fgee vs. Evolve

[MadMan]

Check ins are Due by Sunday.
Verses Are Due Tuesday.
Votes Are due Thursday.

Topic...

long lasting love

[Evolve]

Uh-OOOHHHH.... Im In... Doing 20... so you can match me... or not... i dont really matter............................................ ......
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[f-gee]

ha ha........this will be ill............dunno about the topic but......i'll see what i can do............................

[Bruklor]

This sha'll be good.

Evolve, edit your first post! Press enter like half way through the periods, just cuz it right now a person has to scroll to see the other side of the thread...


Why do I care? Errr...I'll shut up now, sorry :P

[Evolve]

will drop on Tuesday........................................... ...
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[f-gee]

me too........................../////1///////////////////////////
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[Evolve]

it all started with a few words, thats all it took
i got trapped in her lines, stuck on a baited hook
couldn't wait to look at her detailed size & shape
wanted her inside & out, my eyes are guitly of rape
she can fill me with hate letting no love ecscape
or serve up lust decorated nicely on my plate
our fate was never in question, it came so naturally
no debate if she was equal.. she never came after me
both entered at the same time, we took no causilties
with her by my side, no one could frazzle me
her style was dazziling, it was amazing when she spoke
i mean this, a stroke of genius w/ the feelings she could invoke
no dagger to be cloaged after she stabs to the throat
sharp words to gulp, have to digest the the point of the subject
her speaking in my ear can be compared to rough sex
for years ive peered into fear of being a dumped ex
my heart pumps stress, i guess i just to love her to much
each touch streaks across my front with such a rush
drunk off her fluids, she's my crutch.. im just a lush
fiening for more, pumps thoughts that are so pure
take all her words literaly, so of course ill store
everything she has to give, there is no source for a cure
im addicted, as she is to me.. im what she lives for
for century's its been the way to be, it just feels right
my future is dark until i see her light, she begins to write
i give in, no need to fight... i love her till the very end
this is just a Long Lasting Love.......... between Paper & Pen

[f-gee]

havent got much time to do this.......

as our eyes locked on to each other i was fixated
eyes dried up frozen in time before my pupils dilated
she asked me my name and i felt my face burn up violent
beauty choked my words as vocal chords went silent
murmurs rippled around me as her voice echoed in my head
finally stumbling on words my tongue was activated and i said
'fgee' out loud but it was drowned out by her womanly perfection
surrounded by people sight solely stares at her complexion
i didnt expect to experience love at this stage in life
but why does my heart beat so fast just now every time she hugs the light?

3 years later..............

different room and year but she still floods my mind with thoughts
i try to add her to my equation but it turns up noughts
surely she has noticed the way i look at her by now?
i want to ask her questions on my mind i just dont know how
the most beautiful woman imaginable eats away at my brain
how can i make her mine its driving me insane.....the urge to ask her rises but i always refrain
its coming up to the 14th and i think of ways to make her my valentine
watching her every move ready to react but i see no sign
courage prevails on the next day though money spent on forbidden hope
purposefully i find her on her own.....shes in my scope
i aim a glance towards her and its a direct hit to the eye
i begin to heat up in her presence and hand her my gift but i'm shy
she gracefully accepts with a killer smile and 'thank you'
teenage thoughts are stirred rebounding off cells 'i just want to bang u'
struggling to push the thoughts aside i watch her open the card
her perfect body clings to the dress in which two mamaries starred
this the last day i'll see her as i head off in a new direction
but my mind of mirrors will always remember her reflection

*envelope is put to one side while she looks inside*

Dear Ms Rodgers

Happy valentines day

.....ever since the first day u arrived i have loved u from the heart
every time u walked into the room surging blood would start
beats that can drown out all else but not your beautiful form
u brought day light to my skool days but here comes the storm....
its been 3 years since that day i felt a strange feeling....my guess is love
like u were sent especially for me....a perfect creation from above?

with long lasting love

Fgee

[Evolve]

Nice verse fgee... Let the Voting begin.... Good explanations are appreciated.......................................
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[Conflict]

i'ma hafta to say fgee on this 1
reasons
better wordplay
better vocab
flows were equal
topic's were both done right

so i think it all goes out to fgee... pc

[Conflict]

sorry yo, it ain't lettin me poll vote......
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[tRiLL]

ummm both of uz came hard........fgee u had a better concpet.....but elove had a better vocab flow................i'm a have to vote for elove on this one.....................

i think there should be no crew votes allowed as some people might see this as another dick ryding VOTE

[Evolve]

Uppin 1-0 Me................................................ ................................
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[Evolve]

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[Atetrack define']

im gettin a sudden sense of de-ja vu with this battle,evolve ... illness....again...ill say it again...illness....fgee`s verse was ill as fuck,but i had trouble catching th eflow of th everse,wich was a problem,the idea dna concept was there but evolves was more hard hittin straight up bam,in you rface type of thing nahmean...the concept of everlastin glove between the paper and pen won me over in the end...i related to it more...seeing how im a writer and all...funny that ......................fgee...ive never really been effected by a girl like that so i really cant relate to it...if i twas about gettin gfucked over by a girl then yeah,thats happened plenty of times to me *im too easy* ....haha...psshhhhh...ive just neer felt a longing and sesne of never forgetting a girl like that before,hopefully i will sometime,jus tto experienc eit...but not for a while i hope....my god i hope i dont get a topic like this...itll be something demonic i swear...but naywya...ill verse but ima vote-evolve(reason:i can relate alot more,and felt it came harder and more direct).......

vote -Evolve...

2-0....evolve....

dont noone come in tellin gme this is a crew vote,because it certaintly is not...you read my reasons....