LLL SEASON 17 PLAYOFFS
Round Two
14 Lines
Due MONDAY
LLL SEASON 17 PLAYOFFS
Round Two
14 Lines
Due MONDAY
Last edited by King; August 6th, 2014 at 10:42 AM
The Last Level
God dammit... Here...
Lol... you may win
What u talkin bout Willis I'm a slaughter u
Yo Arc ur worthless, far from perfect let the truth be free..
that only time we'll see a perfect arc, is watchin Dirk Nowitzki shoot a 3
Imma murder u, heard that u had an HOF piece.....Who wrote the verse fa U???
Cuz since then u ain't droped shit this sites seeing............as even being worth a view...
Fuck the shit he writes he admits he bytes, cats just ride this fag..originally posted by the archetype
Re: Week 13 Chat
Real shit... I stole Wordz's style when we started out lmao... then Ctrl Alt Elite stole mine
They say.. "Oh arc-he-types like none other..... " NOO dumb fucks he types like WAG..
Ur nothin fam, droppin barz u think cats dont understand..
Look..if ur punch goes over my head.. It's cuz the bitch DOESNT land..
Im strong at heart, n to be honest par ,when u post up my yawn'll start,
Cuz while u struggled fa positioning....I've been on top of keys ... BEYOND the arc..
I know ur anxious,but calm down ,cuz an overdose a deez barz'll get u killed..originally posted by the archetype
Lol... you may win
Listen.. One'll chill u out so much... U'll space gettin ur Xanax prescription filled...
If this seasons competitions was bunk, then champin triple L is his to be won..
N facin smog'll give him a great opportunity..............To change that title to "officially DONE.."
Last edited by King; August 11th, 2014 at 05:10 PM
Well...Originally Posted by Smog
How is this a fair paring when even he knows I'll embarrass him
Shit... that check in's admitting I'm Willis so he's coming up short by comparison
This beatdown? Obscene, bruh. It's a pity he's thinking that he's tough
This ain't just a cake walk... it's pastry slaughter when I stomp out this cream puff
My lines sever yours. You just found the path to being average. I'm better, Whore
As soon as he's on track one hit from me'll kill him like Kevin Ward
If I'm swinging fists... teeth thru the lips. Leave him screaming, pleading and shit
In battle I'm a War Machine... so it's been seen I have no problems beating a bitch
Fuck a left or right. You'll catch a slice. I'm far from shoddy with knives
Arch go the Dexter route. Toss pieces overboard like Monopoly fights
You're here cuz you battled the most. You champing? You're fucking kidding
This season your seeding's the equivalent of a participation ribbon
You got here on 6 no show wins... I champed the league in 6 straight
So this battle's the best of best versus the reason the league's needing a break
...blah...
Smog
Fuck the shit he writes he admits he bytes, cats just ride this fag..
They say.. "Oh arc-he-types like none other..... " NOO dumb fucks he types like WAG..
pretty cool personal...coulda been done better but so can every punchline ever written...lol
Ur nothin fam, droppin barz u think cats dont understand..
Look..if ur punch goes over my head.. It's cuz the bitch DOESNT land..
pretty cool...I imagined someone swinging and the punch being ducked
If this seasons competitions was bunk, then champin triple L is his to be won..
N facin smog'll give him a great opportunity..............To change that title to "officially DONE.."
decent way to end it...
Arch:
This beatdown? Obscene, bruh. It's a pity he's thinking that he's tough
This ain't just a cake walk... it's pastry slaughter when I stomp out this cream puff
pretty cool bar here...seen cake walk stuff but this was original...
You're here cuz you battled the most. You champing? You're fucking kidding
This season your seeding's the equivalent of a participation ribbon
this made me laugh a little...
You got here on 6 no show wins... I champed the league in 6 straight
So this battle's the best of best versus the reason the league's needing a break
pretty cool bar...liked the comparison in the last line...
