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  1. #16
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    Re: but self destruction...

    Kudos Zen

    This shit was actually dope as fuck, even with the fucked up way you structure it. Everything else was damn near flawless I would give this shit a 10 out of 10 but I have to take a point for the structure STILL... The concept has been done before but the way you did was fucking sick kudos. The flow was fucking top notch you really out did yourself with it... Smh I'm glad I ran across this drop. I have to give it to you good job def hall of fame worthy someone already gave it a nomination so congrats....

    -CopyCat....

  2. #17

    Re: but self destruction...

    is it sad that I wished this was hof'd? I think so.

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    Re: but self destruction...

    This piece was great. Nice words. Nice rhymes. Nice paragraph format. My favorite portions were when you use "," and "." like a true pro. I mean damnn bro. Fire. I only hope i can write to this caliber some day. I mean...like

    "Sometimes I think I'm withering,"

    " Lay me to rest"

    ^Broo..that's bonkers

    Nice. Stay writing bro.

  4. #19

    Re: but self destruction...

    That's what I'm saying. Nobody can punctuate like me.

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    Re: but self destruction...

    Punk u ate like me you'd be fat as fuck,, nice drop tho

  6. #21

    Re: but self destruction...

    paragraphs wtf.

  7. #22

    Re: but self destruction...

    lol you motherfucker...

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    Re: but self destruction...

    I wouldn't mind trying the paragraph style, it seems to have its perks.

    I enjoyed this btw

    AI

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