Flickering, white brook-
A fishtailing gaze wets the screen
And paper boat smiles
Flitting through the channels
Snag against the rocks every now and then-
Cue the laugh track
Flickering, white brook-
A fishtailing gaze wets the screen
And paper boat smiles
Flitting through the channels
Snag against the rocks every now and then-
Cue the laugh track
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HEC, you have an amazing way with words.
Your imagery here is really nice.
My favourite lines,
"Paper boat smiles"
"Cue the laugh track"
Nice depictions HEC.
This reminds me of a poem written in college by D-Knowledge...It took me a minute to get the representation here but yeah, dope.....life is as such as a paper boat and I like how you didn't go nostalgic with it by some type of dire situation or ill fated actions...it was serene, quiet to the eyes...like I said...dope...
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This is a perfect example of how using fewer words can be much more powerful. Writers tend to be long winded and they think that the more they say the better. When in reality the people who say the most normally don't have much to say at all. Cool stuff.
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