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    D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

    The Evils


    The Setting

    (TI)
    Living in this place is like eating toxic waste
    And somehow hoping you’ll see another day
    Pusher’s add to the decay, gangsta’s ready to melee
    On these mean streets they display true power – 9’s and AK’s
    And whose gonna challenge that? No one caught in the trap
    They know the consequence can be close friends clapped
    Or your own wig pushed back, sanctuary attacked
    Had many a friend caught up in this struggle – tryin’ to hustle
    Their way out from the gutter steady acquiring rep and muscle
    Keeping the streets cluttered with those addicted to the hardships
    The new age Wild West’s plagued varmints who crave garments
    Of silk and rope chains made of gold the story unfolds
    The same way it’s always been told the meek are prey for the bold
    This beast cannot be controlled because to OGs it never gets old
    This game we play is life to them, a life which has swallowed them whole

    (C99)
    See my pain come from the other side,
    The one you say have no rights to ride
    Fuck a ni99a and the bitch that love em,
    How about the ones that bust back for em
    But you wouldn’t understand standing firm like a shield,
    Or the pain that this shit can yield
    Why do you think I’d take that 5 year hit?
    What do you think I do it cause my life ain’t shit?
    You think I wasn’t bagging up dimes at 15 cause my Dad left me too,
    I forgave as maybe should you too?
    Forgive but don’t forget, otherwise you let
    That hate consume you.
    What bro? You think Joni didn’t find a 22?
    You think I didn’t spend my whole youth runnin
    I’m ignorant, and for your lifestyle I’m stuttin?

    (TI)
    Long ago my family fell victim to the life like dominoes
    I couldn’t worry about power rangers or honor rolls
    Had to worry more about the powder on moms nose
    The flowers which never grow, the insurmountable pedestal
    This place is the shrine of pestilence,
    I see the peace one known has been all but wrecked again
    To block out harsh images I close my eyes and step within
    That stopped working so I learned to pick up pad and pen
    Lyrically scribe the shit, viciously cry to it, misty eyed from the sins
    I had to write and flip….out like I was on my Bones and Thugz shit
    Flip out like I was on my big Cuz the notorious blood shit
    Flip Out like I’m rampaging in the club, shit homie don’t get your ugly mug hit
    This realities got me buggin’ and the family names got me thuggin’
    Shits changed since the days I longed to watch cartoons and the rising moons
    The hood took me under, I’m consumed by the jaws of doom
    And The Evils

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    Re: D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

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    Re: D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

    I love that you both used your styles instead of blending each others cl had the deep poetic style while truth wnet in with a street style the complimented everything as a whole now on a down fal that's strength made it seam choppy when you switched back and forth but it was a text not song so who gives a shit? this was beat mode from 2 of favorites here so far

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    Re: D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

    Had many a friend caught up in this struggle – tryin’ to hustle
    Their way out from the gutter steady acquiring rep and muscle
    Keeping the streets cluttered with those addicted to the hardships
    The new age Wild West’s plagued varmints who crave garments
    aight not a bad flow right chere...


    But you wouldn’t understand standing firm like a shield,
    Or the pain that this shit can yield
    grimey on em...


    Had to worry more about the powder on moms nose
    The flowers which never grow, the insurmountable pedestal
    This place is the shrine of pestilence,
    I see the peace one known has been all but wrecked again
    To block out harsh images I close my eyes and step within
    vicious spits on some real life ish...



    OVERALL:
    dont feel yall did this classic joint justice. coulda definitely dove in more on the evils but i doubt yall lived any part of that life so you wouldnt be able to draw from that experience. TI had the better bars with some good flow and deep emotional feel. Cla verse was just too basic. that one part i quoted was felt but the rest was ehhh. gotta liven it up more next time around. I'd like to see a part two tho.

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    Re: D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

    Word just something we slapped together, next one will be more iller haha

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    Re: D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

    I got part two... sending to you tonight.... LoL @Truth Iscariot

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    Re: D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

    Quote Originally Posted by CLA919 View Post
    I got part two... sending to you tonight.... LoL @Truth Iscariot
    sounds good to me

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    Re: D'Evils (Collab: Truth Iscariot / cla919)

    I sent... please let me know if you have any suggestions before you post though - @KnowP is right - this song deserves it way hotter then what I came with - I think the new piece will suffice though.... @Truth Iscariot

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