Original Song

[fo11]

[youtube]Kdqz0ufjW5c[/youtube]

http://new.rapbattles.com/forum/show...-Childern-quot
http://new.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t-Come-see-why

[ILLunatic]

ATTENTION fo11,

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[fo11]

ATTENTION fo11,

This automated notification is a friendly reminder for you to provide (2) links to other member submissions that you left adequate feedback to.

say hello robot

[The Great Father]

I like your response to that gay fucking autoresponse, so I will provide some feedback-

This has a feel of a country-2002 era hip hop mixed into it. Put into the right hands (aka don't let any modernized rappers or "dirty souf" assholes on this) and you could have this thing really unleash its potential. Or it could just be left alone as a drinking theme.

All in all, pretty swell stuff. Also, fuck that auto-response.

[fo11]

Thanks for feeds bro !!

[Pair-A-Dyce]

I think this is cool @fo11 it has a really epic feel to it. I can't imagine myself rapping to it but I could see someone doing so... I think this would fit better into a singer's hands because you have a lot of variations and build ups which aren't typically needed in a lot of rap songs.

[fo11]

thanks for checkin bro @Pair-A-Dyce

[Blanco.]

I like your response to that gay fucking autoresponse, so I will provide some feedback-

This has a feel of a country-2002 era hip hop mixed into it. Put into the right hands (aka don't let any modernized rappers or "dirty souf" assholes on this) and you could have this thing really unleash its potential. Or it could just be left alone as a drinking theme.

All in all, pretty swell stuff. Also, fuck that auto-response.

agreed 100%. this is a dope track.

[Nahlidge]

Don't hate on the auto message lol. A lot of newer members usually don't know to drop links. So it's there for them. Next time y'all try to punk it I'm gonna jump y'all.
@fo11 I like this. Definitely an emotional vibe to it. Some story telling or thought provoking type shit. Or maybe just some emo woe is me type of track over it would work even lol. I can hear either a rapped hook or a sung hook. Maybe a mix of both depending on what the track is about.

[Oxymoron]

@fo11 This is cool. I dont think i would rhyme over it well, but someone out there would be digging this to get down. Feels emotional, got me nodding a little. I can def feel like something emotional would happen on here.

Stay dropping.

[mal diction]

this is dope.... who do you make beats for.... this has an atomic beats sound with the guitar ... could have been longer


overall dopeness

Peace