thinkin he got some
Think this coulda been harsher but no doubt it's cool still
Ya name has no clout yet you been around since biblical wars
It’s sad. Only time Wordz leave an impression is after being hit by a Ford
Cool
When the votes are in there’s no way you’re advancing, I’ll murder this fake
I mean, this battle is sure to end in a Poll.. but he’ll be the one burned at the stake
Iight
Gal is dope. Ya not nice w/ hands so ya wifes never down for sex
It’s ironic.. Allllllll this talk about takin G spot when you haven’t found it yet
Dope son
I’ll make sure you look good when you die, and I'm choosin a skin suit
I’m dressed to kill, so when it comes to prop or a tire it's just the weapon I’m usin to kill you
Again nice wp worded pretty well too
I had a night out w/ my girl. A few drinks w/ friends, peakin around
Your idea of a night out is after ya wife gives you the boot & you sleep on the couch
Iight
Yea you won a few battles, but you been around FOREVER w/ nothin to show
It's funny how you let ya wins get to ya head, & we all just wish it'd fuckin explode
Lol, kinda cool
You don't build concepts, I've seen nothin clever from dude
And I think it's fuckin HILARIOUS how architecture style... & do it better than you
Dope closer
First off good showing to both... Entertaining battle y'all.. Muafucka well both y'all didn't really have any real misses here couple light jabs but IMO feel like gal had 1 or 2 more of those light jabs then wag so based on consistency n strength of verse I feel like wag edged this but not by a lot..this was a pleasure to read y'all from both sides y'all really attacked well but damn yeah I got wag up on this a lil...
Props
Vote wag
wordz
those predictions'll get ya bodied, id murder em' if we was in the same town
n give gal a layover the roof.. w one swoop he'll be counting stars on his way down.
nice creative nameplay like the Gallalieo reference however u spell his name lol
bitch, my music could resurrect the site, ur CD'll get thrown like frisbee
bro I swear.. if ur in any track.. it'd better be stones going thru ur swollen kidney.
dope flip
Im worth every bar nigga.. my frees could leave u scarred to minerals
Im a proven war vet who's busted guns.. Gals more like a dollar general.
felt it was am ok punch but the sting factor wasn't there for me
I had the longest streak in this mess, found this league in distress
while u came w/ a new born identity n starved from a shitty formula to success.
ok comcept could've worded it better though
scrawny faggot, ur tough talk is decieving thats why u'll catch this beating
listen, one punch will make gallfly so hard his face'll pollinate for insect breeding.
lol nice nameplay creative direct hit
u've been in my shadow from the begining so we came to see a fan rhyme
people watched ur every footstep.. then saw ur torso explode after I land mine.
dope flip nice wordplay
Im culturally balanced, while ur face would only lead to a chic macing ya'
fucking geek, it wouldn't take a trip to Cairo to see no bitch would give Galabia.
cool idea I felt this could've been executed better due to the wording
remember the SAP tourny? demoralized, u started to act girly when it finished
kid got bodied n after I punched out we clearly saw his heart was no longer in it.
soft personal
from $pit to Feebs, my bars murder a fifth of leagues so lets address the elephant
see, my fresh concepts lay doubt to rest.. ur's try to defibrillate n keep his era relevant.
nice good wordplay too
when NC rolled thru, ur cowardice was seen.. didn't want em' to bust up ur set
one look at Gal n dissapointed Aero.. that we all wished would puncture ur chest.
ok personal good flip on the name
Gal
Dog I'm pissed. You proved bein a bitch is one of ya fuckin talents
So one punch'll fuckin spread the word quicker than the ALS ice bucket challenge
dope current event punch
El oh el @ this fgt, he prob thinks about Amen when his D’s pushin
Cuz one hint that you’re Bicycle ride til there’s nothing left of the seat cushion
lmfao nice wordplay ive seen the wordplay before but this was humorous how u displayed it
I get model bitches w/ long legs, I’m a pimp cuz I’m hot son
If he ever claims Tall Tale it’s just describing the story after thinkin he got some
lol nice wordplay funny flip
Ya name has no clout yet you been around since biblical wars
It’s sad. Only time Wordz leave an impression is after being hit by a Ford
nah
When the votes are in there’s no way you’re advancing, I’ll murder this fake
I mean, this battle is sure to end in a Poll.. but he’ll be the one burned at the stake
wasn't feeling this flip
Gal is dope. Ya not nice w/ hands so ya wifes never down for sex
It’s ironic.. Allllllll this talk about takin G spot when you haven’t found it yet
nice flip lmao
I’ll make sure you look good when you die, and I'm choosin a skin suit
I’m dressed to kill, so when it comes to prop or a tire it's just the weapon I’m usin to kill you
creative as fuck wordplay good shit
I had a night out w/ my girl. A few drinks w/ friends, peakin around
Your idea of a night out is after ya wife gives you the boot & you sleep on the couch
ok flip not very effective though
Yea you won a few battles, but you been around FOREVER w/ nothin to show
It's funny how you let ya wins get to ya head, & we all just wish it'd fuckin explode
played concept
You don't build concepts, I've seen nothin clever from dude
And I think it's fuckin HILARIOUS how architecture style... & do it better than you
nice wordplay here good closer
wordz good opener. dope flip 2nd bar. gallify nameplay was dope. landmine wp flip was dope. era relevant wordplay n personal was cool. closer was nice also.
Gal nice opener with the current event. bicycle line lmao good woodplay flip. tall tale was funny. g spot was cool. prop or tire was dope as fuck very creative. closer was ok.
I think quotable wise was even both were creative as fuck had some nice ass punches. I felt wordz was more on the creative aspect within his wordplay. gal had more humor factor. I felt wordz was more consistent here I give this to him for like I said he was more creative his hits stood out more
V/Wordz
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