Kill Spree vs body bags [KS wins 5-3]

[body bags]

Um I did this on the phone there may not b a poll

Ten lines

Tomorrow midnight

[body bags]

I have a challenge for u,I dare u to not use lame nameplays in ya statements
N if u do a body flip,make sure it lands about halfway n breaks ya neck on the pavement
I know you can't box,so what's left, wrestle me to death
So I guess you'll see spree throw bags over his shoulder,cuz it looks great with his dress
I'll hit u with body blows till your stomach feels like you did a 1000 crunches
To beat me you'll need to perform a miracle fast n bite all JHens best punches
Congrats on the worst contenders match in history,lol nigga ya verse arent scary
N the way u got murdered by words,you'd thought he'd beaten u to death with a dictionary
Thats funny as hell dawg,going against vets that wack shit don't fly
Hell yeah I'm losing to huntsman but thats better than losing to a guy that didn't even try
@Killing Spree





#sorrynotsorry

Edit missing a bar

[Spree]

I get out of work at 5 I'll get something up around then

[Spree]

Yo…
This chumps soft, Dumb fuck could bucket dope & not dump raw…
I’ll shoot’m up for fuckin the title up…He’ll prolly say He’s just dusting the rust off!
Dude a vet? Riiight! Hes not so bright but bro I’d go blind…
If ever he see wins over killing spree? He’d have to look up Netcees in 09!
Dude into magic mike & jacks it to faggot tapes his paps bought’m…
But this wack kid imitates classics… no wonder his rappins hit rock bottom!
He’ll smile as I beat on, so watch me shoot out this dudes dimples…
cos when the eagle ring out? His body bumps!... & that’s after the goose pimples!
I’ll drown his career into darkness, battling me? this man’ll soil…
Cos if B Boats to the serface? I must’v had my hands in tanning oil!

first battle back = uber garbaege
Wow I’m wack as hell so this is what it feels like lol

[Elvis Freshley]

I have a challenge for u,I dare u to not use lame nameplays in ya statements
N if u do a body flip,make sure it lands about halfway n breaks ya neck on the pavement

^^^ 3/5 this wasn’t too bad actually, name flip, body flip, self nameflip into sort of a punch haha. Wasn’t really “hard” but I dug it.

I know you can't box,so what's left, wrestle me to death
So I guess you'll see spree throw bags over his shoulder,cuz it looks great with his dress

^^^ 2.5 haha again the sort of self-name play (but still results in you getting tossed?) wording was a little spotty on this one.

I'll hit u with body blows till your stomach feels like you did a 1000 crunches
To beat me you'll need to perform a miracle fast n bite all JHens best punches

^^^ 2/5 Not feeling this one

Congrats on the worst contenders match in history,lol nigga ya verse arent scary
N the way u got murdered by words,you'd thought he'd beaten u to death with a dictionary

^^^ 2/5 nah, Words/Dictionary is faaaaar too played.

Thats funny as hell dawg,going against vets that wack shit don't fly
Hell yeah I'm losing to huntsman but thats better than losing to a guy that didn't even try

^^^ 2.5/5 could have been pretty cool, but you shouldn’t brag about losing. If you do, better come VERY hard haha

@Killing Spree





#sorrynotsorry



OVERALL: 12/25 your self name-play punches were pretty clever. The opener made me have higher hopes for the rest of your verse. But as the verse went on you sort of fizzled out a bit. Not a terrible verse, but keep the punches up.

Yo…
This chumps soft, Dumb fuck could bucket dope & not dump raw…
I’ll shoot’m up for fuckin the title up…He’ll prolly say He’s just dusting the rust off!

^^^ 2.5/5 I liked the “flow” to this, but punch wasn’t very hard honestly.

Dude a vet? Riiight! Hes not so bright but bro I’d go blind…
If ever he see wins over killing spree? He’d have to look up Netcees in 09!

^^^ 2.5/5 This may have been a personal, but I wasn’t around that site in 09 so I don’t really get it.

Dude into magic mike & jacks it to faggot tapes his paps bought’m…
But this wack kid imitates classics… no wonder his rappins hit rock bottom!

^^^ 3.5/5 I was digging this one.

He’ll smile as I beat on, so watch me shoot out this dudes dimples…
cos when the eagle ring out? His body bumps!... & that’s after the goose pimples!

^^^ 3.5/5 haha goose pimples was a little bit of a stretch, at least where I’m from it’s just goose bumps. But it was still slick.

I’ll drown his career into darkness, battling me? this man’ll soil…
Cos if B Boats to the serface? I must’v had my hands in tanning oil!

^^^ 3.5/5 Banana Boat, nice. I liked this as a closer it ended it real well.



OVERALL: 15.5/25 It wasn’t as hard as you usually come, but there were some sick concepts and the verse was good enough to get it done. Took a second to get rolling but you started going well towards the end.

Vote- KS… he just came more consistent and clever, plus his punches were harder hitting.

[Spree]

Thanks for your feed homie..

1-0

[Ryno]

Neck on the pavement

Vs

goose pimples

Almost quoted the dictionary line from bags but the execution was off. These were the stand out lines do what it really comes down to is who had the better misses. I'll give the nod to KS. His were worded a bit better and concepts were a bit fresher. Ok read overall props to both.

