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    Omerta Collective presents...Love Letters

    Love Letters

    A Tale of Wartime Affection



    Waves of pain come crashing down on this full moon night
    Lunar lust has given way to my unending stellar plight
    It ain’t right, that I’m the one who was on the outside
    And continued to fight, with much might, despite rising tides
    The cold wall of waters, ravishing and frigid bite
    To you I write – I must tell you dear, there’s nothing but widespread
    Desolation here, the whole damned city is half dead,
    Over-stressed and underfed or 6 feet deep and full of lead
    I place the enemies in hollow ground to serve my stead
    So that amongst the mortals I may still break bread…and dream
    But night visions are all but empty it seems – I have become a war machine
    Hell bent on resetting righteousness, my main objective
    Is to end the cancer which ate away unity and divided this, Unified collective
    Our love – It grows more distant with each savage kill
    But I hope when I’m done warring and pillaging you care for me still


    Darling One,

    With unwavering love and devotion,
    I write of our life, with emotion
    I miss you dear, so I keep you near;
    And pray that you’re safe from commotion.
    It’s important you know what we’re thinking.
    How the family’s growing and living.
    While ‘you’re’ out there killing and digging,
    the smile from our son is forgiving.
    Our little Jack is now four.
    He knows his Daddy’s, at war.
    Fighting Germans on shore, he plays ‘you’ on the floor,
    and…
    I don’t know, what it means, anymore.
    I’m powerless here, but Women’s Volunteer
    keeps me busy and their efforts are priceless.
    I hear the news on the wireless.
    Of the virus, that tireless violence.
    Now the devils want to annihilate Coventry.
    The terrible attack has been going since three.
    I shudder to think of the killing spree,
    the bodies and dust, of the dead, and debris.

    Hawker Hurricane, reported missing in action.
    In Northern France. My reaction;
    Everything I did, a small distraction.
    Bijou infraction, on my inaction.
    But at the end of the day, before retiring to bed
    I pick up my pen, and share words unsaid
    Of how nice it would be, to drink wine, and break bread
    with the love of my life, my husband, my friend.
    I pour stories out of my day at hand,
    And post them to bases all over Britain.
    I feel myself burn, from concern, and I yearn
    To hold you tight love, on your return.


    Dearest Love,

    I’ve so much to tell you in so little time
    I bend to the lack of reason found in this wars cryptic rhyme
    I wish I could sum up my feelings in just a single line
    Thoughts of how you are divine, thoughts of life is unkind
    And of how it’s cruelty is rubbing off on me
    I see the face of our son upon children who swing in the breeze
    Their bodies suspended by the trees
    Left standing from the bursting napalm
    There is many-a-demon here and I cannot face’em
    I don’t want to face’em…without you by my side
    We are stationed in trenches but truly in your hear I hide
    That bit of me which I crave ravenously to survive
    The smile you long to see again is becoming the thing that dies
    As I see young men laying, staring at their insides
    Which have been exposed by explosives
    For my “bravery” I was promoted
    And the higher-up’s musn’t know this
    But Truthfully I’m scared to death each day that we battle
    I am shaken and rattled. I feel bamboozled and baffled
    This shit isn’t what I signed up for
    I long to return to our happy family, I’m disillusioned with this war…
    What strengthens me is knowing you’re there waiting
    Always so beautiful and faithful, your actions never negating
    The words you are saying. Your devotion to truth shall be rewarded
    And the space between us will soon be thwarted
    Sincerely yours, your solider of righteousness and adornment

    September-8-1940

    Poor London got it in the neck last night
    - 400 dead - Height of fright
    - 99 Jerries’ - incite the light -22 of ours –
    died despite, their war stage fright
    Lots of serious damage. Railways and roads
    Deleterious disadvantage as you re-load
    But things are very quiet, tonight, so far
    And all day today, there’s been no spar
    All troops confined to barracks this morning
    No other news. May their rest be rewarding
    Awful perils living in an enemy country
    And this death penalty they talk of bluntly
    For sheltering your like is nutty, oh honey
    Your promotion at least is some prize money
    Please don’t be scared my lover, my friend
    I am with you, beside you, right till the end
    You say you’re rattled, bamboozled and baffled
    And I am embattled in shackles like cattle
    With a body tied down but a mind that travels
    Inside every chapel to pray with no hassle
    How I wished I prayed harder during the first half of the war
    To restore all the peace that we worked hard for
    Thank you for writing, please write again
    I look forward to the moment my paper and pen
    Reply to your words
    I love you
    Till then,
    May God bless you all, keep you safe
    Amen.


    The next letter sent between the lovers torn
    Was a shocking epic - it's subject - Wars scorn
    Upon reading it the missus was overcome and forlorn
    Widowed and left alone - her soldier killed far away from home
    Such is the cost to pay - playing the game where killers roam
    Freely across the battlefield in their murderous zone
    But they don't feel the plight felt, or hear the moans bemoaned
    When a son losses his daddy and a woman's groom is gone


    The End


    Verses 1,3, and 5 are Truth
    Verses 2 and 4 are @Emilyinthepool

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    Re: Omerta Collective presents...Love Letters

    Quote Originally Posted by Emilyinthepool View Post
    ayyy! (:

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    Re: Omerta Collective presents...Love Letters

    Your art is like poetry too me. It is far from the usual, at least for this websites standards.
    I like your words, even though they don't flow like a typical rap song. your imagery is really nice and respectable.
    "Awful perils living in an enemy country
    And this death penalty they talk of bluntly"
    super cool
    "Such is the cost to pay - playing the game where killers roam
    Freely across the battlefield in their murderous zone"
    Nice descriptive words. good job
    check me out

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...onspiracy-Shit

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    Re: Omerta Collective presents...Love Letters

    bump

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    Re: Omerta Collective presents...Love Letters

    This almost brought tears to my eyes. Just brought back so many memories. As a soldier one of the biggest deals to us are letters, they keep us cheerful and in the heat of battle a letter is like the lottery, just a way to make everything around you disappear if only for the few moment that your reading that letter. I was impressed with both of you. Truth, you especially since we were talking about if you were in the services and you said no. You captures the character very well, your middle verse was just perfect, first one was a very nice tone to set everything off as well, ill be honest I didnt like the last little stanza. I felt it was rushed and could have been worded better. It just seemed choppy compared to the rest. Emily, you made me think of my ex in that first letter, I hate you and love you for that haha. No but really, great job on the return letters. I really enjoyed how you added details from his letters into your own, that really made me feel like they were real letters between lovers during a war. Just a great job guys, if I was to have one gripe it would be about taking a little longer time proofreading and read it aloud to yourselves and just experiment with different worsing to smooth out the flow. Regardless, I loved this. Bravo

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