-
July 15th, 2014, 12:06 PM
#1
WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (Arch Wins)
LLL Official Rules & Regulations
CHECK IN DUE: WEDNESDAY @ 11:59 PM EST
VERSUS DUE: FRIDAY @ 11:59 PM EST
LINE LIMIT: 16 - 20 LINES
-
July 15th, 2014, 12:49 PM
#2
Not Retired
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype
-
July 15th, 2014, 01:32 PM
#3
is back
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype
-
July 19th, 2014, 02:42 AM
#4
is back
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype
Archetype / Arman Hammer - Lost to Verbal Hologram & GOW, then tagged w/GOW after the L.
You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun
When I rap it’s go time so it’s back to ’09 when this kiddie was tortured
Idk what’s worse. Getting called for biting when I repeat Verbatim or you reliving < that Slaughter
Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one
Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie
Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one
I'm meant for ya girl. The way I'm up in that ass I bet you would hurl
It's sad, cause we wouldn't see Armageddon those pants if it were the end of the world
You cower @ any Act of War. I don't blame you, that beating was rough son
It's Ironic, cuz ^ that Loss STILL had you Lookin to God like family members grieving a loved one
-
July 19th, 2014, 03:07 AM
#5
Not Retired
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype
Well...
His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch
Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction
Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me
In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date
You're merely a stepping stone in the ring. The lamest challenge that they could bring
People await my reign. You'll only be remembered for getting fucked up... Rodney King
The dick keeps your bitch from being quiet. She craves my prick and I supply it
I got your chick swallowing meat all day like she started the Atkin's diet
...blah...
-
July 19th, 2014, 11:21 AM
#6
You've Earned a Custom Title!
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype
Archetype / Arman Hammer - Lost to Verbal Hologram & GOW, then tagged w/GOW after the L.
You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun
Lol.. Pretty nice
When I rap it’s go time so it’s back to ’09 when this kiddie was tortured
Idk what’s worse. Getting called for biting when I repeat Verbatim or you reliving < that Slaughter
I guess New York cats could annunciate torture n slaughter to rhyme.. Lol.. I dig the personal tho
Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one
Lol.. I feel it..
Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie
Nice
Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
Iight.. Lol..
Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one
Nice IMO
I'm meant for ya girl. The way I'm up in that ass I bet you would hurl
It's sad, cause we wouldn't see Armageddon those pants if it were the end of the world
Didn't feel the wp arm a get in?
You cower @ any Act of War. I don't blame you, that beating was rough son
It's Ironic, cuz ^ that Loss STILL had you Lookin to God like family members grieving a loved one
Iight...I feel it..
Vs...
Well...
His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
Lol.. Pretty funny
I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch
That's actually dope punch with a perfect set up
Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction
I dig th wp
Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me
Survey wp u worked it well
In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date
Lol, again wp was dope
You're merely a stepping stone in the ring. The lamest challenge that they could bring
People await my reign. You'll only be remembered for getting fucked up... Rodney King
Nah not diggin this to much
The dick keeps your bitch from being quiet. She craves my prick and I supply it
I got your chick swallowing meat all day like she started the Atkin's diet
Lol.. Funny shit..
Dope battle.. Gal there was one I didn't like from each.. But the rest was solid..arch had dope ass wp all fresh to me..good job.. Gal went more on a personal attack with some nice wp n creativity also.. So basically IMO I got gal taking this due to his personal approach I just feel it was more direct...prolly could go either way n am curious to see other votes but IMO got gal edging this... Dope battle y'all..
Vote.. gal
-
July 21st, 2014, 01:24 PM
#7
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Arch
His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch
Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction
In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date
Gal
You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun
Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie
Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one
This was a crazy battle, very consistent on both ends and I think this will come down to one or two votes who gets this, anyway i got equal quotes from both verses but of the 4 from each I liked Arch's a tiny bit more so I'm gonna give him the edge... this was a dope battle though both of you should be proud
-
July 21st, 2014, 03:24 PM
#8
The Legend
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one
Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
stretched but funny af!!
Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one
vs
His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me
In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date
nice battle overall. Both brought some nice flips. Gal had more personals while arch had the cooler flips. could go either way but i got ARch takin it with a more consistent verse. Gal attacked on the wordplay and a few didnt land that well to me like the Armageddon joint.
v. arch
-
July 22nd, 2014, 05:04 PM
#9
Obnoxious
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)
You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun
Cool.
When I rap it’s go time so it’s back to ’09 when this kiddie was tortured
Idk what’s worse. Getting called for biting when I repeat Verbatim or you reliving < that Slaughter
Wack.
Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one
Could've been flipped better.
Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie
Not feeling this.
Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
Seen these concepts flipped so many times.
Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one
This was cool.
I'm meant for ya girl. The way I'm up in that ass I bet you would hurl
It's sad, cause we wouldn't see Armageddon those pants if it were the end of the world
Bit of a reach here.
You cower @ any Act of War. I don't blame you, that beating was rough son
It's Ironic, cuz ^ that Loss STILL had you Lookin to God like family members grieving a loved one
Didn't like this, either.
vs
His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
bLahhh, I've seen these flips on him quite a few times. Even tho you gave it a "Your girl" angle, I'll give you credit for it.
I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch
Ok'ish.
Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction
Seen a few catalyst wp's but this one was cool, however could have been executed a tad bit harsher. It came off kind of weak to me.
Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me
Same as above, IMO. Survey/Serve A... Yea..
In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date
Lol, I liked this one, even tho was a minor reach.
You're merely a stepping stone in the ring. The lamest challenge that they could bring
People await my reign. You'll only be remembered for getting fucked up... Rodney King
Didn't like this.
The dick keeps your bitch from being quiet. She craves my prick and I supply it
I got your chick swallowing meat all day like she started the Atkin's diet
Ehhhh, seen a lot of atkin/meat plays, so this came off weak to me.
OVERALL: Had to break this down bar for bar to really determine a winner here. Gal had his opener and the Typewriter bar vs Arch's Remove rib, catalyst and broken promises which barelyyyyy made it but got a chuckle out of me so I figured I'd give him credit for it. With that being said, cool battle but...
v/Arch
-
July 24th, 2014, 11:06 PM
#10
Kami no kotoba.
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)
You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun
vs
nothing.
weak ass battle.. thought Arch would take this but I struggled to find a quotable plus the prom misses felt forced as fuck to me. Gals opener was ok, not fire.. wording was off and nothing special.
v/Gal
-
July 25th, 2014, 09:29 AM
#11
Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Posting Rules
- You may not post new threads
- You may not post replies
- You may not post attachments
- You may not edit your posts
-
Forum Rules