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    Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    Posted this like a month or so ago on Netcees... was the last thing I wrote and deserves some more props tbh

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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    I'm assuming your from NC. This was dope, the flow and rhyme scheme and blah blah you know the rest. This piece is packed with so many references it's ridiculous but also very well thought and written in most places. Not sure who did what but I'm assuming the order of the verses follows the order of the names. Little shit bugged me here and there, like spelling with- wit. It's one less letter, does it really help your flow? No. Anyway, this was a really dope drop but I'm sure you already know that. Good to have you immigrants floating around here. God damn boat people.
    Last edited by HighEngineChief; June 20th, 2014 at 12:11 PM

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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    word this was pretty dope and creative, I'll do a better breakdown over the weekend when I have time.. shit was nice from what I got so far.
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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    Degree in chemistry; mix hydrocloric brews; Agent Orange and Blue
    Watching Neigh Palm weapons big enough to turn the whole Vienam forest floor a fluorescent hue

    sheesh

    Summon the strength of Goliath.. hit like a Congo viper hocking saliva
    Somalian pirate in the wake of Poseidon, my optical fibers like an Oculus visor
    A locust swarmin out the lotus blossom,

    :0

    DNA print reads as genius literature w/ Nietzsche's signature

    word

    Let's make it simple as Reddit; if Para & Saber's gripping the weapon
    you're off to a rocky start boxin' with the old guard like Mason Dixon's obsession

    /r/ELI5

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    wut lol

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    woof

    very heavily-geared towards the one-liners so i've chosen to critique it as such. this was a tight collab. contrasting styles but very complementary. 3 of my all-time favorites without a doubt..

    i think you're still looking rediscover your voice, kin. you're almost there. keep the wheels greased.


    thanks friend




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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    Watching Neigh Palm weapons big enough to turn the whole Vienam forest floor a fluorescent hue
    ^ nice, though if neigh isn't writing this you're saying he has big hands


    The glock 9 I'm gripping could start a bonfire
    ^ lol this has to be Neigh

    Summon the strength of Goliath.. hit like a Congo viper hocking saliva
    Somalian pirate in the wake of Poseidon, my optical fibers like an Oculus visor
    ^ just nasty

    Brain fires impulses from pilot's controls.. process data w/ dire results
    My mind make a diamond corrode; to write what I know'd leave you white as a ghost
    ^ flames

    I'm eight parts phalanx, nine percent gold digger
    Five percent 5-Percenter, cypher set stone slinger
    Prescribing final deaths to idle lines of vets, no zingers
    cause V's an unsympathetic, isometric cybersect CoHpe stickler
    ^ liked how that flowed



    This was a nice piece. I won't give adequate feedback but all three did well. Para could tighten his flow a smidgen, Vulgar got hot towards the end, Neigh had good flow, maybe less braggo & more on topic.

    Great job

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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    Jesus, this was fucking crazy.

    Some of the best self-hype I've read. Reminds me of Rhyme-Asylum a bit. Rhymes (although slanted at times) were great and creative, and the punchlines were just ballistic. Imagery was on point for all of you. Great job, guys. I really enjoyed the read.

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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    thanks for the feedback

    word at blacketh

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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    one last up

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    Re: Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

    all three killed it dead

    love neighs style tho

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