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The Last Level
@fresh hey brother, how many lines?
3TC
you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world
Aero the Black Pegasus
12 works for me.Originally Posted by Clout
& 12 it is, goodluck!
3TC
you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
I knew cameras add 10 lbs, didn't know it could add the weight of the world
Aero the Black Pegasus
Fuck your 13-0 record.. Your name is trash so watch this clout
After you C this L theres no question MY heavy punches will knock you OUT
Every win you’ve gotten is from nobodies.. you ain’t decent, k?
To put it in perspective, ur not toppin’ ANYTHING that ain’t a piece of cake
If u ever live up to ur name, its face to face with undergrowth
Because any time you converge w/ another dude it’ll always come to blows
My concepts could blow u away… ur smack dab in Hiroshima
You ain’t just goin out on a limb.. ur tiptoeing could rival that of a ballerina
When I drop a verse the ppl want more, ur just a faggot, clout
And it’s ironic how we X your verses out, even tho ur nothing to rave about
u have a ways to go, and were wondering if you’ll ever make it
Good personals hit close to home, ur shit is overseas on a permanent vacation
12 @Clout
U fell for a Gal, but didn't get cut any slack boss.
Its like u're dyin from heartbreak, the way u caught feelings over that loss!
& Fresh Material's something that u'll Never pen.
When u're active imagination's more dead than the Frontlines has Ever Been!
ur mack game's washed up. It could dive into sinks.
Only time bitches Keep Tabs on u, is after a long night of buyin them drinks!
u'll never harvest a Deal or even a Barter Off it.
Cus we'll only see Fresh Jam, if we're bottling some at the Farmers Market!
If i let the Blade treat him? it'll Cleave His Armor.
& you'll See more Fresh Cuts than satisfied customers leaving the Barber!
If a guns drawn? ur the type to Tear up silly kid.
When the shit fresh maple..is so much sweeter than that syrup really is!
#Thanks Canada for Maple syrup
Gangi þér vel og góða nótt!!
uck your 13-0 record.. Your name is trash so watch this clout
After you C this L theres no question MY heavy punches will knock you OUT
Every win you’ve gotten is from nobodies.. you ain’t decent, k?
To put it in perspective, ur not toppin’ ANYTHING that ain’t a piece of cake
vs
U fell for a Gal, but didn't get cut any slack boss.
Its like u're dyin from heartbreak, the way u caught feelings over that loss!
ur mack game's washed up. It could dive into sinks.
Only time bitches Keep Tabs on u, is after a long night of buyin them drinks!
If a guns drawn? ur the type to Tear up silly kid.
When the shit fresh maple..is so much sweeter than that syrup really is!
Im not going to lie, Fresh i thought you had this in bag when first starting to read- it seemed like you fizzled out towards the end. Clout started off kind of melo, but started to pick up the pace towards the end. To me the Maple Syrup connected with worldplay/personal-punch so therefore was very effective.
Vote- Clout in a close one, Fresh has gotten a lot better- props.
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
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The Last Level
Fresh....
Fuck your 13-0 record.. Your name is trash so watch this clout
After you C this L theres no question MY heavy punches will knock you OUT
Every win you’ve gotten is from nobodies.. you ain’t decent, k?
To put it in perspective, ur not toppin’ ANYTHING that ain’t a piece of cake
u have a ways to go, and were wondering if you’ll ever make it
Good personals hit close to home, ur shit is overseas on a permanent vacation
Vs
Clout....
Ur mack game's washed up. It could dive into sinks.
Only time bitches Keep Tabs on u, is after a long night of buyin them drinks!
If i let the Blade treat him? it'll Cleave His Armor.
& you'll See more Fresh Cuts than satisfied customers leaving the Barber!
If a guns drawn? ur the type to Tear up silly kid.
When the shit fresh maple..is so much sweeter than that syrup really is!
Fresh was pretty fuckin solid here....That opener was dope af imo....Clout over did the nameplays here and keepin Tabs was your best...I got the quotes even but Fresh has the LOTB and harder hits
V/Fresh
Fresh:
Opener was a creative twist on his name, dope. Topping was ok, basic simple but worded and executed nicely. Converge could have been executed better. Out on a limb was weak. X/raves is a played concept. Close to home was cool.
