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Thread: Salamander vs Galactic (Galactic Wins)

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    Re: Salamander vs Galactic (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Salamander:

    Opener was forced, plus didn't like it TBH. Page out of your book is crazy played, I've seen that concept flipped a thousand times. Mac & Cheese was nice, liked it actually. Actic was eh, not crazy about it, felt like the execution was corny. Infant tree was forced, wouldn't it be Infant trees? I think that would have helped that concept a lot, but it was still corny too me, IMO. I think you had a pretty weak verse here, like the beginning stages of writers block, TBH. Not your usual. This verse just completely lacked harshness that I'm accustomed reading from you, bro.

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    Galactic:

    Amountin is a played concept, tbh and your flip was corny. 911 attacks was ok, Hush vote was blahhh/corny. Estimate was dope, I'm not really fond of Initial plays on a name but this was fire, IMO. Durant was wack. Overall, not one of your better verses but pretty consistent here.

    I think Gal definitely did edge this barely, IMO. His verse was just a little more consistent. I mean, 2 forced vs 2 corny, 2 played vs 1 played and wacl/corny. So basically Mac & Cheese vs. Estimate and, IMO Estimate was a fresher/more direct PUN. So with that being said, I have to go with...

    v/Gal over Sal by Smog's wifey's twat hair.

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    Re: Salamander vs Galactic (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
    My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
    He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
    If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.


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    Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
    Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
    Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
    Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
    You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
    It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely


    Sal rushed n keyd this verse. he usually doesnt have played bars but he had a couple in this one. Galactic surprised me with some dope ass flips in this one. way more consistent and with harder bars overall. good battle though.

    v. gal

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    Re: Salamander vs Galactic (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    salamander
    Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
    When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
    nice wordplay here.
    I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
    So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w/.
    lmfao
    Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
    It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
    this was bad here, don't like it
    My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
    And rankings? You won't climb 'actic.. 'cuz your verses never hit that point.
    He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
    If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.
    i'm not liking this either, i don't know what happen.

    you started off nice, and ripping the kid, but towards the end, ur verse hit a low, I see what you did with the infantry wordplay but it didn't tickle my fancy


    Galactic
    I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
    But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than you
    nah, i'm not liking this
    Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
    Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
    eh, this is okay
    Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
    Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
    rofl, nice punch here
    You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
    It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely
    [b]nah, more self hype than anythin, not feelin[/]b
    Dude you got skills I'll admit but who you stressin to be?
    All who follow a Durant knows he's HOF but NEVER the best in the League
    this was week here , also you complimented him a bit.

    same as salam, u started off nice, but fell of towards the end, your post to diss the fuck out of him not compliment him, the hush reference killed it, if you had more punches like this, ur verse would have been unbeatable


    v = salamander.

    both battlers where evenly matches here, there verses even started, and fell off in the same area, I felt like I was reading their verses backwards, the reason I'm giving this to sal is because his verse was more technically sound, and his wording was killer, something galactic lacked here.

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    Re: Salamander vs Galactic (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
    When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
    pretty good, liked the play.
    I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
    So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w/.
    decent
    Proving you're unlike the last kid? Your shitty rap is whack indeed.
    It doesn't just strain our eyes, that shit'd make 50 packs of Mac & Cheese.
    lol this was fresh, was feelin this
    My wording's earning every bit, you can't word a clever hit that moist.
    And rankings? You won't climb 'actic.. 'cuz your verses never hit that point.
    ehh ok.
    He's due to be dissed, brutally ripped & this brute is equipped w/ guns...
    If Galactic ever shows some infant tree, he's luring kids w/ drugs.
    pretty good play, seemed a lil forced, but pulled it off.

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    I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
    But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than you
    [B]cool opener, feelin it/B]
    Bitches be Doing me daily while you're dead in the sack
    Doing you involves more Conspiracy over a Loss than the 911 Attacks
    pretty good
    Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
    Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote
    this was decent lol
    You never get pussy while I'm w/ new bitches smashing weekly
    It's become so difficult for Estimate he avoids math completely
    good hit
    Dude you got skills I'll admit but who you stressin to be?
    All who follow a Durant knows he's HOF but NEVER the best in the League
    alright closer

    this battle was close as hell, could go either way. both came with some good shit. sal had his opener and mac and cheese bar those were fresh...Gal his opener, 911 attack, and a toss up between hush vote and avoiding math but either way in my eyes, i thought gal came more consistent with hits here.

    v/Gal
    - W a r r i o r B l o o d -

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    Re: Salamander vs Galactic (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Call an ambulance quick.. scandalous kids are better dead, pal.
    When it comes to talent that wins championships, it's never Bengals.
    I'm doin' me & you're doing you, I'm refusing to unite our actions.
    So if I ever take a page out of your book, I'm using it to wipe my ass w

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    I see you Lookin Down on Alpha w/ attempts of clownin dude
    But bro you're never Amountin to him when he's Peaked w/ more crowns than yo
    Reading your verse is a Drag like steering a tugboat
    Dog you're persona's so tired & misleading ya whole career is a Hush vote

    both had some forced wordplay that just didnt work IMO, climb actic and infant tree from sal were just off imo, bengals kinda works for me so i'll give you that, estimate didn't really make a whole lot of sense from gal and i'm not really a fan of one letter plays. this is a hard one to call but i have gal getting the slight edge for having less misses than sal, could go either way depending on preference i guess tho...

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    Re: Salamander vs Galactic (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Thought climactic and bengals lines were dope from sal and crown / hush vote were equally dope from gal. Honestly both came consistent it's hard to decide a winner but my VOTE GOES TO SAL because I just thought his lines were witty as fuck. The hush vote line was funny to me and crown was well execute but I just honestly enjoyed sals quotes a bit more. Great battle here guys best of luck moving forward

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