Wk 9 Allen Knight vs Cai (Allen Knight Wins)

[King]

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[Allen Knight]

Check goin 10

[King]

@.Allen Knight. @Cai @Cai

[Allen Knight]

Dropping soon

[Allen Knight]

I been on streaks latley, cuz all the lines I sent rare
If this faggot C-4 wins ever, another league blew up & all the good compo went there
Ur a proven biter there's nothing u can say more, shit was played whore
Funny I just seen nieghbors in the theater but I seen nieghbors concepts in ur shit way before
& I destroy ur sluts vag, soon as I spread the hoes legs
I mountain dew that bitch till her pussy looked like it was signaling a fucking code red
Ill spray 8 mags cuz I fathered ur style u stole all my ways fag
We can get it on, Its no sweat to take out my son w/ shots like Marvin gayes dad
Ur chick comes to my concrets, back stage ready to fuck in rude postions
gave me a side show bob, & left w/ her hair frizzed out bigger then dude from the simpsons


Blah im drunk

[ill nik-A]

Allen knight came weak sauce IMO but still had more than enough, I don't think cai gets the format, try the set up/ punch technique, the diss attempts re not working, too plain

I got AK

[SiK]

C-4 And Mountqin dew were doope

Vs

Cai tha Kay Jeweler was a nice concept
Ive never seen it done on em. But you confused me with the wording. The rest were nice attempts but your lacking that punch to make em sting


V/Allen Knight

[madnkrazy]

& I destroy ur sluts vag, soon as I spread the hoes legs
I mountain dew that bitch till her pussy looked like it was signaling a fucking code red

vs

Oh and stop repping jersey, you got me stressed and worried.
This is my state, Sandy should've laid you to rest and buried.

Could tell allen was drunk. He was misspelling everything. lol Still had a couple good punches. Cai really didn't have much in terms of punches just some average disses. Flow was a little off too. allen's wittyness and flow were too much.

vote-allen

[Smog]

I been on streaks latley, cuz all the lines I sent rare
If this faggot C-4 wins ever, another league blew up & all the good compo went there
Iight

Ur a proven biter there's nothing u can say more, shit was played whore
Funny I just seen nieghbors in the theater but I seen nieghbors concepts in ur shit way before
Wording was off IMO

& I destroy ur sluts vag, soon as I spread the hoes legs
I mountain dew that bitch till her pussy looked like it was signaling a fucking code red
Nice wp

Ill spray 8 mags cuz I fathered ur style u stole all my ways fag
We can get it on, Its no sweat to take out my son w/ shots like Marvin gayes dad
Again I think the wording softened the punch a bit

Ur chick comes to my concrets, back stage ready to fuck in rude postions
gave me a side show bob, & left w/ her hair frizzed out bigger then dude from the simpsons
Ok

Vs..


You started a tourney on june 1st...
two weeks later it hasnt started... you trying to summon it,
A Summer Classic example of a lazy faggot is you running it
Statement'ish coulda done some wit this to hit harder

No pussy, bad spelling bitch, should have a ring for this gay,
Even AK jeweler doesn't know a Kiss will always start with Kay.
Iight

I break Jaws, yours dont just eat dick, shit I heard you eat people,
faggot you make that sharks entire existance seem peaceful.
Ehh not feeling the punch

You always claim you're dope, shit youre a walking lie.
You can be a shining star, the ones that fall from the sky.
Statement'ish again

You known for raping men, steady with the blows from his right/left,
this faggot Cold Cocked his dad after twenty minutes in an ice chest.
Again statement'ish,

He rapes you back too I bet, taking photos to make neat portraits.
Only time you'll get help in life is when you scream for it.
See I feel if u just got a lil mo creative with ur concepts they'd hit better but this missed cuz it was plain IMO

Oh and stop repping jersey, you got me stressed and worried.
This is my state, Sandy should've laid you to rest and buried.
Statement again

Well ak prolly the worst I've seen from u mainly cuz execution but u had a couple nice hits wit the wp/np.. Cai I feel ur just tellin stuff instead of being a lil mo creative wit ur concepts which eliminates the punch.. Both verses felt rushed but I got ak here

Vote ak

[Fresh]

c-4, mountain dew

vs

Nothing

Cai's not picking up on how to properly form a punch yet, just gotta write some decent punhces and then you'll click with it.

v/AK

[murda sho.]

Cai

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AK

Ur a proven biter there's nothing u can say more, shit was played whore
Funny I just seen nieghbors in the theater but I seen nieghbors concepts in ur shit way before


Cai's verse was all over the place but keep at it though you'll fine tune it soon enough and some of em may start landing, like that AK Jeweler line coulda possibly hit if worded better v/ AK

[$in City]

Allen:
& I destroy ur sluts vag, soon as I spread the hoes legs
I mountain dew that bitch till her pussy looked like it was signaling a fucking code red

Lmao liked this here….nice wordplay

Ill spray 8 mags cuz I fathered ur style u stole all my ways fag
We can get it on, Its no sweat to take out my son w/ shots like Marvin gayes dad

Most people wont even get this…but I do and I liked it…nice old school references

Ur chick comes to my concrets, back stage ready to fuck in rude postions
gave me a side show bob, & left w/ her hair frizzed out bigger then dude from the simpsons

Lmao!! Good shit

Cai:

two weeks later it hasnt started... you trying to summon it,
A Summer Classic example of a lazy faggot is you running it

lol…cool personal and diss

oh and stop repping jersey, you got me stressed and worried.
This is my state, Sandy should've laid you to rest and buried

pretty cool closer…

Imo the only lines that Cai had were the opening and closer everything else was kinda mediocre…if you would’ve stayed consistent throughout you wouldve had a better chance. The every kiss starts with K couldve been really dope if it wouldve been more thought out and worded better…Allens first two bars were kinda wack to me but he stepped it up at the end of his verse…v/AK

[Spree]

Cai


two weeks later it hasnt started... you trying to summon it,
A Summer Classic example of a lazy faggot is you running it
this was cool but you didn't execute it well you got the concepts but dont make them scar....


AK
your opener was funny, and the marvin gaye was cool. your wording was trash for sure.... to many spritzers prob. but deff a one sided battle here

vote allen knight