Mofo am ILL

[Mk Wrath]

I kill so many emcees.. Making ULTIMATE KILLS../
Throwing money around.. Like I got DESPERATE BILLS../
Everybody stare when I ride.. I got ESCALADE WHEELS../
Like a mathematical set.. I got INSTRUMENTAL RAP../
Your shit is hired.. Like a car RENTAL SHOP../
Your intelligence aint top 5.. You got a MENTAL FLOP../
You're a BROKEN ARROW.. You aint got DIRECTION../
I rap like a FIRED BULLET, you rap like a SNAIL.. You aint COMPETiTION../
Am a HUNTER.. Your whack ass is FAIR GAME../
In rap am CARBON DIOXIDE.. Am putting out your FIRE FLAME../
You're a GIFT BOX.. Nigga am RAPPING(wrapping) TIGHT../
I aint a PUSSY like you.. So we won't have a CAT FIGHT
I rap like a LION.. In a battle I'll rip you apart like TOILET PAPER../
Am chopping ya head off.. Am fly like a CHOPPER../
You rap like Whacka Flocker.. I rap like Nas fuck it am DOPER../
Am killing you while laughing.. Like THE JOKER../
Not a video game.. Am playing you like POKER../
Like you got yourself hang by the kneck.. You're a CHOKE
Even though am 'RICH'.. I can't 'AFFORD' to lose battles../
The kinda 'ROUGH BARS' I spit.. Are not prison are filled with broken 'BOTTLES'../
You saying ya rhymes are 'sick'.. When you only got a 'small cough'../
Even if 'tear' you in '2places', I won't be happy.. Bec I never get 'In-Half(enough)'../
You think you on the 'FLOOR(flow)'.. Cuz ya face looks like a 'MOP'../
You aint going anywhere.. You got no 'HOPE(hop)' in 'HIP HOP'../
Nigga you can't 'stand me' .. Am giving you a chair../*to sit*

[KnowP]

See rule #1 man.

[The Great Father]

Rule #5000= DoughP's cholesterol reading.

[Endeva.]

dude... you'll be better off goin down the topical route, not random 'gangsta' vibe... it's just too generic and played, said and done.... if u are gonna go down that route you need to make sure they are as strong as possible

this verse didn't really hit the mark for me, you need to take some time and read through some other members stuff, get an idea what I'm talkin about

keep at it

.....pz