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    Check out this Jam! Feed 4 Feed. Thanks guys!

    Open for collabs and all feedback!


    http://soundcloud.com/k-dangerous/en...ous-prod-death

    [sc]http://soundcloud.com/k-dangerous/ennio-k-dangerous-prod-death[/sc]
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    You've Earned a Custom Title! Ace the Prophet's Avatar
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    Re: Check out this Jam! Feed 4 Feed. Thanks guys!

    I dig your sound, man. Flow is on point. I like the chill delivery but I'm not 100% certain it fits best on this beat. The concept of this song is nice. Set it up well. This was a cool piece, man! Lookin forward to hearing more of you on here!

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    www.pairadyce.com Pair-A-Dyce's Avatar
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    Re: Check out this Jam! Feed 4 Feed. Thanks guys!

    Are you recording standing or sitting?

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    Re: Check out this Jam! Feed 4 Feed. Thanks guys!

    not a bad track. I liked the flow. lyrics were pretty cool as well. the thing that held this track back was the delivery. It sounded like you were reading off of a paper instead of riding the beat. Id add a little more energy and excitement into this and it would make for a better overall track.

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    Re: Check out this Jam! Feed 4 Feed. Thanks guys!

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. Write View Post
    not a bad track. I liked the flow. lyrics were pretty cool as well. the thing that held this track back was the delivery. It sounded like you were reading off of a paper instead of riding the beat. Id add a little more energy and excitement into this and it would make for a better overall track.
    I appreciate the feedback man, thats the thing i have been trying to work on the most.. I want it to sound really chill but not sound disinterested. Just gotta keep at it

    do you have a link i can give feed on?

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    Re: Check out this Jam! Feed 4 Feed. Thanks guys!

    Quote Originally Posted by Pair-A-Dyce View Post
    Are you recording standing or sitting?
    Standing


    do you have a link i can give feed on?

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    Re: Check out this Jam! Feed 4 Feed. Thanks guys!

    Quote Originally Posted by Kdanger View Post
    Standing


    do you have a link i can give feed on?
    I asked because you sounded timid like you were holding back. Try to resonate a bit better and find the balance between just being loud and being heard.

    This was the last track I posted

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...s-(ft-Jeremih)

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