Wk 10 Smog vs Twisted (Smog Wins)

[King]

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[Smog]

10...

[.Twisted.]

10 it is

[Smog]

Ur wacker than fuck.. but yo.. it'a expected that u happen to suck..
Cuz in battle i display hate to perfection..n u on MY dick practicing love..
Bastards a dud..no feel fa rap skill or tactics,
To win it'll take acrobatic stunts..Cuz one punch'll have u in the air doin a million back flips.
I chase pussy..Imma man n can't help it at all kid... IT'S TOUGH
If ur confused why the pu tangle move me..its cuz thats a phrase faggots get all twisted up..
i make bucks outsida freight trucks this gay fuck claims he sees tha cash
dawg if ur booty makes cake then all i need is a bowl n mixer to beat ur ass..
U need courage to go at it wit me.. I'm deadly wit knives..
Plus u scared a death n have to touch biggies album to feel ready to die..
Dressin trashy means u get no ass...see thats why u angry par
Look at lawsuit..he'll prolly get booked for his appearance in court befo any charge..

Oops went 12

[.Twisted.]

blah, blah, blah




No point of this, every punch u throw a miss, shit just aint far
N im not intuition but u know 3 of em n a genie in a bottle couldn't help u here
So ya Hush folks, tot a AK to Murda the Sho..... ha ha ha plz hoe
U went on a War rant ...that shuld be issued 2 those 4 letting u win off no shows
Cant believe u made it 2 the champ match guess dreams come true
It was like u had a date with destiny, that ended............from Gallics on you
Got ur girl tucked, we fucked in the back of ur pick up truck, picture the images
I pounded that pussy Tacoma, that Toyota's warranty wasnt enough 2 cover the damages
Call it old school ur bitch by my side at a drive throu, park then she blow
But u stay with a bitch infront 2 pick up....there order throu the drive throw window
Yea 1-2 with mir was gay af, nothing thrown, while my hits make u leak
Ur WorldStar shit homie, ironicly they had the video of u 2 battle posted this week



some quick shit

[ill nik-A]

this was really bad guys, smog, not ur usual self, a ready to die line bro? opener was ghey, an acrobat line, no way bro, then that cake line made me real angry, noooo, didn't like it man, twisted, opener was bad, war rant was mad forced, I have no idea what u did with that galics line, Tacoma was ur best attempt and it was worded wrong, the next to I didn't like... I think I have to go twisted for having a better attempt vs nothing, sorry bros, this is my opinion, holler if u feel indifferent

[Wordz AhGod.]

Smog - Opener was ok could've been dope. Pu tang was funny.

Vs

Twisted- Opener was forced. Date with destiny could have been dope but it made no sense at all. Tacoma is horribly played.

Seem some good attempts in this, not really murder. Smog had two bars I was digging twisted couldn't get his wording right at all.

V/smog

[Smog]

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[$in City]

smogs verse was better overall in my opinion...the warrant line was ok by twisted but not really executed...twisted you had some bars that didn't even rhyme and in my mind that's a cardinal offense in text...smog had just enough to get the victory here imo

v/smog

[SiK]

Smog the opener had a chance but I didn't like the execution....Twisted up was decent but wording hurt it


Twisted Intuition was decent the wording hurt tho...overall u had nice conepts but execution didn't help you here


I think Twisted intuition bar was better than Smogs attempts and overall Twis has the better concepts on his misses....Smog brought it back to the 90's


V/Twisted

[murda sho.]

Smog

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Twisted

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This battle was bad... just a bunch of punches thrown on both sides and nothing landing, actually don't know who won this one, image and damage doesn't rhyme though I know that so with that said I'll vote Smog. *Shrugs*

[King]

3-2 smog

[knucklehead.]

tacome was a cool idea but done poorly

vs

nothing

v/twisted

[Packed Graves]

This was not the best battle, each of you had plenty of down falls through out the verse. Twist ive seen wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better from you, Smog same scenario- feel like your more or less declining.

Vote- Smog gets the vote for more or less better attempts.