PLAYOFFS
Round 1
CHECK INS DUE WEDNESDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE FRIDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
Each participant is required to vote on a minimum of 4 Battles
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PLAYOFFS
Round 1
CHECK INS DUE WEDNESDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE FRIDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
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Failure to comply will result in vote deductions
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this like round 12 for us bro lmao.
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Serious you and know p
ur da dreamer type, I don't believe da hype so I'll slip spree da knife
n it'll terraform big enough thru this faggots chest to bring em' bacterial life.
Last edited by Wordz AhGod.; August 13th, 2014 at 01:31 PM
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Something about writing on the phone sucks man... Good luck
Ya game with chicks is puppy love & dog, you bitch-less...
So if you ever chasing tail? you'll get cut!... S'why WAG is non existent!
Wag decent concept, good wordplay, there's something missing tho I can't put my finger on it. I guess the opener seemed weak compared to what the punchline actually packed.. All in all not pretty decent tho
Spree you had a dope concept, but your wording made it mehhh.. The non existant part thru me off and took awawy from the punch. Not bad tho dude, just need to work on executing the shit better. Also, stop with the ! at the end of every punch! I can't stand those exclamation marks!
This is closer than I thought it would be, but I've got wag taking this with a more creative approach and a better execution.
v/wag
Good round. Close round.
Spree came nice, good imagery, concept and wordplay.
Words was nice also. Good concept as well.
I gotta lean towards words tho, although kills concept was better IMO, words just hit a little harder
Vote words.
But good shit spree
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
Multies complimented the wordplay nicely, punch could have been more effective but I felt you ran with creativity.ur da dreamer type, I don't believe da hype so I'll slip spree da knife
n it'll terraform big enough thru this faggots chest to bring em' bacterial life.
Wordplay was a bit choppy but I liked where you were going concept wise, but it could have been polished up slightly better. The punch itself appeared a little forced in delivery but nonetheless I still enjoyed the concept you were going for.Ya game with chicks is puppy love & dog, you bitch-less...
So if you ever chasing tail? you'll get cut!... S'why WAG is non existent!
Vote - Wordz Ahgod.
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I thought both these were quite creative. Words has some cool word play, so did KS. so ima just vote for the line i liked more and it was words one.
V. werds
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Cool battle, KS came with a nice flip in his punch. I liked the way it flowed but felt it was less directed as wordz came in this one.
Vote wordz for better execution.
I like both from a creative standpoint... I just feel like wag executed his bar smoother for mor a impact... Spree just needs to cut the chopped parts out a lil in his punch n he'll be clean.. Good shit..
Vote wag
Wordz Ahgod. Wins, closed.
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3 votes deducted from Killing Spree
Wordz Ahgod. (6)
Killing Spree (-3)
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