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August 5th, 2014, 06:43 PM
#1
ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City (Sho Wins)
LLL SEASON 17 PLAYOFFS
Round Two
14 Lines
Due MONDAY
Last edited by King; August 6th, 2014 at 10:41 AM
The Last Level
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August 6th, 2014, 12:00 AM
#2
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City
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August 6th, 2014, 12:34 PM
#3
YOU cant fuck wit me
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City
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August 12th, 2014, 12:42 AM
#4
YOU cant fuck wit me
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City
All your wins come from no shows..Nothin to do with your rhyme schemes
You're the only murda I know...where no one's ever found dead at the crime scene
I'll blow up ya spot clean...my verses bring the heat w/ gas
If murda's ever on stage I'll fly to the sho and pay admission just to beat his ass
From your body your soul is fleeing fast...u shoulda never started shit
In this league your in a class of your own...like special ed retarded kids
My punches pack the hardest hits...your reputation is such:
Fresh says your wack, spree says u suck...and even go rilla thinks u monkey around too much
You'll never be convicted of being raw...the evidence lacks in court
If you ever came with dope lines...I'm the boss that fucked u up when u came back short
In your champ match u got crushed...wordz of god made u his bitch
He exorcised u like a demon...only thing missing was holy water and a crucifix
Nigga yous a trick...u aint shit but a typical fuck boy
Next week there'll be no sho all week and the league will erupt with joy
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August 12th, 2014, 12:44 AM
#5
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City
I'm posting gimme a lil bit just got in b
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August 12th, 2014, 01:30 AM
#6
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City
Aww man..
I've known some dope people with this name, so I was like holy shit!
But it turns out this is the first time I've met a sin that wasn't remotely sick
Almost had me bro, guess it's sad that u're losing badly though
Cause I've stacked the deck... with enough tables to slam u through the patio
U rap like a fool bitch, fuck performances u lack all the cool shit
So just stay in doors Cit, cause no one's willing to do that to ur music
Ur girl thinks she's tough well mine will beat that bitches ass till she breaks her arm
But whats a goon to a goblin... other than ur chick after she puts her make up on
It's funny u chose that name, u must be comfortable losing...
Cause at this point it's pretty black and white u have no idea what the fuck u're doing
Don't talk to me crazy, or I'll swell ur eyes till it's hard to see straight b
Either work on ur guard dog, or u'll need one to help u cross the street safely
But bruh it's sad, I heard of ur illness, I bet that shit is such a drag
His battle with aids is so epic it'd make King finally do a fuckin mag
Zip Him Up!!
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August 12th, 2014, 03:57 PM
#7
You've Earned a Custom Title!
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City (OPEN FOR VOTES)
All your wins come from no shows..Nothin to do with your rhyme schemes
You're the only murda I know...where no one's ever found dead at the crime scene
Seen a similar bar recently on him this season think it was pg but this iight..
I'll blow up ya spot clean...my verses bring the heat w/ gas
If murda's ever on stage I'll fly to the sho and pay admission just to beat his ass
Get the np, but bar kinda sounded like a eminem one..
From your body your soul is fleeing fast...u shoulda never started shit
In this league your in a class of your own...like special ed retarded kids
Ok fo a like bar not very hard tho IMO..
My punches pack the hardest hits...your reputation is such:
Fresh says your wack, spree says u suck...and even go rilla thinks u monkey around too much
Kinda funny, the go rilla part..
You'll never be convicted of being raw...the evidence lacks in court
If you ever came with dope lines...I'm the boss that fucked u up when u came back short
Ok..
In your champ match u got crushed...wordz of god made u his bitch
He exorcised u like a demon...only thing missing was holy water and a crucifix
Pretty cool
Nigga yous a trick...u aint shit but a typical fuck boy
Next week there'll be no sho all week and the league will erupt with joy
Like The no sho np but felt the ending coulda been harsher or better worded...
Vs
I've known some dope people with this name, so I was like holy shit!
But it turns out this is the first time I've met a sin that wasn't remotely sick
This cool np
Almost had me bro, guess it's sad that u're losing badly though
Cause I've stacked the deck... with enough tables to slam u through the patio
Ok..
U rap like a fool bitch, fuck performances u lack all the cool shit
So just stay in doors Cit, cause no one's willing to do that to ur music
The indorse it wp/np was pretty smooth I thought.
Ur girl thinks she's tough well mine will beat that bitches ass till she breaks her arm
But whats a goon to a goblin... other than ur chick after she puts her make up on
Ok, lol,
It's funny u chose that name, u must be comfortable losing...
Cause at this point it's pretty black and white u have no idea what the fuck u're doing
Iight
Don't talk to me crazy, or I'll swell ur eyes till it's hard to see straight b
Either work on ur guard dog, or u'll need one to help u cross the street safely
Ok
But bruh it's sad, I heard of ur illness, I bet that shit is such a drag
His battle with aids is so epic it'd make King finally do a fuckin mag
Ehhh.. Not diggin much..
