Pre- K (Pound Cake beat / Drake like flow)

[CLA919]

Pre- K (Pound Cake beat / Drake like flow)


CREAM

You came to me as my enemy
But tell me now in all that you see
In all that you saw
Hate me now for calling this war
I waited patiently, while you secretly crept
All the while I kept your soul calm,
I watched, as you quietly wept
I rather be strung and hung on poplar’s wood
For all that I have endured,
Shut the fuck up and fall back as you should
Bitch-- we ain’t never gonna be cured….
After, when I was a kid… I’d reach for the beams of light
Another broken promise but at least it helped conquered the fright
I’d count to 50 ten times, cause I thought it was a minute
Cause that’s how long my mom said it took for the pain to go away
But I never been it
I knew one day, he would come and rescue me,
Only I was confused by the visions I see
My eyes would flip,
Never knew if I was the one… or just the one in the clip

CREAM

When God and the Angels bowled…
I’d hide behind the couch
And even though I loved Cookie monster,
For some reason I always felt bad for Oscar the grouch
My nursery rhyme book was big and red
I wrote my name in it from right to left,
I used to plug in the mic,
And let’s just say get sunswept
But I was more occupied by the possession music instilled in me
Like the first time I parrowetted,
Madonna said to open the door, that she had the key
Fly girl, yeah, and Solid Gold too – that’s all I wanted to be
Cause when I was dancing, for fucking once, I was finally free

CREAM

So kill me, tie me to chains, and tell me I was wrong
All because I picked up on a few key words in his song
I try all the time,
All the time, I try to see
Who is the one who can listen to me?
In 5th grade I prayed for the first time when I got real sick,
Woke up 100% so the fact that this was all real,
Was really starting to stick
Drill days were a hell of a lot easier then
So don’t fucking tell me about your ether either
Oh and yeah… all the rules you can bend
We read it in the eyes, but realize,
Your boys ain’t whipping my ass no more
Mad as fuck when I seen that target
And you gonna go and take their side in this war?
A prophets law slides,
Yet still you can’t ignore the score
Flipping a fiendish attribute
Cause you know inside your begging for more
… Just like a fucking tricking whore

[CLA919]

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[MsPush]

To me this was all over the place. At first I thought you were talking about a failed relationship/or friendship or possibly your father.. But then you started talking about ur childhood so I started thinking this was the "effects of ur life" after someone put u thru something. So one Line I really liked was the Oscar the grouch line... Metaphorical. Sometimes it seems like you rush a little and use any word that fits instead of taking ur time to find the right wording So the reader gets exactly what ur trying to say. I see you working on multis a little. Keep working. Salute