ROUND 2: 3. Galactic Vs 11. Fresh (Gal Wins)

[King]

LLL SEASON 17 PLAYOFFS

Round Two

14 Lines

Due MONDAY

[Fresh]

I'm goin universe on this mothafucka

[Tic]

1-2 and LLL? Ugh.

[Fresh]

I’ll dispose of this man discretely, dude’s buggin if his plan’s to beat me
I mean, his text is so off the wall; it’s got me picturing some bad graffiti
Eating super foods, smoking weed and pussy are some things that make me tick
But there’s an easier way to make anyone tic… just gotta be fake and act gay as shit
Gal will tell you his material’s dope, so I’ma hafta be blunt
That theory is more off-base than a batter in left field… After the bunt
Fresh that dude, when I rap a round ppl pump fists cause that’s just how I spit
U couldn’t get a peep outta that faggot Elvis w/ ya lips wrapped around his dick
I’ve macked bitches my entire life, for u pussy may as well be vacuum sealed
Cause If a dime ever falls for you.. you’re $1.29 away from ur next value meal
I’m droppin haymakers left n right, they’ll be ending this bastard
Gal has dropped so many gay flips, it rivals those men in gymnastics
This foe’s a joke, one punch n his nose is broke then I’ll dead em in two
Half this faggots material is trash, and that’s just getting the better of you

[Tic]

Ayo upon first read, ya verse had me thinkin oh shit
…Fresh had some really dope hits….way back in ‘06
Faggot, hold this. Keep showin ya smug face on tape & this wigger will die
Bro if I see 1 more video battle I’ma rip the ring out ya nose til it swells bigger than mine
Lmao @ 1-2. That’s not how ‘talk’ sounds no matter how it’s read
Next time I’ll REALLY have an accent.. w/ enough force to take ya head off & pronounce you dead
Your girl is gross but she’ll fuck wherever I take the whore
While you’re gone I’ll give her a Lay over & above what you can, while you wait for yours
You’ll flail arms in a fight, you're a rookie dude
I punch w/ a heavy hand…you’re more like that butler from scary movie 2
My girls are perfect, from the face down to her feet & her toes
If it’s a tentacle fuck. Ya girl just looks like an octopus that's been beaten w/ those
I don't lose often, but w/ ya style? You can't hack, hater
Cuz ya loss column sets records that struggle to fit on an 8 track player

[Smog]

I’ll dispose of this man discretely, dude’s buggin if his plan’s to beat me
I mean, his text is so off the wall; it’s got me picturing some bad graffiti
Yup I picture bad graffiti to be off the wall too.. I like this..

Eating super foods, smoking weed and pussy are some things that make me tick
But there’s an easier way to make anyone tic… just gotta be fake and act gay as shit
I feel u but don't like the way it's worded..

Gal will tell you his material’s dope, so I’ma hafta be blunt
That theory is more off-base than a batter in left field… After the bunt
Ok..I mean that is definitely off base

Fresh that dude, when I rap a round ppl pump fists cause that’s just how I spit
U couldn’t get a peep outta that faggot Elvis w/ ya lips wrapped around his dick
Not digging this that much..think it coulda been better

I’ve macked bitches my entire life, for u pussy may as well be vacuum sealed
Cause If a dime ever falls for you.. you’re $1.29 away from ur next value meal
Lol... Ur a funny dude bruh...

I’m droppin haymakers left n right, they’ll be ending this bastard
Gal has dropped so many gay flips, it rivals those men in gymnastics
Iight..

This foe’s a joke, one punch n his nose is broke then I’ll dead em in two
Half this faggots material is trash, and that’s just getting the better of you
This cool

Vs...


Ayo upon first read, ya verse had me thinkin oh shit
…Fresh had some really dope hits….way back in ‘06
Not diggin this a whole lot

Faggot, hold this. Keep showin ya smug face on tape & this wigger will die
Bro if I see 1 more video battle I’ma rip the ring out ya nose til it swells bigger than mine
Lol, self defense plus attack.. This cool IMO

Lmao @ 1-2. That’s not how ‘talk’ sounds no matter how it’s read
Next time I’ll REALLY have an accent.. w/ enough force to take ya head off & pronounce you dead
To me that is how talks said but still u ended this bar well enough for a hit

Your girl is gross but she’ll fuck wherever I take the whore
While you’re gone I’ll give her a Lay over & above what you can, while you wait for yours
This cool

You’ll flail arms in a fight, you're a rookie dude
I punch w/ a heavy hand…you’re more like that butler from scary movie 2
Soft hit...coulda been nicer IMO

My girls are perfect, from the face down to her feet & her toes
If it’s a tentacle fuck. Ya girl just looks like an octopus that's been beaten w/ those
Iight

I don't lose often, but w/ ya style? You can't hack, hater
Cuz ya loss column sets records that struggle to fit on an 8 track player
Ok...

