1-2 Punch League
Week: 9
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
1-2 Punch League
Week: 9
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
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Fat bitch period, heavy flow
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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
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When it comes to fairies by far this tranny's the queen
he be look for pipes to fit pipes ud think he was choir rehearsing
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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
this snitch girl will lead me to him then leave a scene that is tragic
if peter pipe her then imma find that rat by following ratshit
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I thought PP's setup was very thorough. It helped set the tone for the concept. I just wasn't a fan of the wording in the closer. It really thwarted the impact initially outlined in his opener. MV kind of suffered from the same misstep. But he was able to deliver his bar better with less damage to his rhyme scheme.
v-MV
GO FOR BROKE
Pistols wording was so far off that I could barely understand what he was trying to say.. it was far too choppy and using the same word in a sentence is really shitty grammar and makes for unclear reading. MV's punch was actually entertaining and though the wording had its issues it was a good hit.
v/MV
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Both bars vould have used some polishing but overall not bad. I guess mv had a better thought out concept though
V- mv
Boss up
Pp wording took sting off the punch. I liked the concept mv had nice wordplay and concept... Also a bit wordy though but I think he executed his bar better. Vote mv
okay, petes was a ok. but it was almost incoherent.. MV came with about the same intensity of diss. i felt mv pulled his bat together better.
V.mv
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
5-0 in favor of MV, closed.
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