Twisted Fantasy F4F

[olie]

(Hip Hop beat)


Hasn't been mixed yet. Appreciate all feedback.

[Rilla]

Cool

[olie]

Simplified version with a bit of mixing:

[Oxymoron]

I dig this. Creepy ish.

That sound like someones using an electric razor on someones hair with a comb. I like that. But thats probably not what you were going for.

Its all good. but iunno feels like its missing something.

Listened to firsat one. and felt like it had more impact with the sounds being a similar volume, i think maybe in the 2nd one your heavy scratch might be a little too prodominant.

[olie]

This forum seems really inactive. Anyway here's the last version i'll post up:



Still gotta tweak and mix.

[ChosisDaKid]

I like it. This creepy vibe there's just something about it that appeals to me

[Blackflags]

I'd be more than happy to give you some feedback if you could edit in your 2 feedback links, or just post them up. If you're not familiar with out system here, this is a link that explains everything. We use this system to increase activity and interaction.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...p-Instructions

I will have to close this thread if I see you haven't posted them. If you are ready to after it has been closed, PM me with the links and I will reopen it immediately, and even post the links in FOR you. Just trying to be fair. Thank you for the cooperation.

[Blackflags]

I'm going to go ahead and close this, but I will give you feedback, as I do a little production myself. The sounds were definitely different, and you could tell it was a de-tuned track. The only thing I didn't really like were the 3 note strings that pop out at you. I feel it through the whole tune off, if that makes sense. I'd be happy to give you some pointers, and also more feedback once I see you have PM'ed me with your links. Sorry man, but rules are rules. PM me with the links, and I got you.

[Daz]

kinda sounds like something i would hear on a linking park album as a breakdown