Overall I think this was a really close battle...I think Arch got this on experience...Smog had some ok ideas for nameplays but they kinda fell through...the beyond the arch line was ok...but coulda been dope...if you woulda executed that bar better I think you would've edged the battle out...
v/ Arch
Arch
How is this a fair paring when even he knows I'll embarrass him
Shit... that check in's admitting I'm Willis so he's coming up short by comparison
You're here cuz you battled the most. You champing? You're fucking kidding
This season your seeding's the equivalent of a participation ribbon
You got here on 6 no show wins... I champed the league in 6 straight
So this battle's the best of best versus the reason the league's needing a break
Smog
Fuck the shit he writes he admits he bytes, cats just ride this fag..
They say.. "Oh arc-he-types like none other..... " NOO dumb fucks he types like WAG..
Ur nothin fam, droppin barz u think cats dont understand..
Look..if ur punch goes over my head.. It's cuz the bitch DOESNT land..
If this seasons competitions was bunk, then champin triple L is his to be won..
N facin smog'll give him a great opportunity..............To change that title to "officially DONE.."
Both had decent verses and i honestly came in here feeling like Arch was gonna body smog but I'm not sure if smog dropped better than what I thought or if Arch dropped worst than what I thought cause i haven't really caught a lot of their battles... anyway I got three punches from both and I liked two of Smogs more than Arch's so I'm gonna vote Smog here
psst >>>>
... fuck you
Ur nothin fam, droppin barz u think cats dont understand..
Look..if ur punch goes over my head.. It's cuz the bitch DOESNT land..
Im strong at heart, n to be honest par ,when u post up my yawn'll start,
Cuz while u struggled fa positioning....I've been on top of keys ... BEYOND the arc..
I know ur anxious,but calm down ,cuz an overdose a deez barz'll get u killed..
Listen.. One'll chill u out so much... U'll space gettin ur Xanax prescription filled...
vs.
My lines sever yours. You just found the path to being average. I'm better, Whore
As soon as he's on track one hit from me'll kill him like Kevin Ward
You're here cuz you battled the most. You champing? You're fucking kidding
This season your seeding's the equivalent of a participation ribbon
You got here on 6 no show wins... I champed the league in 6 straight
So this battle's the best of best versus the reason the league's needing a break
I had to read this a few times, cool battle. Despite "Beyond the Arc" having the potential to be LOTB, I think Arch had the better misses. Even in quotes, but I have Arch for consistency. Good battle, fellas.
Okay I have this scored 5-4 Arch. I don't recall seeing Smog as polished and intense as I've seen here. His best punches were doesn't land, WAG personal, and the officially done closer lotb. It was fierce. A really dope verse. Arch needed to bring the equivalent to make it close and he did just that. His best stuff was the league needing a break personal lotb, the war machine line lotb, and the kevin ward reference.
Really great showing on behalf of both guys but I have to give it to..
MVGT-Arch
GO FOR BROKE
this probably wasn't as bad as I expected it but arch took it easy here. Smog had some cool concepts but didn't take the time to word them, some of his nameplays were beyond played out too lol. Arch had some ok shit, nothing man slaughtering but enough for the W.
v/Arch
カミノコトバ
Yo Arc ur worthless, far from perfect let the truth be free..
that only time we'll see a perfect arc, is watchin Dirk Nowitzki shoot a 3
I would have changed perfect to decent, but this was cool
Fuck the shit he writes he admits he bytes, cats just ride this fag..
They say.. "Oh arc-he-types like none other..... " NOO dumb fucks he types like WAG..
I liked this
Ur nothin fam, droppin barz u think cats dont understand..
Look..if ur punch goes over my head.. It's cuz the bitch DOESNT land..
This was cool
vs
My lines sever yours. You just found the path to being average. I'm better, Whore
As soon as he's on track one hit from me'll kill him like Kevin Ward
clever
If I'm swinging fists... teeth thru the lips. Leave him screaming, pleading and shit
In battle I'm a War Machine... so it's been seen I have no problems beating a bitch
nice
You're here cuz you battled the most. You champing? You're fucking kidding
This season your seeding's the equivalent of a participation ribbon
haha
You got here on 6 no show wins... I champed the league in 6 straight
So this battle's the best of best versus the reason the league's needing a break
Nice way to end it
Cool battle gents. Smog came pretty decent here, I wasn't expecting him to come close in this battle, but he made it fairly close. I still got Arch takin this tho with one more quotable. Cool battle fella's, props to both.
v/Arch
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