Wk 10 Sin City vs KnowP (KnowP Wins)

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[KnowP]

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[$in City]

I was gonna say 16... Let's go 12 bro

[KnowP]

16 it is nigga.....




Apocalyptic flames, with tactical force im geared
U’d think I was mailing a serious letter the way im delivering Sincered
Going presidential on a retard, decapitating this vicitm
u couldn’t even win in a handicap match since u already got bodied by Nik, Sin
Make u cry like a girl when I put u in submission
i should be attracting border patrol how fast I keep pushing City limits
Smashing Sin like a born again Christian, leavin em chokin
Every part of City getting buried more than when the southern levies were broken
How u even get here when ya moms was known for blowin
Im surprised SC is still alive the way she’d Pac-12 and swallow a Trojan
When it comes to bars I got em, his are vague n boring
Sin is such a Tiny problem that I should have T.I. come slap em for me
diggin ya spouse when u leavin the house, slam it n fold it
She should get royalties from Wild’n Out the way she keeps a Cannon Unloaded
I stay with a stack in my wallet, this bum on some garbage
Only time he getting caught with a Mill in his pocket is stillin his album from Target

[$in City]

You tryin desperately to hit me but you’re struggling bad, im fuckin chuckling fag
cuz its been a couple weeks since you’ve even landed a punch in the mag!
my gut shots’ll make you vomit your lunch in a bag, so don’t sleep bro
Your whole style needs work like Mexicans in front of home depot
I seen you dropped early, but after THAT verse aint no way I’d be scared
Cuz your rhymes got more tangles and kinks in it than Blue Ivy’s hair
wasn’t prepared to battle a queer, this match up fuckin brought me the chills
you wear the pants in your relationship, but also the skirt, stockings and heels
it’s easy to score w/ ya moms, the slut makes me nut then she’s tasting it quick
so today my goal’s to watch the world cup while I soccer in the face with my dick
this battle was too fuckin easy, I mean this shit’s got me utterly yawning
I got the win in the bag, plus your wallet, cell phone and all your other belongings
You need an intervention, nigga you pussy, you’re such a fuckin clown P
I’ll throw a brick at your face, you scared to throw a temper tantrum around me
You ignored all the warning signs, a mistake that led you right to your grave
We all saw the red flags, cuz I shot through all the white ones you waved

[Smog]

16 it is nigga.....




Apocalyptic flames, with tactical force im geared
U’d think I was mailing a serious letter the way im delivering Sincered
I kinda like the np

Going presidential on a retard, decapitating this vicitm
u couldn’t even win in a handicap match since u already got bodied by Nik, Sin
Ok np/wp here

Make u cry like a girl when I put u in submission
i should be attracting border patrol how fast I keep pushing City limits
Goin all out on that np.. Decent punch

Smashing Sin like a born again Christian, leavin em chokin
Every part of City getting buried more than when the southern levies were broken
Lol..I dig this.. Ain't gonna be no name plays left after this tho..

How u even get here when ya moms was known for blowin
Im surprised SC is still alive the way she’d Pac-12 and swallow a Trojan
I was wrong.. Best one so far.. Dope IMO

When it comes to bars I got em, his are vague n boring
Sin is such a Tiny problem that I should have T.I. come slap em for me
Soft IMO

diggin ya spouse when u leavin the house, slam it n fold it
She should get royalties from Wild’n Out the way she keeps a Cannon Unloaded
Pretty nice

I stay with a stack in my wallet, this bum on some garbage
Only time he getting caught with a Mill in his pocket is stillin his album from Target
Whoa similar to one I just used..didn't know but this was nice..

Vs...

You tryin desperately to hit me but you’re struggling bad, im fuckin chuckling fag
cuz its been a couple weeks since you’ve even landed a punch in the mag!
Dope..

my gut shots’ll make you vomit your lunch in a bag, so don’t sleep bro
Your whole style needs work like Mexicans in front of home depot
Lol.. That's all I could do yo

I seen you dropped early, but after THAT verse aint no way I’d be scared
Cuz your rhymes got more tangles and kinks in it than Blue Ivy’s hair
Pretty nice

wasn’t prepared to battle a queer, this match up fuckin brought me the chills
you wear the pants in your relationship, but also the skirt, stockings and heels
Seen this..

it’s easy to score w/ ya moms, the slut makes me nut then she’s tasting it quick
so today my goal’s to watch the world cup while I soccer in the face with my dick
Pg just did the soccer in 1-2 in relation to the World Cup..

this battle was too fuckin easy, I mean this shit’s got me utterly yawning
I got the win in the bag, plus your wallet, cell phone and all your other belongings
Nice

You need an intervention, nigga you pussy, you’re such a fuckin clown P
I’ll throw a brick at your face, you scared to throw a temper tantrum around me
Lol, nice

You ignored all the warning signs, a mistake that led you right to your grave
We all saw the red flags, cuz I shot through all the white ones you waved
Nice again..

Dope battle.. Sin had 2 I've seen in my short text time but the rest were pretty solid.. Good shit... Kp had over did the np IMO but the sc/pack 12 USC Trojan was dope..in all honesty tho IMO I liked sins verse better cuz I did kinda get bored of the np even tho some were nice but I gotta go sin here.. Good battle tho y'all..

Vote sin

[Wordz AhGod.]

knowp- first nameplay has been done on him already, second felt forced and didn't tie in well with me, setup was choppy.. city limits could have been dope but your execution just wasn't there. Southern levels was boring, too many nameplays at this point.. trojan was blahh weird wording.. there was a T.I. and Tiny punch thrown just last week so this feels played to me, I think it was actually $in who dropped it in the top punches in the mag..used to see wild'n out/nick cannon concepts back in 06, this means its beyond played (serously, look it up)..closer was pretty bad.

