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    Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    pitt of emmotions all hail how the change begins, when love becomes sin,
    posing as lust passion rust and it becomes the grave im burried in.
    till death do us parts your promise but you chose to kill us how dishonest?
    next time ill polygraph interegations justify love with due process, regardless,
    the struggles of completion is nonsense.
    her tainted lips leave kiss inprints... placing your lies inside me,
    your words disquised or maybe kidnnaped the trurth denide me.
    or maybe cupids is a disgruntal employee who fires arrows blindly.
    fake tears reverse the psychology but rewind and play dont change she walked away,
    i didnt see my shoesmarks in that mile so how can you claim we feel the same way?
    my eyes see misty skies weathered by such bitter rain.
    riddled with a waterlogged face which engraves a labrynth of pain.
    let me create a canvas..tears water paint self protaits pcasso'd to a shattered frame.
    mondane emmotion set im feeling a little "et toute brute" betrayed.
    yeah im weak, so weak ill let you finish first ill take silver and pretend all is well
    yeah im weak so weak taking jesus nails but leave you heaven and inhail hell.
    even if not my wife i made a vow, to good an bad times wow look where we are now
    but we are not lost i will always find you in vowels.
    outside of my mother and daughter you gave me life, asthma attacks
    i dont fight if this is how you find your happiness make me a sacrifice.
    this is my burden now, why make your concious decide if it feels guilt?
    pitty "ill always love you's" dont feed the pallet emptiness has built.
    stare at an empty room used to be filled with light,
    now darkness consumed from depression exumed walking in losess life.
    let this be my tomb on the walls write suicides notes,and sing each qoute,
    memories become melodies in fact,
    beauty becomes tragedy this thing called love is like the titanic soundtrack.
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...475042-mislead
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Sleep-s-Deceit
    Last edited by makengknowcentz; April 15th, 2014 at 05:39 PM

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    Intro to the intro?

    Dope rhyming son

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    Good use of multi's and a nice drop... @Professor Frost ... Do you think he'd do good in sacred scriptures?

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    cla919 tell me more about sacred scriptures

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    Quote Originally Posted by makengknowcentz View Post
    cla919 tell me more about sacred scriptures
    This is Sacred Scriptures my friend.

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdis...red-Scriptures

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    ill def peep you out

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    get your links man. i dont wana close dope writing if i dont have to.

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    what do u mean link like copy and paste who i respond too?

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    Disregard that useless fat fuck.

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    no serious is it a copy and paste of links i respond too?

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    Just find two RB links and copy and paste them. Fuck doughp.

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    Re: Quick work (this is just a little something before i drop my intro verse)

    2 or is three?

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