WK 10 Ill Nik-A vs Galactic (ill Nik-a Wins)

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[Tic]

I'm thinking 10 or 12.

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!

[ill nik-A]

I’m the best here smashing these kids, with everything u lacking my nig
If u embraced competition… my shit’s more like a bear hug cracking ur ribs
I’m mentioned around the best; that’s something u seek patiently
I mean last week u had so many nik lines… Carmelo is opting for free agency
Pimps don’t only slap hoes, gimme elbow room or u too’ll get smacked bro
but why ask Galactic to give me space… I already entered his girl’s black hole
ur wack flow makes everyone roll with my punches, so fuck this nerd’s spiel
ur concepts & wording are the wackest to date… making success feel like a 3rd wheel
my words real, in order for u to have a dope line u need to quote, quote & quote again
ur family just planned an intervention with Dr Drew cuz of the dependency u’ve grown to them

[Tic]

Ya not feelin as youthful. Ya reads just don’t have the appeal that they used to
That loss in Champ wasn’t just Ill Advised, it was signed & dated w/ your seal of approval
I expect more from a vet, quit rushin it man. Wording’s so light it should come w/ a tan
Ya career’s really starting to Take Off. Now all you need is your punches to Land
You have no emotions, bro, keep actin like ya not a recluse
It seems you’re a RobotNik, so it makes sense for you to battle Sonic & lose
Hungry for bitches but you’ll never put ya face in raw + you’re a racist whore
So if he talks of Chocolate Bunnies in bed, TRUST it’s the Fornicate before
You're a clueless faggot yaself, as long as ya Jordan's are clean, ya happy as hell
Ya girl left t’a Sneak Around. & when she came home u beat her til she put it back on the shelf

[Smog]

I’m the best here smashing these kids, with everything u lacking my nig
If u embraced competition… my shit’s more like a bear hug cracking ur ribs
Iight..

I’m mentioned around the best; that’s something u seek patiently
I mean last week u had so many nik lines… Carmelo is opting for free agency
I like this..

Pimps don’t only slap hoes, gimme elbow room or u too’ll get smacked bro
but why ask Galactic to give me space… I already entered his girl’s black hole
Dope

ur wack flow makes everyone roll with my punches, so fuck this nerd’s spiel
ur concepts & wording are the wackest to date… making success feel like a 3rd wheel
Iight

my words real, in order for u to have a dope line u need to quote, quote & quote again
ur family just planned an intervention with Dr Drew cuz of the dependency u’ve grown to them
This ones nice too..

Vs..

Ya not feelin as youthful. Ya reads just don’t have the appeal that they used to
That loss in Champ wasn’t just Ill Advised, it was signed & dated w/ your seal of approval
Fuckin dope IMO..

I expect more from a vet, quit rushin it man. Wording’s so light it should come w/ a tan
Ya career’s really starting to Take Off. Now all you need is your punches to Land
This was off a bit..

You have no emotions, bro, keep actin like ya not a recluse
It seems you’re a RobotNik, so it makes sense for you to battle Sonic & lose
Iight np

Hungry for bitches but you’ll never put ya face in raw + you’re a racist whore
So if he talks of Chocolate Bunnies in bed, TRUST it’s the Fornicate before
Lol.. Nice

You're a clueless faggot yaself, as long as ya Jordan's are clean, ya happy as hell
Ya girl left t’a Sneak Around. & when she came home u beat her til she put it back on the shelf
Lol. Dope..

This a close battle man..nik I really liked the knock lines, black hole and family plan , dope bars.. Gal I liked ur opener thought that was lotb IMO chocolate bunnies n sneakers were dope too.. 3 quotes apiece here so I gotta go gal with his opener, thought that was dope af IMO.. Could prolly go either way but good read from both..

