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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype

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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype

    Archetype / Arman Hammer - Lost to Verbal Hologram & GOW, then tagged w/GOW after the L.

    You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
    Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun
    When I rap it’s go time so it’s back to ’09 when this kiddie was tortured
    Idk what’s worse. Getting called for biting when I repeat Verbatim or you reliving < that Slaughter
    Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
    Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one
    Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
    Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie
    Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
    You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
    Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
    To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one
    I'm meant for ya girl. The way I'm up in that ass I bet you would hurl
    It's sad, cause we wouldn't see Armageddon those pants if it were the end of the world
    You cower @ any Act of War. I don't blame you, that beating was rough son
    It's Ironic, cuz ^ that Loss STILL had you Lookin to God like family members grieving a loved one

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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype

    Well...

    His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
    She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
    I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
    So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch
    Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
    This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction
    Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
    You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me
    In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
    Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date
    You're merely a stepping stone in the ring. The lamest challenge that they could bring
    People await my reign. You'll only be remembered for getting fucked up... Rodney King
    The dick keeps your bitch from being quiet. She craves my prick and I supply it
    I got your chick swallowing meat all day like she started the Atkin's diet

    ...blah...

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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype
    Archetype / Arman Hammer - Lost to Verbal Hologram & GOW, then tagged w/GOW after the L.

    You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
    Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun
    Lol.. Pretty nice

    When I rap it’s go time so it’s back to ’09 when this kiddie was tortured
    Idk what’s worse. Getting called for biting when I repeat Verbatim or you reliving < that Slaughter
    I guess New York cats could annunciate torture n slaughter to rhyme.. Lol.. I dig the personal tho

    Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
    Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one
    Lol.. I feel it..

    Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
    Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie
    Nice

    Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
    You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
    Iight.. Lol..

    Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
    To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one
    Nice IMO

    I'm meant for ya girl. The way I'm up in that ass I bet you would hurl
    It's sad, cause we wouldn't see Armageddon those pants if it were the end of the world
    Didn't feel the wp arm a get in?

    You cower @ any Act of War. I don't blame you, that beating was rough son
    It's Ironic, cuz ^ that Loss STILL had you Lookin to God like family members grieving a loved one
    Iight...I feel it..

    Vs...


    Well...

    His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
    She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
    Lol.. Pretty funny

    I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
    So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch
    That's actually dope punch with a perfect set up

    Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
    This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction
    I dig th wp

    Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
    You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me
    Survey wp u worked it well

    In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
    Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date
    Lol, again wp was dope

    You're merely a stepping stone in the ring. The lamest challenge that they could bring
    People await my reign. You'll only be remembered for getting fucked up... Rodney King
    Nah not diggin this to much

    The dick keeps your bitch from being quiet. She craves my prick and I supply it
    I got your chick swallowing meat all day like she started the Atkin's diet
    Lol.. Funny shit..

    Dope battle.. Gal there was one I didn't like from each.. But the rest was solid..arch had dope ass wp all fresh to me..good job.. Gal went more on a personal attack with some nice wp n creativity also.. So basically IMO I got gal taking this due to his personal approach I just feel it was more direct...prolly could go either way n am curious to see other votes but IMO got gal edging this... Dope battle y'all..


    Vote.. gal

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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Arch

    His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
    She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
    I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
    So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch
    Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
    This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction

    In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
    Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date


    Gal

    You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
    Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun

    Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
    Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie
    Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
    You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
    Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
    To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one


    This was a crazy battle, very consistent on both ends and I think this will come down to one or two votes who gets this, anyway i got equal quotes from both verses but of the 4 from each I liked Arch's a tiny bit more so I'm gonna give him the edge... this was a dope battle though both of you should be proud
    psst >>>>

    ... fuck you

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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
    Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one
    Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
    You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field
    stretched but funny af!!
    Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
    To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one



    vs



    His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
    She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds
    Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
    You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me
    In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
    Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date



    nice battle overall. Both brought some nice flips. Gal had more personals while arch had the cooler flips. could go either way but i got ARch takin it with a more consistent verse. Gal attacked on the wordplay and a few didnt land that well to me like the Armageddon joint.


    v. arch

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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
    Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun

    Cool.

