Blown Game....

[PMIi]

A lil some....

stop at the metro carry the nine
my vato loosin blood reloaded clips
catch a slug when chips coded
holdin more when I cum ya bitch exploded
driven to testify test my blood
when he stabs ya eye
fuckdem wiseguys
My psychological evaluation scared charles manson
My psycho logic addiction leavin karls mansion up in air
up in there nobody care
Turn the lights off assasination temptation when holding 50 cal
burn the nights revelation led streaks holding ya child
led leads till heads bleed mamas cry and flee
Casted in the shadows will I see the sun
Dark clouds never leave who gave me the gun
Memory glitches dismiss any get wit this
you told her to stay story flip this
you showed her 6 digits slurry blown game theory

[Truth Iscariot]

A lil some....

stop at the metro carry the nine
my vato loosin blood reloaded clips
catch a slug when chips coded
holdin more when I cum ya bitch exploded
driven to testify test my blood
when he stabs ya eye
fuckdem wiseguys
My psychological evaluation scared charles manson
My psycho logic addiction leavin karls mansion up in air
up in there nobody care
Turn the lights off assasination temptation when holding 50 cal
burn the nights revelation led streaks holding ya child
led leads till heads bleed mamas cry and flee
Casted in the shadows will I see the sun
Dark clouds never leave who gave me the gun
Memory glitches dismiss any get wit this
you told her to stay story flip this
you showed her 6 digits slurry blown game theory

Your spelling fucked up the flow a few times. The rhyme scheme was wild and not in a good way. The format of your piece made it difficult to read, the line length was too far off on some of your bars. Basically your shit could use a lot of work but keep writing and I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.