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    Heretics, There it Ticks (Zygote and Northern Beggar)


    Heretics, There it Ticks
    by Zygote & North

    Powerful Cedar tree growing outwards every year,
    Year through year through the forest canopy no rain falls here.
    Hearing silence before the death blow,
    shifting slowly with a blackened shadow,
    Shadowed temple of el diablo,
    casting darkness over casas blancas del pueblo.
    Blowing breeze, frozen keys, open box yet sorrow, locked,
    Locked away, oppressive yoke cracking heads on hollow rock.
    Rocking back and forth, staring into empty space unavoidably,
    Bleeding, wounded animal, foolish oaf wants its master’s loyalty.
    Loyal dogma, in argument it was a good best friend,
    Friendly fire, before metal springs, automated straw man falls again.
    Again and once more, heretic census gives difficult estimate,
    Matter en masse but can it teach the spirit to lessen it?
    It is less? Or it is more? Judicious sentence is written law,
    Lawful codes, conscious image thought when it withdraws.


    Disposition of decadence, no denizen dare to switch
    Recalling desolate decor of Dickensian period
    Daffodil patch unveil semblance of variance
    Making kings leer in jest,
    Draconian iron fist - fucking civilians
    paupers and principles share Cartesian coordinates
    every story has a plot and every plot has a point to it
    Connect the dots, line the stars, finding one's orifice
    Divine representative - blessed in disguise?
    What's mine is yours, minus ours now the question is y?
    Why ignore this intrinsic - common course of enlight'
    why this sickness of perspectives? Wiccan. Vatican. Vice ..
    surely you'll find a cure in Lucifer - AND Jesus Christ
    Seeking lights through the night requires open view inspection
    And roads to Helldorado's paved with golden good intentions
    should we mention curse and blessing' only works through incentives?
    As fears are firmly fixed in mental gears; the birth of the heretics
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    Re: Heretics, There it Ticks (Zygote and Northern Beggar)

    Recalling desolate decor of Dickensian period
    Daffodil patch unveil semblance of variance
    Making kings leer in jest,
    Draconian iron fist - fucking civilians
    paupers and principles share Cartesian coordinates
    every story has a plot and every plot has a point to it
    Connect the dots, line the stars, finding one's orifice
    Divine representative - blessed in disguise?
    What's mine is yours, minus ours now the question is y?
    Why ignore this intrinsic - common course of enlight'
    why this sickness of perspectives? Wiccan. Vatican. Vice ..
    surely you'll find a cure in Lucifer - AND Jesus Christ
    this passage went hard all day!!!



    dont know who is who but not a bad piece towards the end but it began pretty rough. vocab is def next level and u knew your concept pretty well. the first verse was choppy as far flow goes and organization of the content was all over the place. kind of reminds me of Skyzoo (an NYC artist). The second verse was more so on point with lyricism, vocab and flow. could of ended it a bit tighter but was still decent and got the job done. overall ok piece only because the second verse picked it up. keep at it fellas. some good bars from this collab.

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    Re: Heretics, There it Ticks (Zygote and Northern Beggar)

    choppy in some places but if you spit it right this is beat...wordplay and knowledge there kept me interested through the whole thing. what i like is the discriptive vocab each did they thing but at the end it seamed rush just to limit space only an opinion but i like this no doubt

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