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    Freestyle

    What's up
    Turn the volume up
    This girl get it popping in here
    Put your hands in the air
    I be killing them every time beat drop
    Goodness is the name
    I represent New York
    Brooklyn is the game
    This is why I'm hot
    Number one hit in the spot
    I'm on fire
    hotter than a flame
    I'm fresher than a peppermint
    I'm not fake
    I have confident
    when you say I'm the greatest it's a compliment
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ou-Out-(to-My- girl-Cla919)
    Last edited by $The Goodness$; April 24th, 2014 at 11:11 AM

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    Re: Freestyle

    for future reference, there is place in OM u can freestyle and not have to worry about get 2 links:
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    Re: Freestyle

    Well...this was kind of basic I understand it's a freestyle but nonetheless, I feel you could have came harder, some lines didn't even rhyme. I want to see your next drop be serious, hell even come at me if you need to

    AI

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    Re: Freestyle

    thanks loves!

  6. #6

    Re: Freestyle

    Thanks sweetie! everyone has different taste in music, I accept it.

    anyway, I'll be post more in open mic.

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    Re: Freestyle

    Quote Originally Posted by Truth Iscariot View Post
    Well...this was kind of basic I understand it's a freestyle but nonetheless, I feel you could have came harder, ?some lines didn't even rhyme.? I want to see your next drop be serious, hell even come at me if you need to
    Lol.

    Advice for The Goodness: Make your rhymes more advanced

    That's all I have to say for the moment.

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    Re: Freestyle

    thanks!

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    Re: Freestyle

    This was fucking incredible, you spit that hot fiya, these niggas can't fuck with your greatness, my favorite lines from this.

    This girl get it popping in here
    Put your hands in the air

    keep dropping, and elevating, and growing your beard.

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    Re: Freestyle

    Thanks!

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    Re: Freestyle

    Quote Originally Posted by Dia View Post
    This was fucking incredible, you spit that hot fiya, these niggas can't fuck with your greatness, my favorite lines from this.

    This girl get it popping in here
    Put your hands in the air

    keep dropping, and elevating, and growing your beard.
    Dia you're so full of shit
    It makes me sick

    lmfao, I can't do this anymore -walks out of thread-

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    Re: Freestyle

    @$goodness$ off the bat you sound like you're a straight speaker when you flow... correct? Just know when you are writing, the rhymes are literal - my petpieve (sp?) is rhyming up with up even if you switched it with a sup that'd be cool but like writing isn't a flow so I don't respect it the same. It takes two seconds to delete, delete, delete, s u p (and still maintain that fire).

    These guys if they accept our style are just going to have to deal with the fact, that yes, we're a little simple, but don't front - give us an hour and we can be complicated as fuck if you want us too.

    Glad to have another female on this site - please don't let these hater's opinion of me prejudice yours - Good Luck!

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    Re: Freestyle

    Bitches and niggas, the club has been shut down.

    Please make for the exits in an orderly fashion.

    The Goodness is on the map for that beard!

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    Re: Freestyle

    Chris Tucker killed this freestyle right here...

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    Re: Freestyle

    Lol. I look down and see everybody.currently veiwing this thred.

    Its a hit!

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