CHAMP WK 10: Cai(6-3) vs. 一四三 (5-2) [143 Wins]

[OG Maestro]

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CHAMP MATCH,
WINNER REMAINS/BECOMES THE HW CHAMPION OF THE SS LEAGUE!

@Cai @ 一四三

Pick 1 Topic from the list & create a verse from it
Topic list is here, http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Week-10-Topics

Check ins due on Thursday by 11:59PM
Verses are due on Saturday by 11:59PM
Voting ends on Monday by 11:59PM
New matches are set up on Tuesday's Morning(Before Noon)
(All times run on Pacific Time)

Please be conscience of the full list of rules
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...642/index.html

5 Votes are required this week.
3 Regular battles, 1 Contenders battle, 1 Champ
Every regular missing vote results in a -1 vote for each battle on your next SS League battle. Every Contenders & Champ missing vote results in a -2 vote for each battle on your next SS League battle.

P.S: Recognition will be given to VOTW(Verse of The Week)

Goodluck!

[143]

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[143]

I was poured into a space, yet, defined....
Where angles of the sublime met with confidence, aligned
I knew it when I climbed to seat at the local amusement park
Our start was confusing, almost left with the protrusion parched
Damn near delusional, championed your numbers, ecstatic
My inners, a cataclysmic wonder, the exterior, autocratic
Your smile was automatic, I'm your pragmatic addict
These arms were emphatic, hold tight to our schematics
Making the first floor shake with passionate displays
Graphic dismay from side chicks made abstinence a stay
The player died when I arrived on the third floor, in the bathroom
Killed off the competition letting these insecurities wither
Even at dinner on the sixth floor, your words became a vacuum
When you professed love for me and to come hither....
I could say being in this dwelling, comfort was compelling
But that was the swelling that hid the infection, repelling
Hell I was telling my boy the other day on the ninth floor
How you invaded my cyberspace, resurrecting new insecurities
Finding fault of me in obscurities, questioning what do I fight for
Not knowing there was an entity feeding you impurities.....
The twelfth floor crumbled, the field of dreams with us, bulldozed
Your actions towards me were vile and compressing, fools scold
Said that you living in the high-rise of her sanctity was a fallacy
That grown the callous acts of malice from her fantasies
In which it has me here, confirmed on the roof, losing my religion
Because faith in my decision is faulty, choosing rescission
So I'm revoking my terms of endearment and no longer hold you
From the eviction processes that your seeking without damages
Signed sealed and delivered, yearning for an absent of balance
For my life is no longer a problematic child that control you.....

As I fall from these heights, the air whistles a song of peace
My body softens to release of pressure from it all, on the concrete...

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[Mike Wrecka]

UP I will edit my vote in later

[OG Maestro]

Quick vote while I'm on mobile

Rhythm - Tie

Rhyming - 143

Creativity - Tie

Storytelling - 143

Signifying - 143

Imagery - Tie

Vote: 143 for possessing the verse which was superior on.more categories than Cai's.

[Stranger]

quotables from cai.
A single room isnt spacious enough to contain shit your mind battles with.
Try to replace the chain with love and arrange bliss with time's fragile wit.
To be more accurate, you should address life as an art and master it.
Knowledge knocks so gather it and keep your heart immaculate.
With a foundation set, the frame will be constructed with ease.
Abruptions will cease, and corruption will be adjusted in peace.
Bend the road into a curve, swerve and commit to natural healing.
Persisting with lateral weaknesses brings out that admiral feeling.

this was a pretty dope verse here, at times your flow was impeccable, and I think you captured the topic the best you could here, but this is a champ match and you should of had as many quotables as you did bars, the mind battles with, time's fragil with, scheme killed it, good job there


143
Damn near delusional, championed your numbers, ecstatic
My inners, a cataclysmic wonder, the exterior, autocratic
Your smile was automatic, I'm your pragmatic addict
These arms were emphatic, hold tight to our schematics

Making the first floor shake with passionate displays
Graphic dismay from side chicks made abstinence a stay

/\ this was fucking dope quotable of the battle so far.

How you invaded my cyberspace, resurrecting new insecurities
Finding fault of me in obscurities, questioning what do I fight for
Not knowing there was an entity feeding you impurities.....

As I fall from these heights, the air whistles a song of peace
My body softens to release of pressure from it all, on the concrete...

This was a solid peace right from top to bottom, one gripe I had was how you stalled before rhyming, it almost seemed like a poem in some parts, I love how your able to keep a rhyme scheme without relying on multies, your usage of internals, outweights any flaws in your overall rhyming technique, man this peace was out there, and thats what made it dope

Overall, this should of been longer being a champ match and all, but both battlers did an excellent job here, and if both could leave with the champed, I would try my best to make that happen, but I am going to give this to 143 here, his/her verse was outstanding and consistant through out its entirity, his content outshined cai's in the end, and thats whats its going to come down to.

[miracle]

A single room isnt spacious enough to contain shit your mind battles with.
Try to replace the chain with love and arrange bliss with time's fragile wit.
To be more accurate, you should address life as an art and master it.
Knowledge knocks so gather it and keep your heart immaculate.
Subtracting stints of aggression, add in the oppression.
Static is to be injested into the feeble minded of latter day depression.

^i liked this right here my fav part..i thought your verse was good. we write simialar to eachother.. the vocab could be stronger but w/e i liked it.. it was simple yet worded well. u had a nice flow going thru this n it was a decent read

I could say being in this dwelling, comfort was compelling
But that was the swelling that hid the infection, repelling
Hell I was telling my boy the other day on the ninth floor
How you invaded my cyberspace, resurrecting new insecurities
Finding fault of me in obscurities, questioning what do I fight for
Not knowing there was an entity feeding you impurities.....
The twelfth floor crumbled, the field of dreams with us, bulldozed
Your actions towards me were vile and compressing, fools scold

^my fav part from u, nice use of words.. u had a good read here.. nice metaphore n vocab.. the flow was nice i liked it

i dont ever vote on topicals but from what i read i feel like the dude with the chinese symbols won. i thought it was a little more indeph..

v/ dude with the symbols

[OG Maestro]

On a vote of 3-1...143 is the new SS HW Champion.

Good battle, folks. Keep it up.

Closed.