Iight sin had a few misses here good ideas n a couple decent hits... Sho had s couple pretty nice barz np wp no real personals where sin had the one about his champ match n also some np...but I feel sin missed on a couple bars where sho might a had one I was feelin but stayed pretty consistent wit his verse which gives Him my vote.. Not bad y'all
Vote sho
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August 13th, 2014, 12:08 PM
#8
is back
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City
All your wins come from no shows..Nothin to do with your rhyme schemes
You're the only murda I know...where no one's ever found dead at the crime scene
I'll blow up ya spot clean...my verses bring the heat w/ gas
If murda's ever on stage I'll fly to the sho and pay admission just to beat his ass
You'll never be convicted of being raw...the evidence lacks in court
If you ever came with dope lines...I'm the boss that fucked u up when u came back short
vs.
I've known some dope people with this name, so I was like holy shit!
But it turns out this is the first time I've met a sin that wasn't remotely sick
Almost had me bro, guess it's sad that u're losing badly though
Cause I've stacked the deck... with enough tables to slam u through the patio
U rap like a fool bitch, fuck performances u lack all the cool shit
So just stay in doors Cit, cause no one's willing to do that to ur music
Don't talk to me crazy, or I'll swell ur eyes till it's hard to see straight b
Either work on ur guard dog, or u'll need one to help u cross the street safely
Cool verses from both. Sin, you had some nice stuff & Sho I liked yours too. I feel like Sho came a bit stronger though, and I have him with 1 more quotable. Cool battle.
V/ Sho
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August 13th, 2014, 12:52 PM
#9
I'll have the gabagool
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City (OPEN FOR VOTES)
All your wins come from no shows..Nothin to do with your rhyme schemes
You're the only murda I know...where no one's ever found dead at the crime scene
I wish you had have tied the set up in with the punch, but the punchline was on point.
I'll blow up ya spot clean...my verses bring the heat w/ gas
If murda's ever on stage I'll fly to the sho and pay admission just to beat his ass
This was cool
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I've known some dope people with this name, so I was like holy shit!
But it turns out this is the first time I've met a sin that wasn't remotely sick
Dope wordplay, executed nicely
U rap like a fool bitch, fuck performances u lack all the cool shit
So just stay in doors Cit, cause no one's willing to do that to ur music
This was cool man..
Don't talk to me crazy, or I'll swell ur eyes till it's hard to see straight b
Either work on ur guard dog, or u'll need one to help u cross the street safely
decent
Well Sin came in swinging, but it wasn't enough to strike down Sho's verse.. Good battle guys, but I've got sho takin this with a little bit more consistency and LOTB.
v/sho
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August 13th, 2014, 03:49 PM
#10
Kami no kotoba.
Re: ROUND 2: 5. Murda Sho vs 13 Sin City (OPEN FOR VOTES)
All your wins come from no shows..Nothin to do with your rhyme schemes
You're the only murda I know...where no one's ever found dead at the crime scene
its been done on him a few times this season
I'll blow up ya spot clean...my verses bring the heat w/ gas
If murda's ever on stage I'll fly to the sho and pay admission just to beat his ass
mehh, not harsh.. more like filler.
From your body your soul is fleeing fast...u shoulda never started shit
In this league your in a class of your own...like special ed retarded kids
coolish.
My punches pack the hardest hits...your reputation is such:
Fresh says your wack, spree says u suck...and even go rilla thinks u monkey around too much
nahhh, too wordy.. could have been dope.
You'll never be convicted of being raw...the evidence lacks in court
If you ever came with dope lines...I'm the boss that fucked u up when u came back short
nahh
In your champ match u got crushed...wordz of god made u his bitch
He exorcised u like a demon...only thing missing was holy water and a crucifix
could have been much harder.
Nigga yous a trick...u aint shit but a typical fuck boy
Next week there'll be no sho all week and the league will erupt with joy
I fucks with this, nice nameplay.. think the execution needed rewording tho.
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I've known some dope people with this name, so I was like holy shit!
But it turns out this is the first time I've met a sin that wasn't remotely sick
okish, could've ended it better.
Almost had me bro, guess it's sad that u're losing badly though
Cause I've stacked the deck... with enough tables to slam u through the patio
I fuck with this one. shit was dope.
U rap like a fool bitch, fuck performances u lack all the cool shit
So just stay in doors Cit, cause no one's willing to do that to ur music
good wordplay, had to go back and re-read it lol.
Ur girl thinks she's tough well mine will beat that bitches ass till she breaks her arm
But whats a goon to a goblin... other than ur chick after she puts her make up on
okayish, seen a few goon to goblin lines before but this felt like a fresh flip to me.
It's funny u chose that name, u must be comfortable losing...
Cause at this point it's pretty black and white u have no idea what the fuck u're doing
nahhh
Don't talk to me crazy, or I'll swell ur eyes till it's hard to see straight b
Either work on ur guard dog, or u'll need one to help u cross the street safely
nahh
But bruh it's sad, I heard of ur illness, I bet that shit is such a drag
His battle with aids is so epic it'd make King finally do a fuckin mag
nahh
this was a good battle, felt like sin let this one go though and maybe didn't think he needed much effort. Murda sho stepped his game up and had some nice bars.. that stacking deck table shit was LOTB to me.
v/Murda sho
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