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    Just some off the top bars

    ill reply to other shit in a bit,,just felt like writing so theres no topic







    Never been one to lead blind, but it grows harder as every dream dies
    If you want truth, it’s cool, I’m known to pull wool over the sheeps eyes
    Born with a kings mind, in a palace of dirt, full of malice n thirst
    N u fight over nothing, cuz u need something, that’ll help balance the hurt
    Trapped ina verse, shackled now, passion burns, no backing down
    Freedom is sin, so I grab this pen, n watch as words start lashin out
    Another habit found, mind dark tinted, so sharp witted
    If I swallowed my tongue, I would probably cut my heart wit it
    Reflect a sharks image, to attack is hopeless, teeth cracked n broken
    Only a threat, when im upset, and trying to find my way back to the ocean
    All I lack is emotion, or am I confused again and all I have is devotion
    As there anger is crafted n spoken, people forget ta breath
    Cuz the whole time there looking for a prince, and all they get is a BEAST

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    wack till I see links..
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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Nice
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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Quote Originally Posted by Hush View Post
    Nice
    lets collabo dawg you pick the topic

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    @KnowP how many links is needed fag face

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    8..
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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Never been one to lead blind, but it grows harder as every dream dies
    If you want truth, it’s cool, I’m known to pull wool over the sheeps eyes beast intro
    multis and graphic detail the biggest strength here if this is your randon i almost fear you effort material lol but id like to see it none th e less this was a great read

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Quote Originally Posted by makengknowcentz View Post
    Never been one to lead blind, but it grows harder as every dream dies
    If you want truth, it’s cool, I’m known to pull wool over the sheeps eyes beast intro
    multis and graphic detail the biggest strength here if this is your randon i almost fear you effort material lol but id like to see it none th e less this was a great read
    I appreciate it yo, and yeah i am trying to stray away from the battling and felt like just taking some time to write so i set 15 minutes ont he clock and wrote bars, thats what i came up with lol

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Another habit found, mind dark tinted, so sharp witted
    If I swallowed my tongue, I would probably cut my heart wit it

    ^ Probably the best bar, IMO. Metaphor was nice but the imagery made it better, tbh. Overall a pretty solid piece dude. Props.

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    writting drills just like i do lol i feel you but punchlines are addictive for every topical i do i also do a battle joint to keep fresh lol

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Quote Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod. View Post
    wack till I see links..
    God of War's Evasion Tactics against Wordz AhGod: Successful

    Review: Yo, this was pretty cool. You ain't got shit on me but I dig it though.
    The multis were hitting, even if they weren't spectacular. It's better than the average writer so that counts for something at least.

    Just some bars anyways, so it was iight.

    Before I Posted: Yo, that sharp witted bar was fire. Makes me want to go into some clever shit with my next drop.

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Quote Originally Posted by God of War View Post
    @KnowP how many links is needed
    two, princess. and i know its just a freestyle, but its 16 lines minimum son. add some or i'll have to shut this production down...
    Last edited by KnowP; April 22nd, 2014 at 06:42 PM

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Quote Originally Posted by KnowP View Post
    two, princess. and i know its just a freestyle, but its 16 lines minimum son. add some or i'll have to shut this production down...
    Lol that rule is dumb tbh. Yall should throw that one out.

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    Quote Originally Posted by Letterman View Post
    Lol that rule is dumb tbh. Yall should throw that one out.
    I'm inclined to agree tbh

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    Re: Just some off the top bars

    This was dope to be some random bars, I see you jumping back in the ring on some Rocky status shit, I see you.

    BTW the rule is a necessary evil because no one ever reads other peoples work without it, lazy fucks.
    Last edited by Truth Iscariot; April 22nd, 2014 at 08:47 PM

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