IMO this is pretty close I mean I didn't feel like both of y'all wrote to ur potential but here now I see it.. I liked fresh's opener n closer the rest was either light or misses I mean I'm pretty sure off the wall off base off the hook off the chart shit is pretty played as well as usin dimes as 10 cents/being broke although it was pretty funny... Gal I feel slipped on his opener Iean I see what u were doing but just felt real plain IMO..then u had a lil streak of bars that hit then a miss n a couple light jabs but overall based on consistency I feel gal edged this battle, not by much but yeah that's how I see it... Good shit y'all n props fa droppin early...

Vote Gal

[KnowP]

I’ve macked bitches my entire life, for u pussy may as well be vacuum sealed
Cause If a dime ever falls for you.. you’re $1.29 away from ur next value meal

vs


Lmao @ 1-2. That’s not how ‘talk’ sounds no matter how it’s read
Next time I’ll REALLY have an accent.. w/ enough force to take ya head off & pronounce you dead



not as close as it seems. just didnt see much dope punches from both. a few good lands n basic flips but nothing extremely dope. gotta judge it tighter in the Playoffs. felt the Gal landed some harder concepts with sloppy wording. Fresh had sloppy wording but most concepts were light. coulda dug harder on the personal level n flipped bars according to that.


v. gal

[$in City]

Fresh

I’ll dispose of this man discretely, dude’s buggin if his plan’s to beat me
I mean, his text is so off the wall; it’s got me picturing some bad graffiti

nice opener

Gal will tell you his material’s dope, so I’ma hafta be blunt
That theory is more off-base than a batter in left field… After the bunt

I liked this bar...nice wordplay

I’ve macked bitches my entire life, for u pussy may as well be vacuum sealed
Cause If a dime ever falls for you.. you’re $1.29 away from ur next value meal

this was pretty tight here

Gal

Lmao @ 1-2. That’s not how ‘talk’ sounds no matter how it’s read
Next time I’ll REALLY have an accent.. w/ enough force to take ya head off & pronounce you dead

Nice wordplay here...this was pretty tight

Your girl is gross but she’ll fuck wherever I take the whore
While you’re gone I’ll give her a Lay over & above what you can, while you wait for yours

Thought this was cool...

My girls are perfect, from the face down to her feet & her toes
If it’s a tentacle fuck. Ya girl just looks like an octopus that's been beaten w/ those

nice wordplay...pretty cool bar here...

Overall I have to admit I thought fresh was gonna get slaughtered here...but overall I liked his verse better...I feel like Gal just wrote a verse that he felt should've been good enough to win but a couple punches didn't really land for me...the rip out his nose ring line was pretty cool but might've been funnier if I knew how big your nose was...other than that it seemed to be mainly about u fuckin fresh's girl which is all nice and dandy but took some of the sting out of your verse. I feel like Fresh's verse was more diverse and came off more creative to me...

V/ Fresh

[murda sho.]

Gal

Ayo upon first read, ya verse had me thinkin oh shit
…Fresh had some really dope hits….way back in ‘06

Lmao @ 1-2. That’s not how ‘talk’ sounds no matter how it’s read
Next time I’ll REALLY have an accent.. w/ enough force to take ya head off & pronounce you dead
Your girl is gross but she’ll fuck wherever I take the whore
While you’re gone I’ll give her a Lay over & above what you can, while you wait for yours

Fresh

Eating super foods, smoking weed and pussy are some things that make me tick
But there’s an easier way to make anyone tic… just gotta be fake and act gay as shit

I’ve macked bitches my entire life, for u pussy may as well be vacuum sealed
Cause If a dime ever falls for you.. you’re $1.29 away from ur next value meal


This wasn't a bad battle both came swinging, Fresh your wording kinda messed up that graffiti bar or I woulda quoted it, i give the edge to Gal with one more bar that landed to me... should be close in votes though

[Wordz AhGod.]

Bad graffiti was cool, gay flips been done before,

Vs

Weak openner, I've used accent forever ago, lay over was worded weird, scary movie shit was weak,

Gal had no quotable.. fresh had one.. weak battle. Expected much more from yall.

