1-2 Punch League
Week: 3
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
1-2 Punch League
Week: 3
CHECK INS DUE TUESDAY11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE THURSDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
カミノコトバ
In, check.
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
khv
The Last Level
Gal got u in LLL n 1-2, then u faced me n got knocked off in SAP
We flattened ur whole world...n this L was the last step for u to drop off the map
Last edited by King; June 3rd, 2014 at 11:11 PM
The Last Level
fagg0t your appearance'll bleed- how are people fearing this dweeb
when hes more of a joke then Smog Champing the Lethal Lyricist League
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
King, your bar had some potential but it wasn't a haymaker, maybe too wordy or something but it felt off.
PG, your bar flowed well and was clean but I felt that the setup line was far too filler and had nothing to do with the execution (doesn't have to but it would help it out) and the punchline was more directed towards smog then it was to king. That along with the fact that it was more statement then concept.
v/king
カミノコトバ
King came personal while PG had a similar delivery/concept that I had last week against Fresh. King's concept was better and he tied it in the whole way while coming personal. Gotta go with King here.
PGs set up was nice with the multis. Thought it was going to lead to a fist to the face type diss but it led to basically a Smog diss. King had wording issues but the punch and set up tied in together.
v/King
King was much more personal and direct where as Packed Graves was humorous. My only disappointment with packed graves was the fact that his pinch could be used against anybody and have the same effect. There was no personalization here against his opponent.
Vote - King
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lol dopeOriginally Posted by King
vs
not really feeling this
overall - solid punch vs an attempt... I think pg could have had better punch if the wording was right and included a better set up bar for the concept
v/king
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