This was sadly enough.. recorded on my 18th birthday. Thought I'd just release it here.
This was sadly enough.. recorded on my 18th birthday. Thought I'd just release it here.
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
I think it started out a little slow. Like you were talking bout stuff that should be deep, but I didn't really know why or what made you wanna talk about it. Like you bring stuff back up at the end and I get the back story, but knowing it right from the point when you first brought it up would've had a better impact imo. The track picks up in emotion as it goes on though. I just think the beginning not having as much makes it slow to grasp on to. Didn't really have my attention til almost half way through.
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okay the beat is cool. a little underproduced but it gives you a chance to say something really matters. the lyrics were okay. my only complaint here is that sometimes i feel like you don't go as hard you possibly can. you settle for lazy rhyming and don't bring out the song. your emotion is good, but you have to work on the way you write music to make it more effective. work on that a little more
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For being old i think this is pretty decent, i can tell you have feels on this. Id like to hear some new stuff.
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of course you already know this is an old song but it was good for what it was, i think the quality should have been a tad bit more clear , there were some parts that i couldn't hear so it drove me off. but nonetheless it's a good piece that you posted. put up some new material!
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