Vote galactic

[Amen]

Nik:

Opener was self hype, wasn't feeling it too much. Nik lines was cool. Give me space was alright. Wackiest to date was dope, IMO. Intervention was cool. Overall a pretty solid verse, felt you could have did away either self hype and worded just a few of your concepts a littler harsher but none the less a solid verse with a smooth read.

Vs

Gal:

Opener was cool. I've seen take off /land plays a lot. And you didn't give t a fresh enough twist. Didn't like rribotnil, was corny, IMO.. Chocolate bunnies could have been worded a little harsher, IMO but was cool. I've seen a lot of sneaker plays done on Nik but this was a fresh twist, which I liked. Overall a cool verse, I think your opener and your closer were your best bars, and the middle of your verse kind of fell flat for me.

OVERALL: pretty close battle, and feel Nik was Just the more enjoyable verse for me. I don't think his concepts were dope besides that wackiest to date but his smooth wording helped his concepts a lot. As were Gal had some cool concepts but IMO lacked that harsh execution to land them effectively, so w/ that being said...

V/Nik. Nice battle, tho... Props.

[Wordz AhGod.]

Ill nik- embracing was dope, 3rd wheel was nice,

Vs

Gal -Opener was cool, fornicate could have been dope wasn't feeling the execution and wording felt soft,

Think gal had a chance but he didn't take the time to word his stuff right. Nik started dope and kind of lost some steam for a bit but he was consistent for the most part and his missed weren't as bad as gals to me.

V/Ill nik

[KnowP]

I’m the best here smashing these kids, with everything u lacking my nig
If u embraced competition… my shit’s more like a bear hug cracking ur ribs
I’m mentioned around the best; that’s something u seek patiently
I mean last week u had so many nik lines… Carmelo is opting for free agency
ur wack flow makes everyone roll with my punches, so fuck this nerd’s spiel
ur concepts & wording are the wackest to date… making success feel like a 3rd wheel


vs


Ya not feelin as youthful. Ya reads just don’t have the appeal that they used to
That loss in Champ wasn’t just Ill Advised, it was signed & dated w/ your seal of approval
Hungry for bitches but you’ll never put ya face in raw + you’re a racist whore
So if he talks of Chocolate Bunnies in bed, TRUST it’s the Fornicate before
You're a clueless faggot yaself, as long as ya Jordan's are clean, ya happy as hell
Ya girl left t’a Sneak Around. & when she came home u beat her til she put it back on the shelf


pretty slick battle. not as close as it seems. felt gal had some coo hits but were stretched at times and didnt land as hard. ill had the better stingers and wording. bars flowed well. good battle overall.


v. ill

[Packed Graves]

Nik you had, Knick lines, black hole which I thought was spot on & the closer your other bars seemed. Little bit shaky or didn't land as cleanly. But so far the Black hole is line of battle by far.


Vs

Gal you had, opener was decent nothing to crazy, chocolate bunnies was dope & the closer was pretty nice as well. You seemed like you might have rushed this a little bit & didn't come really how you wanted.

I got to give this to Nik for this simple fact he came more polished & wording carried him through his downfalls.

[.Twisted.]

embrace, 3rd wheel

vs.

opener

nik started off hard then started 2 fall off toward the end, gal opener was nice n everything else was worded meh imo but nik 2 hit way harder seen better from gal

v/nik

[miracle]

I’m the best here smashing these kids, with everything u lacking my nig
If u embraced competition… my shit’s more like a bear hug cracking ur ribs
- MILD.. NOTHING TO DIRECT.. LITTLE SELFHYPE ISH
I’m mentioned around the best; that’s something u seek patiently
I mean last week u had so many nik lines… Carmelo is opting for free agency
-OK HIT
Pimps don’t only slap hoes, gimme elbow room or u too’ll get smacked bro
but why ask Galactic to give me space… I already entered his girl’s black hole
-OK, I DIDNT REALLY LIKE IT
ur wack flow makes everyone roll with my punches, so fuck this nerd’s spiel
ur concepts & wording are the wackest to date… making success feel like a 3rd wheel
-PRETTY NICE
my words real, in order for u to have a dope line u need to quote, quote & quote again
ur family just planned an intervention with Dr Drew cuz of the dependency u’ve grown to them
-IIGHT HIT

