Dope Francis vs. @Rilla
16 lines by 11:59 PM PDT Friday night?
Dope Francis
Rilla
Dope Francis vs. @Rilla
16 lines by 11:59 PM PDT Friday night?
Czech
Boss up
Good luck, my brother.
@Rilla , I told you I had gun bars on deck. I even gave you the Desert Eagle line I promised. Enjoy:
I see Rilla’s 6-2 *claps*… He’s made it far with a lotta basic bars
But now it gets hard, he’s (Hardee’s) gotta face a star
We’re takin’ charge; the RMBVA squad’s brought a lot of traffic
But I brought Trouble; at least one die when I pop a ‘matic (Pop-O-Matic)
This death’ll put him on the map; if he starts bookin’ when it clap, I’ma off-the-back it
I’ve got the Desert on his heels (hills) like it’s topographic
Once the thing pop, he’ll hit the floor—they ain’t gettin’ him up
Dope a mean shot (dopamine shot); give him more than an adrenaline rush
I been in the cut; you’ll see Francis (France is) in the streets like Bastille Day
Heaters spray, the Smith get you on First Take—that’s Steven A.
Nah… what I mean to say: I’ll blow rounds to your face, you can kiss the rings
That meant shots (mint shot’s) to your mouth like Listerine
Soon as I hit the scene, I brought crack to the forum, tell the fans: holla
I’m movin’ rocks around the board like it’s Mancala
Now let’s see if Rilla mount a challenge, I need a real amount’a challenge
This was child’s play, but you still got this work... and I’m not givin’ out allowance
It's on you.
Quick key cuz im drunk and high,
Aight YO...
Ur memory will forever be stuck in a wrecked verse,
Dog those gun bars got you lookin so hard.. ur eyes red and ur neck hurt,
Is he bein serious? Little fool delirious.. u couldnt get buck or laid,
Cuz the last time u pulled 10 Dumb Belles.. you just crumpled from the fuckin weight,
Damn bro, I got some hands tho, u only testin fate,
It's nice how you can put up a fight.. but u just like every other bitch gettin raped,
I straight ravage foes, ur style hit like a laggin joke,
Cuz the last time Francis dope.. he was on my dick begging for a bag to smoke,
Im chillin wit killas next to me, u a pussy who flex to be,
If anybody say 'Dopamine battler'.. it's ur wife on ecstacy,
I'll slug thru ur dome like a Club thru bones, u dont got a bleak chance..
Cuz if he EVER jump or point at me again... I'll rock him in the middle of his Nsync dance,
I just let my peep drive, u the type to be straight WEAK live,
Crazy how I can get buzzed all day, and still want to smash ur face through a beehive,
I know the pope thirsty, i could get u some weed and a girly,
Cuz the way I make this Christian Bail, could have THAT nigga retiring early
Boss up
I see Rilla’s 6-2 *claps*… He’s made it far with a lotta basic bars
But now it gets hard, he’s (Hardee’s) gotta face a star
weak and forced...
We’re takin’ charge; the RMBVA squad’s brought a lot of traffic
But I brought Trouble; at least one die when I pop a ‘matic (Pop-O-Matic)
this was dope...
This death’ll put him on the map; if he starts bookin’ when it clap, I’ma off-the-back it
I’ve got the Desert on his heels (hills) like it’s topographic
eh...
Once the thing pop, he’ll hit the floor—they ain’t gettin’ him up
Dope a mean shot (dopamine shot); give him more than an adrenaline rush
cool...
I been in the cut; you’ll see Francis (France is) in the streets like Bastille Day
Heaters spray, the Smith get you on First Take—that’s Steven A.
cool...
Nah… what I mean to say: I’ll blow rounds to your face, you can kiss the rings
That meant shots (mint shot’s) to your mouth like Listerine
eh...
Soon as I hit the scene, I brought crack to the forum, tell the fans: holla
I’m movin’ rocks around the board like it’s Mancala
okish...