V/KS

[Spree]

2-0. Thanks for your vote... Uppin

[Joe Boston]

body bags

I have a challenge for u,I dare u to not use lame nameplays in ya statements
N if u do a body flip,make sure it lands about halfway n breaks ya neck on the pavement
lol this was a pretty creative flip

I know you can't box,so what's left, wrestle me to death
So I guess you'll see spree throw bags over his shoulder,cuz it looks great with his dress
yeah gotta agree wording is off a bit on the finisher maybe if u put "only time' would've stood out more

I'll hit u with body blows till your stomach feels like you did a 1000 crunches
To beat me you'll need to perform a miracle fast n bite all JHens best punches
soft personal too basic here

Congrats on the worst contenders match in history,lol nigga ya verse arent scary
N the way u got murdered by words,you'd thought he'd beaten u to death with a dictionary
played concept

Thats funny as hell dawg,going against vets that wack shit don't fly
Hell yeah I'm losing to huntsman but thats better than losing to a guy that didn't even try
too choppy with the wording and never put ammo against urself in a battle


Killing Spree

This chumps soft, Dumb fuck could bucket dope & not dump raw…
I’ll shoot’m up for fuckin the title up…He’ll prolly say He’s just dusting the rust off!
lol nice flip

Dude a vet? Riiight! Hes not so bright but bro I’d go blind…
If ever he see wins over killing spree? He’d have to look up Netcees in 09!
lol nice personal

Dude into magic mike & jacks it to faggot tapes his paps bought’m…
But this wack kid imitates classics… no wonder his rappins hit rock bottom!
lol

He’ll smile as I beat on, so watch me shoot out this dudes dimples…
cos when the eagle ring out? His body bumps!... & that’s after the goose pimples!
lol nice flip

I’ll drown his career into darkness, battling me? this man’ll soil…
Cos if B Boats to the serface? I must’v had my hands in tanning oil!
nice nameplay

Well bodybags had two ok self nameplay flips other then that a lot of basic content and wording issues. play around with ur creativity though u have potential u just have to work on displaying ur content better. Spree was pretty consistent throughout his drop had some good humor factor and some creative flips.

V/Killing Spree

[KnowP]

I have a challenge for u,I dare u to not use lame nameplays in ya statements
N if u do a body flip,make sure it lands about halfway n breaks ya neck on the pavement
I know you can't box,so what's left, wrestle me to death
So I guess you'll see spree throw bags over his shoulder,cuz it looks great with his dress




vs




Dude into magic mike & jacks it to faggot tapes his paps bought’m…
But this wack kid imitates classics… no wonder his rappins hit rock bottom!



ehhh def seen harder from Kill. wording was an issue here with some played concepts imo. Body hard harder bars and came more consistent with fresher flips. close battle and could go either way.



v. bags

[Spree]

3-0 ko? or 3-1?
@Fresh

[body bags]

Its 4-1 bro for a ko

[Smog]

I have a challenge for u,I dare u to not use lame nameplays in ya statements
N if u do a body flip,make sure it lands about halfway n breaks ya neck on the pavement
This nice np defense

I know you can't box,so what's left, wrestle me to death
So I guess you'll see spree throw bags over his shoulder,cuz it looks great with his dress
Iight... Didn't really like how u ended it


I'll hit u with body blows till your stomach feels like you did a 1000 crunches
To beat me you'll need to perform a miracle fast n bite all JHens best punches
I dig it

Congrats on the worst contenders match in history,lol nigga ya verse arent scary
N the way u got murdered by words,you'd thought he'd beaten u to death with a dictionary
Seen these alot

Thats funny as hell dawg,going against vets that wack shit don't fly
Hell yeah I'm losing to huntsman but thats better than losing to a guy that
Not feelin this..

Vs.

Yo…
This chumps soft, Dumb fuck could bucket dope & not dump raw…
I’ll shoot’m up for fuckin the title up…He’ll prolly say He’s just dusting the rust off!
Ok..
Dude a vet? Riiight! Hes not so bright but bro I’d go blind…
If ever he see wins over killing spree? He’d have to look up Netcees in 09!
Seen ur discussion so this came out nice otherwise I wouldn't have a clue

Dude into magic mike & jacks it to faggot tapes his paps bought’m…
But this wack kid imitates classics… no wonder his rappins hit rock bottom!
Ok...

He’ll smile as I beat on, so watch me shoot out this dudes dimples…
cos when the eagle ring out? His body bumps!... & that’s after the goose pimples!
Iight

I’ll drown his career into darkness, battling me? this man’ll soil…
Cos if B Boats to the serface? I must’v had my hands in tanning oil!
Pretty nice


This was a pretty nice lil battle.. Not bad but I think bags missed on his closer, n both had a couple solid hits n a few soft jabs but IMO I feel ks edged this one out on consistency... Close call actually just felt sprees verse better.. Stay up y'all...


Vote spree

[Spree]

@Fresh. Il get links today

[Wordz AhGod.]

KO is 5 - 0 unless specified by battlers before hand or agreed to have the battle closed.

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