V/fresh

[Letterman]

Eating super foods, smoking weed and pussy are some things that make me tick
But there’s an easier way to make anyone tic… just gotta be fake and act gay as shit
I’ve macked bitches my entire life, for u pussy may as well be vacuum sealed
Cause If a dime ever falls for you.. you’re $1.29 away from ur next value meal
This foe’s a joke, one punch n his nose is broke then I’ll dead em in two
Half this faggots material is trash, and that’s just getting the better of you

Vs

Lmao @ 1-2. That’s not how ‘talk’ sounds no matter how it’s read
Next time I’ll REALLY have an accent.. w/ enough force to take ya head off & pronounce you dead

My girls are perfect, from the face down to her feet & her toes
If it’s a tentacle fuck. Ya girl just looks like an octopus that's been beaten w/ those
^^^ this would've been cool but the beaten w/ those part ruined it imo

Gal came much weaker than expected and Fresh picked up the slack here so he got this.

v/Fresh

[King]

this is 3-3 NEED MORE VOTES

[Amen]

I’ll dispose of this man discretely, dude’s buggin if his plan’s to beat me
I mean, his text is so off the wall; it’s got me picturing some bad graffiti

- This was a cool concept. I've seen them flipped a few times, the whole "Off the wall" and "Off the chain" concepts, that is. But come to think of it, it really was worded weird. Off the wall really doesn't connect with Bad graffiti, if you think logically. If your picturing bad graffiti, how does that relate to being off the wall other then you probably wishing it was off the wal so you didn't have too see it, get where I'm coming from. So all in all this fell flat for me.

Eating super foods, smoking weed and pussy are some things that make me tick
But there’s an easier way to make anyone tic… just gotta be fake and act gay as shit

- I liked this.

Gal will tell you his material’s dope, so I’ma hafta be blunt
That theory is more off-base than a batter in left field… After the bunt

- Wasn't to crazy about this. I think you could have did more with it, tbh.

Fresh that dude, when I rap a round ppl pump fists cause that’s just how I spit
U couldn’t get a peep outta that faggot Elvis w/ ya lips wrapped around his dick

- Didn't like this.

I’ve macked bitches my entire life, for u pussy may as well be vacuum sealed
Cause If a dime ever falls for you.. you’re $1.29 away from ur next value meal

- Not sure if I'm just sobe and can barely function at the moment, but I didn't get this?

I’m droppin haymakers left n right, they’ll be ending this bastard
Gal has dropped so many gay flips, it rivals those men in gymnastics

- Played, I've seen way to many of these flips done before so this was stale for me.

This foe’s a joke, one punch n his nose is broke then I’ll dead em in two
Half this faggots material is trash, and that’s just getting the better of you

- Cool.

vs

Ayo upon first read, ya verse had me thinkin oh shit
…Fresh had some really dope hits….way back in ‘06

- Lol, nice but played concept.

Faggot, hold this. Keep showin ya smug face on tape & this wigger will die
Bro if I see 1 more video battle I’ma rip the ring out ya nose til it swells bigger than mine

- Lmao..

Lmao @ 1-2. That’s not how ‘talk’ sounds no matter how it’s read
Next time I’ll REALLY have an accent.. w/ enough force to take ya head off & pronounce you dead

- Accent/Axe sent wp is kind of outdated. You barely gave it any type of fresh twist since every time I have read it, it had this same exact angle/twist on it.

Your girl is gross but she’ll fuck wherever I take the whore
While you’re gone I’ll give her a Lay over & above what you can, while you wait for yours

- Ok concept horribly worded/executed.

You’ll flail arms in a fight, you're a rookie dude
I punch w/ a heavy hand…you’re more like that butler from scary movie 2

- Lol @ the little hand. This was alright.

My girls are perfect, from the face down to her feet & her toes
If it’s a tentacle fuck. Ya girl just looks like an octopus that's been beaten w/ those

- This was terrible, IMO.

I don't lose often, but w/ ya style? You can't hack, hater
Cuz ya loss column sets records that struggle to fit on an 8 track player

- This was nice.

OVERALL: This battle was actualy pretty close. Not the best from both but decent, I'd say. I think fresh did well here but a lot of his concepts didn't have that harsh proper execution. Gal struggled with a few of his concepts but for the most part, I think his executions were just a tad bit harsher. I liked his Nose ring bar, heavy hand and closer vs fresh's tic & closer. So, IMO I got Gal barely edgin this with just one more quote. Cool battle, guys.

v/Tic

[Fresh]

@Killing Spree @The Archetype voting closes today

[The Archetype]

Value meal and trash material

Vs

Forced and tentacle had potential

Vote Fresh surprisingly