Sin-good personal, not hard hitting at all but a good way to start it off (cos its true lol)..home depot was weak, blue ivy was mehh, pants in the relationship line wasn't worded right, seen a better soccer punch from Packed Graves in the 1-2 earlier so this didn't hit as hard to me, win in the bag is played to hell but I enjoyed the flip on it, it was nicely worded,throw a temper tantrum line is played as well seen this concept written almost exactly before, red flags was dope to me, nice closer.

this battle didn't have much as far as quotable lines but sin usually seems to win his battles with a bunch of weak lines and two really hard ones.. in this case he had one and a half lol.. Knowp, I can tell you're trying to make this one dope but it felt like you're battling rust and need to find what people like again man.. your wording kills a lot of your better concepts that you use.

v/Sin

[KnowP]

Smh good verse City. Props on dropping early.

[$in City]

Fasho...respects...niggas started snappin on me in the chat talkin bout I was gonna drop at 11:59 type shit so I just decided to go on ahead and write my verse...respects...

[knucklehead.]

roflzzzz wtf

knowp slaughtered him

THESE ARE YOUR STANDARDS RB??!?!!

[knucklehead.]

Apocalyptic flames, with tactical force im geared
U’d think I was mailing a serious letter the way im delivering Sincered
Wording could have been way better but cool nonetheless
Going presidential on a retard, decapitating this vicitm
u couldn’t even win in a handicap match since u already got bodied by Nik, Sin
Eh, kind of forced and bad connection.
Make u cry like a girl when I put u in submission
i should be attracting border patrol how fast I keep pushing City limits
Rhyme scheme was weak, okay np.
Smashing Sin like a born again Christian, leavin em chokin
Every part of City getting buried more than when the southern levies were broken
Cool, again wording is just kind of awkward. Nice concept.
How u even get here when ya moms was known for blowin
Im surprised SC is still alive the way she’d Pac-12 and swallow a Trojan
A bit much but okay, so cluttered that it took away from it. Also seen similar connections with 2 of the 3 together.
When it comes to bars I got em, his are vague n boring
Sin is such a Tiny problem that I should have T.I. come slap em for me
Awful
diggin ya spouse when u leavin the house, slam it n fold it
She should get royalties from Wild’n Out the way she keeps a Cannon Unloaded
Played
I stay with a stack in my wallet, this bum on some garbage
Only time he getting caught with a Mill in his pocket is stillin his album from Target
Eh okay for a gunplay-esque bar. Meek Mill? If so the Mill gunplay has been flipped in regards to him a shit load.

vs

You tryin desperately to hit me but you’re struggling bad, im fuckin chuckling fag
cuz its been a couple weeks since you’ve even landed a punch in the mag!
Stupid, no creativity.
my gut shots’ll make you vomit your lunch in a bag, so don’t sleep bro
Your whole style needs work like Mexicans in front of home depot
That isn't played at all
I seen you dropped early, but after THAT verse aint no way I’d be scared
Cuz your rhymes got more tangles and kinks in it than Blue Ivy’s hair
Okay current event punch. Nothing amazing.
wasn’t prepared to battle a queer, this match up fuckin brought me the chills
you wear the pants in your relationship, but also the skirt, stockings and heels
Shit execution and a used concept.
it’s easy to score w/ ya moms, the slut makes me nut then she’s tasting it quick
so today my goal’s to watch the world cup while I soccer in the face with my dick
Played.
this battle was too fuckin easy, I mean this shit’s got me utterly yawning
I got the win in the bag, plus your wallet, cell phone and all your other belongings
PLayed.
You need an intervention, nigga you pussy, you’re such a fuckin clown P
I’ll throw a brick at your face, you scared to throw a temper tantrum around me
terrible
You ignored all the warning signs, a mistake that led you right to your grave
We all saw the red flags, cuz I shot through all the white ones you waved
You're so gangster


v/KnowP

[ill nik-A]

weak battle guys, knowp, ive seen way better, levie line was done when Katrina and new Orleans, sin, all ur list punches have been done many times before, ur opener was statementish and could've been worded better as a diss if u would've been more specific imo, wasn't a fan of ur verse, the ender had potential but I didn't like ur wording... ahhhhh im going with knowp, less played, played gets annoying to me, sorry bros just being honest <3

[KnowP]

really? damn.

2-2 uppin

[.Twisted.]

This was kinda weak seen way better from kp, sin everything in ur verse was PLAYED to shit nothing stood out just played shit n statement, kp had some punches were done but had better attempts n a less played verse

V/kp

[murda sho.]

Knowp

I stay with a stack in my wallet, this bum on some garbage
Only time he getting caught with a Mill in his pocket is stillin his album from Target


Sin

my gut shots’ll make you vomit your lunch in a bag, so don’t sleep bro
Your whole style needs work like Mexicans in front of home depot

this battle was too fuckin easy, I mean this shit’s got me utterly yawning
I got the win in the bag, plus your wallet, cell phone and all your other belongings

Aaight battle here, Knowp was definitely swinging at Sin but they weren't landing to tough, nameplate are cool and all but when you use em they gotta be something really clever or something with a nice sting to it, Sin verse wasn't too much better though it did have a more enjoyable flow and the belongings punch was FIRE to me, the Mexican joint was like a tiny step above a jab, overall v/ Sin with the more enjoyable verse