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    Rotten Waste - Mic S

    It began when my heart picked up pace.
    My eyes sparked bright into my dark
    past guiding me into space.

    Blank - like the facial expression with-in.
    When all the pain goes away
    from the phene taking medicine again

    While my blood pumps my lungs plugged
    i can't breathe im heaving
    my sleeping is now, ugh none

    a buzz buzz im unfamiliar with
    like when bees rush fussed
    pissed off yet im lost in a wilderness

    the reason i am in a transient stun
    is imagine a tablet,
    well it had one of my family dug.

    the pain of a mad man
    was quickly tested and measured
    but i never lost temper
    and the pain has been half patched.

    I met a half that i love.
    i said I Do! we grew
    then we knew a baby was due
    thats when i had my son

    i bonded teaching him everyday
    then on may twenty eigth
    he was taken away
    the half patched heart caved

    it began when my heart picked up pace.
    every faith and daily grace
    made me what i am today,
    a rotten waste.

    edit** i tried to use more of an imagery concept rather than wordplay concept -so leave some feed and drop a link. if your feed is really short like "this was dope man. keep at it" or "this sucks quit rapping" then i wont rtf.

    let me know what you think thanks.
    Last edited by graf-x; May 13th, 2014 at 07:23 AM

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