Cannibal

[focusedonit1307]

Im of a different caliber
Lyrical brain splatterer
Intellectual cannibal
Sauteein ya grey matter up
Then serve it to ya shorty
While we politic a matter of fact

I said mama you cold as ice
So you kno I gotta shatter ya
She said Its in ya nature pa
I cant even be mad at cha
But I got a man
Hol up
What ya man gotta do wit me?
If he wanna mix words
Theyll be his epitaph n eulogy
I digress

Okay ya loyal to a fault
But I can tell ya flower wet
I split the soil like a fault
Its all about the mind
N mine n yours are both adult
And your opposite of my sex
So I implore it aint your fault
If we connect

Like a trigger and a finger
I chose to say it last
cuz I knew that it would linger
Bang bang
As I tease her wit a gentle stroke she giggle like I made a simple joke wit a belly full of ya mental notes
Stop pa she resisted as I approached her throat
My tongue relaxed her tension quicker than a fuckin antidote
She grabbed me by the neck
Wrapped her legs around like she cant let go
Looked straight into my eyes and sang this statement in falsetto

Ooooo
I got a man but he got nothin on you
I wanna do everything you wanna do
Get me in trouble
I want ya trouble

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[KnowP]

word. i see you flowing this drop over a mellow beat. pretty basic overall with no real action on the canvas. maybe cause its written in song form. either way, you wana dive more into imagery to compel the reader to continue reading naw mean? keep at it tho fam.

[OG Maestro]

This seems like a groovy blueprint to an audio piece or something. Stuff like this usually has 2 good things about them. A good theme & infectious flow. Maintain those two components whenever you write stuff like this my guy, good stuff.