Vs
Clout:
Heartbreak was cool but lacked a harsh execution. Active imagination could have been worded and executed a lot harsher. Keep tabs was cool. Fresh jam was an ok jab. Fresh cuts was weak an played. Fresh maple lacked a harsh execution.
Overall: I think Clout had some decent concept that lacke harsh execution which hurt him. Just feel he didn't have enough sting behind his punches a where fresh dropped a pretty solid verse and granted 1 or 2 of his concepts were either soft or wack, the term concepts were straight and packed sting. His opener was dope and close to home was solid. With that beig said,
V/ fresh - nice battle fellas.
Fuck your 13-0 record.. Your name is trash so watch this clout
After you C this L theres no question MY heavy punches will knock you OUT
Yeah this was hella creative nice line
Every win you’ve gotten is from nobodies.. you ain’t decent, k?
To put it in perspective, ur not toppin’ ANYTHING that ain’t a piece of cake
Nice bar here
If u ever live up to ur name, its face to face with undergrowth
Because any time you converge w/ another dude it’ll always come to blows
This nice too
My concepts could blow u away… ur smack dab in Hiroshima
You ain’t just goin out on a limb.. ur tiptoeing could rival that of a ballerina
Lol, iight
When I drop a verse the ppl want more, ur just a faggot, clout
And it’s ironic how we X your verses out, even tho ur nothing to rave about
Dope IMO..
u have a ways to go, and were wondering if you’ll ever make it
Good personals hit close to home, ur shit is overseas on a permanent vacation
Nice dawg..
Vs...
U fell for a Gal, but didn't get cut any slack boss.
Its like u're dyin from heartbreak, the way u caught feelings over that loss!
Iight..
& Fresh Material's something that u'll Never pen.
When u're active imagination's more dead than the Frontlines has Ever Been!
Dope
ur mack game's washed up. It could dive into sinks.
Only time bitches Keep Tabs on u, is after a long night of buyin them drinks!
Nice
u'll never harvest a Deal or even a Barter Off it.
Cus we'll only see Fresh Jam, if we're bottling some at the Farmers Market!
Lol..dope
If i let the Blade treat him? it'll Cleave His Armor.
& you'll See more Fresh Cuts than satisfied customers leaving the Barber!
Iight
If a guns drawn? ur the type to Tear up silly kid.
When the shit fresh maple..is so much sweeter than that syrup really is!
Iight
Well hot damn this a dope battle... Good punches y'all very close.. Shut I think fresh's opener prolly took this for me in a very hard desicion, here.. The fresh maple and fresh cuts were ok but if another really solid bar replaced one it would of went clouts way but damn good shit to both but yeah I got my boy fresh here...
Vote fresh
If u ever live up to ur name, its face to face with undergrowth
Because any time you converge w/ another dude it’ll always come to blows
u have a ways to go, and were wondering if you’ll ever make it
Good personals hit close to home, ur shit is overseas on a permanent vacation
vs
U fell for a Gal, but didn't get cut any slack boss.
Its like u're dyin from heartbreak, the way u caught feelings over that loss!
ur mack game's washed up. It could dive into sinks.
Only time bitches Keep Tabs on u, is after a long night of buyin them drinks!
u'll never harvest a Deal or even a Barter Off it.
Cus we'll only see Fresh Jam, if we're bottling some at the Farmers Market!
freshes wording killed a bunch of his lines to me.. his opener was a good nameplay but that wording tho ughh.. Clout was consistent with a fairly decent hit, tabs and opener lines were dope.. he started over playing the shit out the nameplays though.
v/clout
カミノコトバ
vsu have a ways to go, and were wondering if you’ll ever make it
Good personals hit close to home, ur shit is overseas on a permanent vacation
I thought this was close. Both had decent flows but clout's punches were a little better and more witty. fresh's concepts were good but the disses were just too simple and needed better wording.u'll never harvest a Deal or even a Barter Off it.
Cus we'll only see Fresh Jam, if we're bottling some at the Farmers Market!
vote-clout
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