Now let’s see if Rilla mount a challenge, I need a real amount’a challenge
This was child’s play, but you still got this work... and I’m not givin’ out allowance
eh...
vs
Ur memory will forever be stuck in a wrecked verse,
Dog those gun bars got you lookin so hard.. ur eyes red and ur neck hurt,
eh...
Is he bein serious? Little fool delirious.. u couldnt get buck or laid,
Cuz the last time u pulled 10 Dumb Belles.. you just crumpled from the fuckin weight,
eh...
Damn bro, I got some hands tho, u only testin fate,
It's nice how you can put up a fight.. but u just like every other bitch gettin raped,
weak...
I straight ravage foes, ur style hit like a laggin joke,
Cuz the last time Francis dope.. he was on my dick begging for a bag to smoke,
wording is awful...
Im chillin wit killas next to me, u a pussy who flex to be,
If anybody say 'Dopamine battler'.. it's ur wife on ecstacy,
i see what you tried to do... but you seem to be missing a part...
I'll slug thru ur dome like a Club thru bones, u dont got a bleak chance..
Cuz if he EVER jump or point at me again... I'll rock him in the middle of his Nsync dance,
okish...
I just let my peep drive, u the type to be straight WEAK live,
Crazy how I can get buzzed all day, and still want to smash ur face through a beehive,
eh...
I know the pope thirsty, i could get u some weed and a girly,
Cuz the way I make this Christian Bail, could have THAT nigga retiring early
not a fully formed idea...
DF... you don't need the parentheses... if you need to explain the wordplay, it's forced lol... that being said, a couple of them were but that Trouble reference was ill as fuck and most of them concepts were good too... interested in seeing what you would do if you actually cared... Rilla, seems like you took a step back and a few of your bars seemed like you were feeding off of his verse... may not be the case cuz Dopamine would be a pretty common idea... anyway, your shit wasn't fleshed out properly and seemed rushed...
vote Francis
I see Rilla’s 6-2 *claps*… He’s made it far with a lotta basic bars
But now it gets hard, he’s (Hardee’s) gotta face a star
nice
We’re takin’ charge; the RMBVA squad’s brought a lot of traffic
But I brought Trouble; at least one die when I pop a ‘matic (Pop-O-Matic)
daaaamn
This death’ll put him on the map; if he starts bookin’ when it clap, I’ma off-the-back it
I’ve got the Desert on his heels (hills) like it’s topographic
set up was a little weird, dat punch though
Once the thing pop, he’ll hit the floor—they ain’t gettin’ him up
Dope a mean shot (dopamine shot); give him more than an adrenaline rush
nice
I been in the cut; you’ll see Francis (France is) in the streets like Bastille Day
Heaters spray, the Smith get you on First Take—that’s Steven A.
nice
Nah… what I mean to say: I’ll blow rounds to your face, you can kiss the rings
That meant shots (mint shot’s) to your mouth like Listerine
the meant mint is a little too forced and listerine gets far too many mentions in battles/rap verses
Soon as I hit the scene, I brought crack to the forum, tell the fans: holla
I’m movin’ rocks around the board like it’s Mancala
solid
Now let’s see if Rilla mount a challenge, I need a real amount’a challenge
This was child’s play, but you still got this work... and I’m not givin’ out allowance
ok, would have preferred a big punch for the closer
Ur memory will forever be stuck in a wrecked verse,
Dog those gun bars got you lookin so hard.. ur eyes red and ur neck hurt,
stuck in a wrecked verse is bad wording, and why are his eyes red and neck hurt? didnt work for me
Is he bein serious? Little fool delirious.. u couldnt get buck or laid,
Cuz the last time u pulled 10 Dumb Belles.. you just crumpled from the fuckin weight,
haha ok
Damn bro, I got some hands tho, u only testin fate,
It's nice how you can put up a fight.. but u just like every other bitch gettin raped,
meh, felt like two set ups rather than a solid punch
I straight ravage foes, ur style hit like a laggin joke,
Cuz the last time Francis dope.. he was on my dick begging for a bag to smoke,
ravage foes? on your dick begging? this was real pause worthy
Im chillin wit killas next to me, u a pussy who flex to be,
If anybody say 'Dopamine battler'.. it's ur wife on ecstacy,
dopes dopamine bar was better, i dont get why his wife on ecstacy would say that, the x/dopamine connection was decent, but the bar was weirdly worded
I'll slug thru ur dome like a Club thru bones, u dont got a bleak chance..
