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    Xtermnation Xtraordinaire Genocide's Avatar
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    Say What You Want.

    https://soundcloud.com/urbangenocide/say-what-you-want
    [sc]https://soundcloud.com/urbangenocide/say-what-you-want[/sc]

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...441/index.html
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...019/index.html


    horrible punch ins on this one. but what you think
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    Re: Say What You Want.

    This is just pure lyrical man. I recognize the beat but I can't quite put my finger on what beat it is.. Is it a Drake beat? I'm probably way off.. ehh it's going to annoy me now lol.

    Anyway you rode this nice man. Impressed me, truthfully. Raw as fuck. The hook is refreshing man it breaks up the verses nicely. Lyrically though was sick man. I'm deffo bumping to this. Overall I'm enjoying this greatly brother. Keep this shit up homie!

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    Re: Say What You Want.

    Your wordplay and verbiage is pretty good. It was something I could nod my head to and I'm pretty picky on talent. The biggest room for improvement on this particular piece is the volume levels and cleanliness. It sounds more like a freestyle type verse except obviously written. Laying the track down is one part, mastering it up is just as important.

    Overall I liked the sound, intensity was good for the song. I dont typically think that using another artist's beat is helpful because I always relate it to the original in this case "Say you will - Kanye West".

    Thanks for the drop and I'll have to hear some of your other stuff.

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    Re: Say What You Want.

    shoot me some links to other tracks man. Ill peek at em

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    Re: Say What You Want.

    bumping joint

    your presence is chilling.. you can really hear the emotion in this shit duke.. you fell off a little near the middle but you picked right back up.. this was sick. "but I don't know what beautiful is" dope. Good joint g
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    Re: Say What You Want.

    intro sounds nice.. sounds like its gonna be epic.. lets see where it goes..

    the effect on the vocal is cool at the begining.. flow is nice.. patterns are nice.. delivery is dope... lyrics are dope as well.. the beat im split on.. i like parts of it.. and others i dont.. i wish it was a bit more prominent too.. the metronome tick/beep sound gets annoying after a while.. i wish it would drop in and out.. takes away.. but ur killin it vocally .. the hook is nice when it comes around again.. im getting a feel for the overall feel here..

    the mix and quality is nice too

    keep droppin.. i dug this for sure.


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