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@James L
James l
Packed graves
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@James L
This my check, gimme a few..
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Spitting childish shit, dont let it pass cause he be cursing
u suck ass kid, or should I say kid ass..
...Its obvious the age demographic of PG 13
For him to feast his eyes on what he lacks, I'll feed them punches
He weak, its fact you'll end on your back, no need for hunches
You couldn't fuck a graverobber, nobody fuckin packed graves
you spent more time with hands full of white shit than black slaves
A decorated spitter? A glittered gay man but u could call him that
He ain't a golden glove, his man just has a spray tan on his ass
Ill tie him to my whip n ride, ironically to stall this fag
Leave his eyes blue n lips red, guess u could call it drag
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driving Miamis Team Bus only time you bring flames
so if ever brought the Heat, we know your just dropping off King, James
his type- bends over to make their thong tighter
we havent heard a hit from James Blunt wether its him or the song writer
after you take these shots- ill be splittin your coof'
so everyone can see Jameson trouble, with out referring to liquor abuse
your gangsta but got caught j walkin & fuckin squealed
this wouldnt be discussed going Elway unless hes the best to touch the field
i need a conclusion, for what this battles set up to do
il leave you in the air like Smog, but even hes got a better record then you
@fresh this is the correct verse
Played attempts
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after you take these shots- ill be splittin your coof'
so everyone can see Jameson trouble, with out referring to liquor abuse
your gangsta but got caught j walkin & fuckin squealed
this wouldnt be discussed going Elway unless hes the best to touch the field
^ Dopeee
Elway could have been worded better but was still nice as is, IMO. James; try and come w/ fresher concepts bro. You have the idea of battling but your dropping concepts that have been flipped a GAZILLION times, lol. For an example, Your opener has been done to death on PG as well as your closer, drag concepts are dead and were dead back in 04. Your hunches concept needed better execution and more of a harsher delivery. I liked the concept of the golden gloves but your execution was corny. Same with the hands full of white. If you can just try and come up with more original'ish material, you'll be straight dawg.
v/PG
Spitting childish shit, dont let it pass cause he be cursing
u suck ass kid, or should I say kid ass..
...Its obvious the age demographic of PG 13
Seen PG 13 PG 18 flips on him before, this one was one of the weaker flips
For him to feast his eyes on what he lacks, I'll feed them punches
He weak, its fact you'll end on your back, no need for hunches
I see what you're going for, I feel like the set up and the punch shuold have been reversed here. The whole "feast" and "feed them punches" could have been a better concept if worded better
You couldn't fuck a graverobber, nobody fuckin packed graves
you spent more time with hands full of white shit than black slaves
Not feeling this
A decorated spitter? A glittered gay man but u could call him that
He ain't a golden glove, his man just has a spray tan on his ass
See what ur going for but it fell flat
Ill tie him to my whip n ride, ironically to stall this fag
Leave his eyes blue n lips red, guess u could call it drag
I think doing this would do more than stall him lol that flip didn't work for me, and call it drag was a shitty concept delivered poorly.
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driving Miamis Team Bus only time you bring flames
so if ever brought the Heat, we know your just dropping off King, James
Decent name flip
his type- bends over to make their thong tighter
we havent heard a hit from James Blunt wether its him or the song writer
seen a couple james blunt flips on him, this one seemed simple to me
after you take these shots- ill be splittin your coof'
so everyone can see Jameson trouble, with out referring to liquor abuse
Nicee lol
your gangsta but got caught j walkin & fuckin squealed
this wouldnt be discussed going Elway unless hes the best to touch the field
This was dope
i need a conclusion, for what this battles set up to do
il leave you in the air like Smog, but even hes got a better record then you
not bad lol
James L you need to work on your concepts and executing them. Half the time you have decent concepts but you generally word them shitty. And you've got to get more creative with your wordplay cause the shit your using is either played or super simple or both. PG took a clean sweep here good shit.
v/PG
Ill tie him to my whip n ride, ironically to stall this fag
Leave his eyes blue n lips red, guess u could call it drag
vs
driving Miamis Team Bus only time you bring flames
so if ever brought the Heat, we know your just dropping off King, James
his type- bends over to make their thong tighter
we havent heard a hit from James Blunt wether its him or the song writer
James had grip of weak bars n played stuff. the one i quoted was his best bar, but even that was still kind of a reach. PG had the better lands overall. dont know why he keep duckin me tho.
v. PG
@KnowP who is ducking you?
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
1x FL Best Text Battler
u are u fake nigga.... lmao i was just kiddin bro.Originally Posted by Packed Graves
3-zip
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
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@fresh this is KO
1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
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PG wins KO.
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