Cuz if he EVER jump or point at me again... I'll rock him in the middle of his Nsync dance,
referencing a 10year old boy band in a bar that could have used any interchangeable boy band makes this not really hit
I just let my peep drive, u the type to be straight WEAK live,
Crazy how I can get buzzed all day, and still want to smash ur face through a beehive,
set up is just multis for the sake of it punch is baaaad
I know the pope thirsty, i could get u some weed and a girly,
Cuz the way I make this Christian Bail, could have THAT nigga retiring early
set up again is there purely to rhyme and adds nothing to the verse, but that christian bail shit is real nice, best bar of your verse imo
dope took it pretty easy, rilla just needs some consistancy
@Dope Francis @Rilla 2 voting links please
I see Rilla’s 6-2 *claps*… He’s made it far with a lotta basic bars
But now it gets hard, he’s (Hardee’s) gotta face a star
^^^ 3.5/5 you don't need parenthesis haha but the punch was pretty slick haha I liked it
We’re takin’ charge; the RMBVA squad’s brought a lot of traffic
But I brought Trouble; at least one die when I pop a ‘matic (Pop-O-Matic)
^^^ 4.5/5 This is one of my favorite couplets I've seen in a while. Very nice sir.
This death’ll put him on the map; if he starts bookin’ when it clap, I’ma off-the-back it
I’ve got the Desert on his heels (hills) like it’s topographic
^^^ 4/5 pretty slick man, clever.
Once the thing pop, he’ll hit the floor—they ain’t gettin’ him up
Dope a mean shot (dopamine shot); give him more than an adrenaline rush
^^^ 3.5/5 I was digging this one
I been in the cut; you’ll see Francis (France is) in the streets like Bastille Day
Heaters spray, the Smith get you on First Take—that’s Steven A.
^^^ 4.5/5 hahahahahahaha niiiiice.
Nah… what I mean to say: I’ll blow rounds to your face, you can kiss the rings
That meant shots (mint shot’s) to your mouth like Listerine
^^^ 3.5/5 the set-up didn't really connect to the punch but it was still clever and landed
Soon as I hit the scene, I brought crack to the forum, tell the fans: holla
I’m movin’ rocks around the board like it’s Mancala
^^^3.5/5 Again set-up didn't really lead into the punch but the punch was pretty sick even if it wasn't really aimed at Rilla
Now let’s see if Rilla mount a challenge, I need a real amount’a challenge
This was child’s play, but you still got this work... and I’m not givin’ out allowance
^^^ 3/5 Set up was repetitive, punch was pretty cool though
Overall: 30/40 this is actually one of my favorites verses I've read in a while, came solid with wordplay throughout and had a lot of clever high-brow stuff. I dug it. Kudos.
Ur memory will forever be stuck in a wrecked verse,
Dog those gun bars got you lookin so hard.. ur eyes red and ur neck hurt,
^^^ 3/5 I get it, it's pretty clever it's just kind of awkward? haha
Is he bein serious? Little fool delirious.. u couldnt get buck or laid,
Cuz the last time u pulled 10 Dumb Belles.. you just crumpled from the fuckin weight,
^^^ 3/5 this wasn't bad, pretty solid
Damn bro, I got some hands tho, u only testin fate,
It's nice how you can put up a fight.. but u just like every other bitch gettin raped,
^^^ 2.5/5 Um, hhhhwhat?
