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    Catching Fire

    Catching Fire

    In a forest of trees, for as far as I can see
    There's a sea of people, hiding behind their leaves
    Its actually quite surreal imagine that its like a field
    There's nothing left but ash, and thats exactly how I feel
    Where there used to be an abundance of life, there now lays empty
    A barren wasteland, vacuous aura encompasses those who stay trendy
    Its pure evil the way they lure people to act in a matter of fashion
    Abstract tactics and obscure egos cause collateral damage
    Its the spark, the initial source of energy that ignites the first tree in the forest
    Now the second tree in the forest could have very easily ignored this
    But catching fire is what we do it just happens naturally
    Chemical reactions and sudden synapses happen casually
    What was once a single spark has resulted in an entire forest ablaze
    Like they're hungry for the flame; malnourished and crazed it sure is a shame
    Whatever happened to eccentric ego's? I guess they just up and left the people
    This is the zombie apocalypse and you all know that this ends up lethal
    You gotta do it on your own to deserve an ounce of my respect
    The soul is a burning sun, which the personality reflects
    But if the wind carries the moonlight that's cascaded by the waves
    It'll ripple through your veins as you wade towards your grave
    You're the fucking epitome of someone else's greed
    A long list of corporations that you've helped succeed
    You're the infinite echo that perpetuates inside of ya dreams
    On an intricate level that demonstrates its not what it seems
    The flame is a flickering fluke slithering through every chute
    Severing you from the very things that you were intended to do
    Its like you zigzag through life the way you cuttin the corners out
    at every turn you leave a new shell of your former self

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    Re: Catching Fire

    Was solid, from the topic to the flow, to the wording. Thought it was good. Seem like you put thought into this. Good shit.

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    Re: Catching Fire

    Dope I especially like the eccentric egos line but if you can check out my written Cannibal

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    Re: Catching Fire

    @fresh This verse gave me my first SS L. Historical moment, if you think about it.

    I always did like this one....*mumbles* ...still think my verse was better though.
    Btw, I posted mine in here too.

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ntre-de-Volcan

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