vs

Ya not feelin as youthful. Ya reads just don’t have the appeal that they used to
That loss in Champ wasn’t just Ill Advised, it was signed & dated w/ your seal of approval
-IIGHT
I expect more from a vet, quit rushin it man. Wording’s so light it should come w/ a tan
Ya career’s really starting to Take Off. Now all you need is your punches to Land
-MILD IVE SEEN TAKE OFF CONCEPTS BEFORE
You have no emotions, bro, keep actin like ya not a recluse
It seems you’re a RobotNik, so it makes sense for you to battle Sonic & lose
-OK
Hungry for bitches but you’ll never put ya face in raw + you’re a racist whore
So if he talks of Chocolate Bunnies in bed, TRUST it’s the Fornicate before
- EHH
You're a clueless faggot yaself, as long as ya Jordan's are clean, ya happy as hell
Ya girl left t’a Sneak Around. & when she came home u beat her til she put it back on the shelf
-ALRIGHT CONCEPT

VOTE-iLL
pretty close battle but i got iLL slightly edging this

[SiK]

On my phone



Nik

Opener was cool. The nik lines was nice...3rd wheel was straight firrreee closer was nice


Gal

Opener was cool, punches land was nice, lost me on sonic, fornicate was fiiire, closer was worded bad. It didnt tie together


Both had a firre bar. Didnt like black hole from Nik but Gal had sonic and sneak around that didnt hit for me real close.

Only thing I can go off here is misses cause everything else Is nearly tied.

V/Nik

Dope battle tho

[murda sho.]

Nik

I’m the best here smashing these kids, with everything u lacking my nig
If u embraced competition… my shit’s more like a bear hug cracking ur ribs


Galactic

Ya not feelin as youthful. Ya reads just don’t have the appeal that they used to
That loss in Champ wasn’t just Ill Advised, it was signed & dated w/ your seal of approval
I expect more from a vet, quit rushin it man. Wording’s so light it should come w/ a tan
Ya career’s really starting to Take Off. Now all you need is your punches to Land
You have no emotions, bro, keep actin like ya not a recluse
It seems you’re a RobotNik, so it makes sense for you to battle Sonic & lose

I think Nik coulda really landed a lot more clean harsh punches, these were jabs at best I've seen Nik drop way better stuff than this, Galactic verse was pretty clean, a couple misses but the ones he got off were well written I fucks wit it so I'll vote Gal

[$in City]

Nik:

I’m the best here smashing these kids, with everything u lacking my nig
If u embraced competition… my shit’s more like a bear hug cracking ur ribs

pretty cool opener

ur wack flow makes everyone roll with my punches, so fuck this nerd’s spiel
ur concepts & wording are the wackest to date… making success feel like a 3rd wheel

lol nice

Galactic:

Ya not feelin as youthful. Ya reads just don’t have the appeal that they used to
That loss in Champ wasn’t just Ill Advised, it was signed & dated w/ your seal of approval

nice opener/nameplay

You have no emotions, bro, keep actin like ya not a recluse
It seems you’re a RobotNik, so it makes sense for you to battle Sonic & lose

ha! another nice nameplay...mad creative

Hungry for bitches but you’ll never put ya face in raw + you’re a racist whore
So if he talks of Chocolate Bunnies in bed, TRUST it’s the Fornicate before
lmao!! nameplays are all on point!! nice wordplay, diss and nameplay

nice battle here overall. I got Gal winning this with one more quoteable bar. The nameplays were on fire!! they didnt get boring every one of them was nice..Niks verse was cool as well but i got him being edged out slightly here...good battle props to both v/ Galactic