Blackflags, D. Bird, and Chi Money - "Beware" Remix

[Mr. Write]

Blackflags got asked to do a remix to Big Sean's - Beware song and me and Chi joined in on the fun. Here's the end result. 1st verse - Blackflags, 2nd verse - D. Bird, 3rd verse - Chi Money

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[Kdanger]

This is nice man! i dig the beat. Blackflags was my fav great stuff overall. The chorus isnt my fav but it works for the song keep it up!

[Nahlidge]

Ha, this is nice. Nice cover of the hook. Didn't think I'd ever hear Blackflags on some fun shit like this tbh lol. It's a fun track, don't be so fun to let the technical stuff slip a little and have some more fun on it though. I think you should tried to do the melody of the hook in with your verse somehow. Would been cool. Write, you're starting to sound the same on every track I think. Sounds like I already heard this verse from you. I think it's cuz of the flow/delivery though. I think it's the one you're most comfortable with and you might be falling into it. I was doing that for a while. Chi was nice on this. Can't say I've heard much from him. This was nice though. Track was cool.

[Pair-A-Dyce]

I cant say one part really stood out but it was overall decent. I think you all had a different style and it kinda made it feel like the song was 3 separate pieces and not one whole track. Hook was ehhh, I see what you were doing with it though, execution is missing something maybe some adlibs or a slightly off pitch in a layer.

[Daz]

blackflags i honestly didn't know you could do music in this tone and cadence. good to know. lyrics were pretty cool, flow was on too. D Bird had a cool verse too, but it didn't really have anything to do with the song. Write you were okay, the delivery was a tad bit off at points and you sounded like you were running out of breath. overall it's cool, but the song isn't cohesive at all. either way, keep working