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    Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)


    Turn You Out
    An Ode to Cla919

    I understand Girl, you never felt a love so real
    You trying to find out how this black dick feel
    Don't be scared, I promise to beat it up - pull your hair
    Do all the freaky things with precision and care
    I'm not being sarcastic I go all out whenever Truth is dared
    I go all out, lick that titty residue and smell those underwear
    I go all out to get all in that chubby snatch
    Make you leave deep scratches on my back
    With a dick like this you won't know how to react
    In fact, we can get it popping tonight if you like
    I don't even mind if you been ran through and that pussy ain't tight
    I'm just glad you're plump and white, oh so fly as a kite
    Let my hairy balls be your means to bypass plight
    And suck em just right, I bet those tits hang low
    Like a mid-2000's rappers chain and pants
    I've been wondering if you've let that pussy mane grow
    Could I see it if you wore a belly shirt and danced
    But I'm being for real girl so tonight don't make plans
    I might not have the blackest dick, but if you give me the chance
    I'll turn you out

    @CLA919 what do you say? for real though?

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    Re: Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

    So reading CLA919 verse to this verse is like this shit remind me of some Roxanne Shante vs UTFO....Very cut throat with the punches...I like the theme of her getting the dick...the way you act like you about to hit but point out the flaws she has or had...very funny, very entertaining...Yes TP owned it all.....Flow was there had nice imagery the multies and internals was subtle but this is a diss verse that you actual had a topical feel....Nice....

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    I like it! I thought it was a cute piece! full romantic words.

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    Re: Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

    This is great. I love the flow of the piece, the nit picking about parts of bodies and the out of control ego that goes with it.
    I thought the imagery was cool, and the rhymes were sweet.
    The words were hilarious.
    Funny, cool, read.


    lol @ the last bit...

    "what do you say? for real though?" LOL

    I like your style.

    Your dirty, rotten, scoundrel, style.
    Last edited by Emily; April 26th, 2014 at 01:54 AM

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    Re: Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

    lol @ the two females seeing this was "Romantic" & "Sweet" the next female i try to lure into my web of dirty, rough, one-night-stand sex will hear something similar to this haha

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    Re: Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

    Ha!
    I meant sweet as in nice, as in good, word wise.
    Not sweet as in romantic!
    Nothing sweet or romantic about it.

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    Re: Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

    Too late now lol

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    Re: Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

    I never did get my answer from CLA919...

    Something i've always wondered is if the first 9 in her name was supposed to represent a P. as in Clap19

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    Re: Turn You Out (to my girl Cla919)

    lol this shit was amusing and pretty funny. still good though, i feel the vybe. real dirty talk, flowed well & put some real honesty behind ur words. imagery was very detailed...too detailed lol jp, but this was alright bro. keep writing homie.
    Last edited by Illustrious.; April 27th, 2014 at 06:25 PM
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