    When I rap it’s go time so it’s back to ’09 when this kiddie was tortured
    Idk what’s worse. Getting called for biting when I repeat Verbatim or you reliving < that Slaughter

    Wack.

    Vets? I have no respect for those bums, but yo, son your records wholesome
    Then I scrolledddddd through ya battles & saw who you beat Next….to no one

    Could've been flipped better.

    Ya writing sucks so you need D/R’s & fanboys, quit bein a groupie
    Keep it up’n one punch’ll Purge Anarchy quicker than seein that movie

    Not feeling this.

    Ya Game is wack. Do you wanna be Champ? Cuz ya mind, you better make it up for real
    You won't just Straddle A-Fence, you'll call 3 audibles, hot routes & have too many players on the field

    Seen these concepts flipped so many times.

    Last week you had some WACK ass lines & legitimate, some
    To be honest, that's rare. Last time I saw Typewrita good line it was written with one

    This was cool.

    I'm meant for ya girl. The way I'm up in that ass I bet you would hurl
    It's sad, cause we wouldn't see Armageddon those pants if it were the end of the world

    Bit of a reach here.

    You cower @ any Act of War. I don't blame you, that beating was rough son
    It's Ironic, cuz ^ that Loss STILL had you Lookin to God like family members grieving a loved one

    Didn't like this, either.

    vs

    His bitch is fat as fuck. Semis rival the size that's on his girl
    She's a dime to Galact, Us? We just think she can devour entire worlds

    bLahhh, I've seen these flips on him quite a few times. Even tho you gave it a "Your girl" angle, I'll give you credit for it.

    I'm the God of this text shit. Each line that hits rips kids from ankle to wrist
    So if a punch removes your rib... it's just to prove I made you a bitch

    Ok'ish.

    Your bars are statements and played shit. My keys form a science when I'm rapping
    This catalyst some ancient shit then wonder why he can't get a reaction

    Seen a few catalyst wp's but this one was cool, however could have been executed a tad bit harsher. It came off kind of weak to me.

    Gal drops ass weekly. This is easy. I hope you can handle defeat, G
    You serve A? Only if you're asking people how the fuck you're gonna beat me

    Same as above, IMO. Survey/Serve A... Yea..

    In high school I was the man. Took virgins and gave them seed to the face
    Arch broke in prom misses... that's just what you got when they agreed to a date

    Lol, I liked this one, even tho was a minor reach.

    You're merely a stepping stone in the ring. The lamest challenge that they could bring
    People await my reign. You'll only be remembered for getting fucked up... Rodney King

    Didn't like this.

    The dick keeps your bitch from being quiet. She craves my prick and I supply it
    I got your chick swallowing meat all day like she started the Atkin's diet

    Ehhhh, seen a lot of atkin/meat plays, so this came off weak to me.

    OVERALL: Had to break this down bar for bar to really determine a winner here. Gal had his opener and the Typewriter bar vs Arch's Remove rib, catalyst and broken promises which barelyyyyy made it but got a chuckle out of me so I figured I'd give him credit for it. With that being said, cool battle but...

    v/Arch

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    Re: WK 14 CHAMP MATCH Galactic vs The Archetype (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    You were handed this match, but it’s my title & I’m keepin it dun
    Faggot I earned my Stripes. You got drunk off Martinis & fell asleep in the Sun

    vs

    nothing.

    weak ass battle.. thought Arch would take this but I struggled to find a quotable plus the prom misses felt forced as fuck to me. Gals opener was ok, not fire.. wording was off and nothing special.

    v/Gal
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