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ayoo...
DK's back in action, my gats be blasting & i'm not giving a fuck...
while dude's never twisted metal so i don't think his names fitting enough
Peeped that pro pic, posing with a tedious expression on his face...
& that's what the last crowd looked like at his show before they left the place
I'm vicious with the text skills, i'll be sure to mangle this nerdy fag...
this dude's concepts are so old they ended up along with dust in my kirby bag
I bring darkness into the area, making the rate of this pussy's heart spike...
you won't need night vision to be able to see dude get scared of a dark knight
In shape & ready to fight, i'm known to deliver hits with power like black holes...
you'd only have a chance of beating DK while playing super smash bros
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You’re too easy to beat, I’ll wrap you up in a white sheet
Because the only time anyone says good night is right before they’re going to sleep
You’re not a Templar but you dress up like one and LARP with your favorite friends
And I’m convinced the fake swords they use aren’t the only wood that gets laid on your chest
I’m a vet so when I rhyme I get a lot of laughter, dude you’re not a rapper
Your bars are taking such a dive they should get a surprise vist from Jon Taffer
It’s almost like a cartoon when I punch out your lights guy
Cause there’ll be more stars floating around dark than a cloudless night sky
When the fans say Ben will destroy the Dark Knight you seem confused
So here’s a hint, they’re not talking about Affleck in the Batman vs Superman movie reviews
Bend had the opener and closer both hit well imo
Dk really only had his opener
Even bends misses were better tbh
V bender
Not Impressed
DK's back in action, my gats be blasting & i'm not giving a fuck...
while dude's never twisted metal so i don't think his names fitting enough
I get what you're goin for, but you could have done so much more w/ the twisted metal concept. Weak opener
Peeped that pro pic, posing with a tedious expression on his face...
& that's what the last crowd looked like at his show before they left the place
Could have been worded better, soft jab here
I'm vicious with the text skills, i'll be sure to mangle this nerdy fag...
this dude's concepts are so old they ended up along with dust in my kirby bag
Not feeling tihs
I bring darkness into the area, making the rate of this pussy's heart spike...
you won't need night vision to be able to see dude get scared of a dark knight
Seems you're shaking the rust off, you've got the idea but your execution isn't nice
In shape & ready to fight, i'm known to deliver hits with power like black holes...
you'd only have a chance of beating DK while playing super smash bros
Not feeling this
vs.
You’re too easy to beat, I’ll wrap you up in a white sheet
Because the only time anyone says good night is right before they’re going to sleep
Not a bad jab, decent nameplay, wording is hurting you tho
You’re not a Templar but you dress up like one and LARP with your favorite friends
And I’m convinced the fake swords they use aren’t the only wood that gets laid on your chest
I've seen the chest punch done a few times, played..
I’m a vet so when I rhyme I get a lot of laughter, dude you’re not a rapper
Your bars are taking such a dive they should get a surprise vist from Jon Taffer
Not bad
It’s almost like a cartoon when I punch out your lights guy
Cause there’ll be more stars floating around dark than a cloudless night sky
Decent
When the fans say Ben will destroy the Dark Knight you seem confused
So here’s a hint, they’re not talking about Affleck in the Batman vs Superman movie reviews
Feeling this, nice closer
Seems to me DK is shaking some rust off, once he gets his grasp on this again he'll be more of a threat. MVGT Bender, more polished verse w/ harder hitting punches.
v/Bender
@Dark Knight voting links please
DK's back in action, my gats be blasting & i'm not giving a fuck...
while dude's never twisted metal so i don't think his names fitting enough
In shape & ready to fight, i'm known to deliver hits with power like black holes...
you'd only have a chance of beating DK while playing super smash bros
opener was cool, beating DK was okayish for FL at least
vs
You’re too easy to beat, I’ll wrap you up in a white sheet
Because the only time anyone says good night is right before they’re going to sleep
It’s almost like a cartoon when I punch out your lights guy
Cause there’ll be more stars floating around dark than a cloudless night sky
not a bad battle.. I see some rust from both, DK had shitty wording and some weaker then expected concepts tho his opener was creative imo. Bender just barely took this cos his wording was horrid and stretched the hell out but his concepts were just a tad bit on the more creative side. Though if this was a 16 line battle I think he would have loss if he kept up with them nameplays.. most of them Ive already seen used on Allen Knight a lot.
v/Bender
カミノコトバ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
links.
props on the verse @Bender
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DK's back in action, my gats be blasting & i'm not giving a fuck...
while dude's never twisted metal so i don't think his names fitting enough
good hit
Peeped that pro pic, posing with a tedious expression on his face...
& that's what the last crowd looked like at his show before they left the place
nice usage of opponents avy pic
I'm vicious with the text skills, i'll be sure to mangle this nerdy fag...
this dude's concepts are so old they ended up along with dust in my kirby bag
nah wasn't feeling. too simple
I bring darkness into the area, making the rate of this pussy's heart spike...
you won't need night vision to be able to see dude get scared of a dark knight
cool little line with nameplay
In shape & ready to fight, i'm known to deliver hits with power like black holes...
you'd only have a chance of beating DK while playing super smash bros
lol dope line
DK - overall cool verse. Just counted 1 miss
You’re too easy to beat, I’ll wrap you up in a white sheet
Because the only time anyone says good night is right before they’re going to sleep
simple but effective
You’re not a Templar but you dress up like one and LARP with your favorite friends
And I’m convinced the fake swords they use aren’t the only wood that gets laid on your chest
lol funny line
I’m a vet so when I rhyme I get a lot of laughter, dude you’re not a rapper
Your bars are taking such a dive they should get a surprise vist from Jon Taffer
ok hit. kinda bland tho
It’s almost like a cartoon when I punch out your lights guy
Cause there’ll be more stars floating around dark than a cloudless night sky
very nice line with the nameplay
When the fans say Ben will destroy the Dark Knight you seem confused
So here’s a hint, they’re not talking about Affleck in the Batman vs Superman movie reviews
dope closer
Good verse Bender
This was an enjoyable battle to read. Good job by both. I wouldn't mind seeing a rematch. My vote is goes to Bender for an overall stronger verse
I'm vicious with the text skills, i'll be sure to mangle this nerdy fag...
this dude's concepts are so old they ended up along with dust in my kirby bag
vs.
I’m a vet so when I rhyme I get a lot of laughter, dude you’re not a rapper
Your bars are taking such a dive they should get a surprise vist from Jon Taffer
It’s almost like a cartoon when I punch out your lights guy
Cause there’ll be more stars floating around dark than a cloudless night sky
v/Bender. His concepts were better and had slightly better wording. I would've quoted the closer had the wording been tighter. Dark Knight work a bit more on developing concepts. If it's an easy concept, it's probably been done.
5-0 @Dark Knight good battle homie
Bender wins KO. Closed.
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