I straight ravage foes, ur style hit like a laggin joke,
Cuz the last time Francis dope.. he was on my dick begging for a bag to smoke,
^^^ 2.5/5 that's twice in a row you're hypothetically having sex with him? Plus it wasn't that clever really
Im chillin wit killas next to me, u a pussy who flex to be,
If anybody say 'Dopamine battler'.. it's ur wife on ecstacy,
^^^ 3/5 this really wasn't bad, but it was kind of out-shined because Dope's dopamine line hit harder
I'll slug thru ur dome like a Club thru bones, u dont got a bleak chance..
Cuz if he EVER jump or point at me again... I'll rock him in the middle of his Nsync dance,
^^^ 2.5/5 Meh… he didn't do those things. So this was kind of forced.
I just let my peep drive, u the type to be straight WEAK live,
Crazy how I can get buzzed all day, and still want to smash ur face through a beehive,
^^^ 2.5/5 haha this made me chuckle, wasn't really "hard" though
I know the pope thirsty, i could get u some weed and a girly,
Cuz the way I make this Christian Bail, could have THAT nigga retiring early
^^^ 3/5 this wasn't bad, I think the Christian Bail concept could have been crazy sick (even though the pope is the Bishop of Rome and a catholic) but you went sort of basic with it. Still a cool line though.
Overall: 22/40 your verse really wasn't BAD at all, I've seen better from you but this wasn't horrible by any means. You just got out-classed by Pope in this battle. This verse probably would have won again quite a few others.
Vote- Pope
Word go ahead and take the win bruh
3-0 @Dope Francis @fresh
Boss up
Dope linkingOriginally Posted by Dope Francis
Up. I'm trying to get more views on this. This might be RB's only chance to witness God's representative on Earth. These opportunities don't come everyday. Take advantage of this historic moment and drop a vote/breakdown.
Dope Francis
I see Rilla’s 6-2 *claps*… He’s made it far with a lotta basic bars
But now it gets hard, he’s (Hardee’s) gotta face a star
^^this was forced
We’re takin’ charge; the RMBVA squad’s brought a lot of traffic
But I brought Trouble; at least one die when I pop a ‘matic (Pop-O-Matic)
^^this was hardbody good shit
This death’ll put him on the map; if he starts bookin’ when it clap, I’ma off-the-back it
I’ve got the Desert on his heels (hills) like it’s topographic
^^didn't connect well
Once the thing pop, he’ll hit the floor—they ain’t gettin’ him up
Dope a mean shot (dopamine shot); give him more than an adrenaline rush
^^wordplay seemed outta place so it didn't hit for me
I been in the cut; you’ll see Francis (France is) in the streets like Bastille Day
Heaters spray, the Smith get you on First Take—that’s Steven A.
^^cool I like it
Nah… what I mean to say: I’ll blow rounds to your face, you can kiss the rings
That meant shots (mint shot’s) to your mouth like Listerine
^^again with these ( ) but this was cool
Soon as I hit the scene, I brought crack to the forum, tell the fans: holla
I’m movin’ rocks around the board like it’s Mancala
^^not diss just seems like bragging to me
Now let’s see if Rilla mount a challenge, I need a real amount’a challenge
This was child’s play, but you still got this work... and I’m not givin’ out allowance
^^weak fam
Rilla
Ur memory will forever be stuck in a wrecked verse,
Dog those gun bars got you lookin so hard.. ur eyes red and ur neck hurt,
^^oh get it still weak tho
Is he bein serious? Little fool delirious.. u couldnt get buck or laid,
Cuz the last time u pulled 10 Dumb Belles.. you just crumpled from the fuckin weight,
^^ok
Damn bro, I got some hands tho, u only testin fate,
It's nice how you can put up a fight.. but u just like every other bitch gettin raped,
^^nah fam just admitted to raping a bitch,rick ross must be ya mentor
I straight ravage foes, ur style hit like a laggin joke,
Cuz the last time Francis dope.. he was on my dick begging for a bag to smoke,
^^nah
Im chillin wit killas next to me, u a pussy who flex to be,
If anybody say 'Dopamine battler'.. it's ur wife on ecstacy,
^^nah
I'll slug thru ur dome like a Club thru bones, u dont got a bleak chance..
