Alphabet
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@Alphabet don't forget about this homie
word, i have a couple other battles i need to write for, haven't forgot.
and sticky this @fresh ....
This bitch is narcissistic as can be, and he’s got a big fucking mouth
I’ll crack two of his ribs and remove em as a gesture so he can truly be full of himself
…………Are you hoping for an album? I peeped the track that you posted
You’re gonna end up one of those^ if you think your record sales’ll get explosive
I’m hungry for this win, but something congruent because I’m thirsty too
So I eat a bowl of alphabet soup and I STILL shit out a better verse than you
Retard, faggot, bitch, HERB… relating to any of these is fucking absurd
And with no strings attached its funny how Alphabet hangs on to every word
Why aren’t you mastering this LLL shit homie? It’s surprising that you’re not
Because you’ve sucked so many dicks that the cream should be rising to the top
The belt is staying with me bitch, I’ma keep this shit from al to hide,
………Because if Bet gets his grubby paws on it, that’s ^ what it’ll end up smelling like
Al's the result of a 20$ dollar night, hes lucky his father hit the sweet spot
Its ironic how this 'bar' resembles him in more than one way, I just took a 'cheap shot'
You've shoveled shit all of your life, so its like I've been shitting for days
But at least you've already acquired the tools you'll need to dig your own grave
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Last edited by Fresh; March 1st, 2014 at 09:48 AM Reason: changed a couple words around
ext til tomorrow. if u don't want to wait take the dq
yeah but i get to edit my verse then.Originally Posted by Alphabet
^^^^ delete that post please
blahhhhhhhh
u never get pussy to smash junior & it's fact u will have a whack future
anyone who want's to give freshadidle are faggots on NC referencing that user
u ain't nice w/ the hands, theres no doubt this kid has shit pride
fag if u try to swing on anything, it's the nuts of every vet you dick ride
i'll toss u off a building, but before teach u how to b a master w/ the crown
so if i push ur talent to the limit, it can join ur corpse i've splattered on the ground
i'm on the road i'm fucking groupies living a lavish life, it's fact i'm nice
if ur on the road..i hope there is on coming traffic and ur wearing all black at night
have u seen this fags pic? no doubt he swings both ways, u can't conceal it bruh..
fresh won't except he's bicep he's very quick to rub lotion on dudes and feel em up
i rob people at gun point, but that isn't something this lame is fearing
when i told fresh to put the metal to his face, he give himself a facial piercing
i key quick u can bet i'm dope, u can change words u still won't get a vote
the only hope u have in winning is to edit in a verse that hush & tettris wrote
i get tossed on flights w/ my entourage hittin bottle service, gettin impared
when ur tossed on a flight..it's by me at break neck speed down a set of stairs
Alpha
Bar 2 decent not bad nothing but a light jab
Bar 3 is decent I have seen similar
Bar 4 is your best bar so far even though it's kind of played
Bar 7 I like the Tetris hush line this ones nice
Bar 8 decent nothing great but decent
Breakdown- 1 nice bar 4 decent jabs nothing really knockout material or eye opening
Vs
Fresh
Bar 3 lol at the alphabet soup line no real punch but funny
Bar 6 for some reason I liked the from al ta hide it was a stretch but decent
Breakdown- did you not want the belt anymore I feel like you didn't try and rushed or gave up.
Vote alpha better jabs
Nothing really
Vs.
Tettris n hush line
Expected more from both fresh had some potential alphabet soup is played 2 death al 2 hid mite of beem something but fell short, alpha didnt need much tettris n hush line won it only good punch
V/alpha
smh @ "nothing really" thats bs.
Fresh
This bitch is narcissistic as can be, and he’s got a big fucking mouth
I’ll crack two of his ribs and remove em as a gesture so he can truly be full of himself
this was a decent hit pretty direct here
…………Are you hoping for an album? I peeped the track that you posted
You’re gonna end up one of those^ if you think your record sales’ll get explosive
wasn't feeling the flip here due to the wording somethings missing the reference didn't make sense
are u hoping for an album? heard ur track u suck and it shows
think your record sales are gonna be explosive ill strap your body to some then ur face will end up in of those(Picture Album I get what u was going for but it just didn't execute properly)
I’m hungry for this win, but something congruent because I’m thirsty too
So I eat a bowl of alphabet soup and I STILL shit out a better verse than you
the reference here is played
Retard, faggot, bitch, HERB… relating to any of these is fucking absurd
And with no strings attached its funny how Alphabet hangs on to every word
decent flip but more statementish
Why aren’t you mastering this LLL shit homie? It’s surprising that you’re not
Because you’ve sucked so many dicks that the cream should be rising to the top
wasn't feeling the reference
The belt is staying with me bitch, I’ma keep this shit from al to hide,
………Because if Bet gets his grubby paws on it, that’s ^ what it’ll end up smelling like
I hate these flips with ^ I just see no creativity in the flip its basic sorry man
Al's the result of a 20$ dollar night, hes lucky his father hit the sweet spot
Its ironic how this 'bar' resembles him in more than one way, I just took a 'cheap shot'
could've worded this better wasn't feeling the setup either
You've shoveled shit all of your life, so its like I've been shitting for days
But at least you've already acquired the tools you'll need to dig your own grave
played
Alphabet
u never get pussy to smash junior & it's fact u will have a whack future
anyone who want's to give freshadidle are faggots on NC referencing that user
don't know decent np tho I guess
u should just die...this kid swallows everything except for his pride
fag if u try to swing on anything, it's the nuts of every vet you dick ride
mild hit
i'll toss u off a building, but before teach u how to b a master w/ the crown
so if i push ur talent to the limit, it can join ur corpse i've splattered on the ground
nice direct hit good flip
i'm on the road i'm fucking groupies living a lavish life, it's fact i'm nice
if ur on the road..i hope there is on coming traffic and ur wearing all black at night
lmao nice flip
have u seen this fags pic? no doubt he swings both ways, u can't conceal it bruh..
fresh won't except he's bicep he's very quick to rub lotion on dudes and feel em up
played wordplay but funny execution lmao
i rob people at gun point, but that isn't something this lame is fearing
when i told fresh to put the metal to his face, he give himself a facial piercing
played
i key quick u can bet i'm dope, u can change words u still won't get a vote
the only hope u have in winning is to edit in a verse that hush & tettris wrote
lol guess a personal???
i get tossed on flights w/ my entourage hittin bottle service, gettin impared
when ur tossed on a flight..it's by me at break neck speed down a set of stairs
ok flip
well damn Fresh whats hurting u is execution and your wording man and being a bit more creative you had a decent opener a couple played lines and just indirect hits some come off as statements also. Alpha was just more creative here had some nice flips just overall better execution. Just Fresh my dude if ur gonna try flips u have to be more creative the ^shit is ok if u have creative wording on it. Gotta work on the nameplays and wordplays too. your focusing too much on the creative side of things I think direct punches and personals are your comfort zone.
V/Alphabet
I’m hungry for this win, but something congruent because I’m thirsty too
So I eat a bowl of alphabet soup and I STILL shit out a better verse than you
played. yet kinda funny
vs
u ain't nice w/ the hands, theres no doubt this kid has shit pride
fag if u try to swing on anything, it's the nuts of every vet you dick ride
i get tossed on flights w/ my entourage hittin bottle service, gettin impared
when ur tossed on a flight..it's by me at break neck speed down a set of stairs
fresh had bars brewing but didn't really land em well. u can tell Alph keyed but still did just enough to get the win here imo. Fresh keep at it son and come back prepped.
voute alphabet
4 - 0 @Alphabet good battle man.
thanks for the input everybody else
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