Cuz if he EVER jump or point at me again... I'll rock him in the middle of his Nsync dance,
^^lol funny visual
I just let my peep drive, u the type to be straight WEAK live,
Crazy how I can get buzzed all day, and still want to smash ur face through a beehive,
^^weak
I know the pope thirsty, i could get u some weed and a girly,
Cuz the way I make this Christian Bail, could have THAT nigga retiring early
^^nah
Cool battle to lotta misses and hits on both sides,but see francis taking this one by a punch or so that pop a matic shit was flames btw,rilla I like the nysc shit funny as hell ,francis mint shot aight love the concept more than punch tho but
V/francis
....Boss status....
I see Rilla’s 6-2 *claps*… He’s made it far with a lotta basic bars
But now it gets hard, he’s (Hardee’s) gotta face a star
not feelin this
We’re takin’ charge; the RMBVA squad’s brought a lot of traffic
But I brought Trouble; at least one die when I pop a ‘matic (Pop-O-Matic)
This death’ll put him on the map; if he starts bookin’ when it clap, I’ma off-the-back it
I’ve got the Desert on his heels (hills) like it’s topographic
sounded dope, although similar to QP's "one I get it poppin in the circle you know it's trouble". topographic line was ok too
Once the thing pop, he’ll hit the floor—they ain’t gettin’ him up
Dope a mean shot (dopamine shot); give him more than an adrenaline rush
dead at you making a new screenname just so you could flip it! as a nice flip though.
I been in the cut; you’ll see Francis (France is) in the streets like Bastille Day
Heaters spray, the Smith get you on First Take—that’s Steven A.
one of the first pairs you've had where the set up and punch are equal weight, which is always better than lame setups if possible. nice job.
Nah… what I mean to say: I’ll blow rounds to your face, you can kiss the rings
That meant shots (mint shot’s) to your mouth like Listerine
decent, nothing special
Soon as I hit the scene, I brought crack to the forum, tell the fans: holla
I’m movin’ rocks around the board like it’s Mancala
dope reference, setup was forced, think you could have come up with a better multi
Now let’s see if Rilla mount a challenge, I need a real amount’a challenge
This was child’s play, but you still got this work... and I’m not givin’ out allowance
not really feelin these
VS
Ur memory will forever be stuck in a wrecked verse,
Dog those gun bars got you lookin so hard.. ur eyes red and ur neck hurt,
ok I see what you're goin for
Is he bein serious? Little fool delirious.. u couldnt get buck or laid,
Cuz the last time u pulled 10 Dumb Belles.. you just crumpled from the fuckin weight,
decent nothing crazy
Damn bro, I got some hands tho, u only testin fate,
It's nice how you can put up a fight.. but u just like every other bitch gettin raped,
wtf
I straight ravage foes, ur style hit like a laggin joke,
Cuz the last time Francis dope.. he was on my dick begging for a bag to smoke,
ok like the multis but nothing hard hittin here
Im chillin wit killas next to me, u a pussy who flex to be,
If anybody say 'Dopamine battler'.. it's ur wife on ecstacy,
damn another dopamine bar already lmao. this was pretty nice too, but I thought francis has the better flip
I'll slug thru ur dome like a Club thru bones, u dont got a bleak chance..
Cuz if he EVER jump or point at me again... I'll rock him in the middle of his Nsync dance,
hmm
I just let my peep drive, u the type to be straight WEAK live,
Crazy how I can get buzzed all day, and still want to smash ur face through a beehive,
not feelin this
I know the pope thirsty, i could get u some weed and a girly,
Cuz the way I make this Christian Bail, could have THAT nigga retiring early
didn't hit for me
I've seen Francis battle on RMBVA many times (throwback mike) and can tell you for sure that he wrote this quickly by his standards. both dudes hit or miss but still thought francis the more quotable lines in this battle
v/df
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